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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2020 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 13 - The Mind Of The Mark

Okay... this form for Justin's checks... is it ACTUALLY the one Justin signed? Justin signed his paycheck so Ethan could get his meds for him. Did Ethan somehow transfer the signature? Practice it? Thus, Forge it? Because I am sure that on the form Justin signed, it didn't have Ethan's bank info on it. So... who filled in the bank info? Not hard to guess... and on top of that... if they are so broke... how is Ethan affording a night of drinks?

Pretentious much? Ethan thought he should go to lunch with Justin and Daphne??? And yet, still managed to show up at a remote location. How exactly does Ethan ALWAYS know where Justin is all the time? I think early on, I might have asked if Mikey was behind it after Ethan showed up at Brian's loft, but clearly that's not the case. Ever since the day Ethan found him during his lunch hour when he was listening to his phone messages, I've been wondering if Ethan has installed a tracker on him. In his phone? In the lining of his messenger bag? Somehow, he has to know where to find Justin all these times.

Ethan is so good at this game... how many times has he done this to others in the past?

Daphne needs to get to Brian! Tell him just what is going on! Daphne is smarter than Justin and she's removed from the situation. Run Daphne Run! Run to Brian!

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

The most important thing you said is: how many times has he done this to others in the past… TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2020 2:32 am Title: Chapter 13 - The Mind Of The Mark

"Our" Justin seems to acknowledge that there is a serious problem here... and he found the strength to admit it, at least partly, with someone he trusts implicitily - Daphne. Hopefully, she can help Justin find his strength again. I'm definitely Team Daphne!

Has Ethan got some sort of tracking App on Justin's phone?

And yes, it's very difficult tp see Justin struggle with his self-esteem, but I am confident you'll help him find his way back. You'd never abandon him! 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2020 2:11 am Title: Chapter 13 - The Mind Of The Mark

Well obviously Ethan is following him or has a wire on him.  LOL  This story has hit a nerve with me, also.  I didn't realize that even though my husband was 17 years older than me, he was a child.  The youngest in his family, lived at home even during his first marriage & pouted and sulked if he didn't get his way.  Of course, it took me a while to understand, but by then I wasn't able to escape.  Yes, I mean escape.  To the world, he was the perfect husband, then father.  What a joke.  But, again the embarrassment, the fear of his wrath and fact that I had been so wrong added to just putting on the happy face.  My mother once said that "we had to be the happiest couple in the world".  I nearly barfed and I thought if only she knew.  It took me a few years after he died to tell my best friend how my life really had been and admitting that when he died, I felt relief and freedom.  I still have gult feelings about that, but I have finally got a life of my own.  Sorry to be rambling, but I guess the story just allowed me to feel the freedom again.  The writing was wonderful as always and I know that Justin will become stronger than Ethan when the time comes. 

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2020 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 13 - The Mind Of The Mark

Get rid of Ethan.

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Working on it... TAG

Reviewer: samcdee Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2020 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 13 - The Mind Of The Mark

Seems Ethan has some kind of gps app on their phones to track Justin. And Justin should tell Luke to no longer deposit his paychecks.  



Author's Response:

*wink* TAG

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