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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2019 2:07 am Title: Chapter 14 - What Perfection Is

Brian has come a long way.  

Reviewer: Wendy Dawn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2019 1:54 am Title: Chapter 1: "The Words Left Unsaid"

An interesting plot for our boys. I enjoyed this story immensely. It kept me on an emotional roller coaster and on the edge of my seat.

Can’t wait to read more from this writer! However I do agree with the completeness of this AU. We are all broken and a tad bit crazy...not everything can be cured, nor does it need to be even in a fictional world. Embracing and celebrating our imperfections should be what drives us not perfection.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2019 12:39 am Title: Chapter 16 - Everything

Wonderful story.  Great ending.  Fantastic writing. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2019 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 13 - To Overcome

It's about time that Brian stepped up to the plate.  I know he can't help what he does, but he's trying.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2018 12:54 am Title: Chapter 12: "Lament"

Yay, Brian might be coming around.  I think he'll be a great dad.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2018 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Lament"

Oh this is getting even better. Such a great story.  Don't know if I mentioned that I love happy endings!!!  Hint, hint LOL

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 9:44 am Title: Chapter 11: "Affect, Effect, Infect"

Wow that was so intense and sadly life for some children today. It must be so difficult to move beyond that abuse and trauma 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 1:21 am Title: Chapter 11: "Affect, Effect, Infect"

I'm thinking the damage was done before Cynthia's father managed to get him away.  It's nice to know that Claire didn't know.  Poor Justin.  What is Jennifer thinking?

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 11: "Affect, Effect, Infect"

Wow, such a powerful chapter.  Never could understand abusing a child, but that goes on way too much.  So well written.  Out came the tissue box.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2018 11:11 am Title: Chapter 10: "My Only Decision"

Oh wow I didn’t expect Brian to jump for joy but omg over reacting already lol chill pill Brian listen to Justin 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2018 6:36 pm Title: Chapter 10: "My Only Decision"

What a difficult chapter.  Tissue time.  Since I have complete faith in you giving us a happy ending, I will endure the toment and pain.  Great writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2018 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 10: "My Only Decision"

This is painful, but Justin is right Brian can't know.  Frankly I think this might even be good for him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2018 1:27 am Title: Chapter 9: "Ch...Ch...Cha...Changes"

Once you hear a child inside you, I don't see how you can do anything but love it.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2018 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 9: "Ch...Ch...Cha...Changes"

Wow it’s becoming real for Justin it will be interesting to see if and when Brian is told his response

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2018 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 9: "Ch...Ch...Cha...Changes"

Great chapter.  Now the drama begins.  Poor Justin, but he is strong and loves Brian so let's hope that is enough.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2018 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Can Never Give"

Jennifer and Daphne aren't playing with a full deck.  I can't wait to find out what Jon tells Justin.  I have an idea but I could be wrong. 

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2018 8:46 am Title: Chapter 8: "What I Can Never Give"

Justin’s pregnant lol the boys are going to get all angsty over this lol

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2018 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Can Never Give"

Okay, Justin is a very intelligent man, he doesn't realize he's pregnant? With the weight gain & vomiting, come on! Brian is going to freak!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2018 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Can Never Give"

Great chapter.  I think we all know where this is going !!!!  Hope they can get thru this ok.  Love this story.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2018 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 8: "What I Can Never Give"

Please don’t leave us hanging like that....I really can’t think of anything else other than that to say. Cliffhangers do me in every time.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 4:26 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Losing It"

Great update.  Hope Brian doesn't freak too badly when he realizes what happened.

Reviewer: Resa13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 4:00 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Losing It"

I adore this story so far. I love a good AU vulnerable Brian story as long as it is as well written as this. Can't wait for the next update! 😁

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 3:03 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Losing It"

Opps!  What will happen when they realize no condom?

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Losing It"

Did you write they didn't notice the lack of protection? Did they do it raw?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 6: "Stronger"

Is there anyway for Brian to get better with Justin's help.  Nice scene!

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