[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 12:24 am Title: Chapter 1: Brian
Poor Melanie. It's already too late. I'd still like to know why they weren't at the funeral.
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2020 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: Brian
Lindsay is beyond pathetic though I wonder since Brian has his place clean who's baby is she actually caring?
What if Brian had multiple partners the night before when they started while Brian watched before he joined in?
So Many Scenarios
Date: Sep 12, 2018 5:31 am Title: Chapter 1: Brian
So Lindsay's true self is coming to light. Anyone surprised? Sneaking into the loft while Brian was out of town and steal his sperm is despicable.
Yeah Mel, get out while you can. Brian, change the damn locks already.
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2018 1:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Brian
I like the way this is going. Sorry we won't have Deb and Vic, but that's life.
Date: Sep 11, 2018 3:21 am Title: Chapter 1: Brian
Great first chapter. Glad it posted. Moving on to chapter 2.
Date: Sep 11, 2018 2:31 am Title: Chapter 1: Brian
I find this a bit light on plot, I like little more plot in my stories. :-)
Author's Response:
didnt realize my chapter was missing until now and that summary is temporary
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2018 2:04 am Title: Chapter 1: Brian
That was short. haha.
Date: Sep 11, 2018 12:32 am Title: Chapter 1: Brian
Is there suppose to be a chapter here?
Author's Response:
The chapter is there now
Date: Sep 10, 2018 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: Brian
There is no chapter here. Just your info
Author's Response:
The chapter is there now.