[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2019 5:15 am Title: Chapter 9 ~ Do You Want To Know A Secret?
Mr. and Mrs. Asshole Peterson... strikes again! There's hope for you yet. UH, Nancy... just because she likes men... "HOPE"... is not part of the vocabulary that describes Lindsay. The sanity ship has sailed on that one... same as Michael.
I do feel bad for Melanie... I wonder why she wasn't following doctor's orders? If you are ill, and go to the doctor... why not follow his orders? It totally defeats going in the first place.
Michael is such a HUGE idiot! Can I say, I ALMOST hope he goes back to his cell crying and whining? He'd be smart to get it through his head Brian DOESN'T WANT HIM!
Daddy's box of penises. Poor Gus... the way he said that simple statement... made it sound like that was perfectly normal. Barring what Debbie's note said... I think Justin will be blushing the next time he sees those women too. Him and Jennifer can see who's the reddest.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: The Peterson's won't be getting the perfect parents award any time soon. They're half of the reason Lindsay is so fucked up! I feel bad for Mel too, she really should have paid attention to her health. Mel's not really so bad in this fic, as she starts to recover from her disabilities. I was laughing my ass off when I wrote about Brian's box of penises, once again Gus it totally adorable... More coming soon, I'm almost done with the chapter tweleve. Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Date: Apr 25, 2019 1:05 am Title: Chapter 9 ~ Do You Want To Know A Secret?
Everything was perfect.
Lindsay's parents, blind to her wants as. Lindsay was blind to Brian's. Michael, I can't believe he's that stupid. I mean I can, but really. Reality bites him in the ass and he doesn't even feel it.
Gus and the cats playing so adorable. Drawer of penises and anal beads. Boys just wanna have fun.
The serious talk over with it's time to celebrated. I don't think Justin's innocence is going to last too long.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, Lindsay and Michael are both in denial and lost in their delusions. Thankfully they're both all locked down, right where they belong. Gus playing with the kittens, and Jennifer's reaction is hysterical. Poor Jen, her baby is all grown up with a new treasure chest full of toys. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Apr 20, 2019 9:05 am Title: Chapter 9 ~ Do You Want To Know A Secret?
Excellent, especially the last sentence and these:
“So, you’re into bigamy now, but not a three-way?”
“It was in daddy’s box of penises.”
I'm surprised Jennifer didn't react more hearing Gus saying that; because it's obviously not the first time he sees it.
I feel bad for Melanie; I hope she won't have too serious impacts on her health.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, Justin doesn't have a problem asking for what he wants, even if he is shy. Poor Jen, she's not used to thinking of her son as a sexual person, especially a gay one. Daddy's box of penises, ha,ha, ah... Kids have a way of finding things even if they're hidden under the bed, yet still clueless to the embarrassed reaction of the adults. Even with all of Mel's flaws, you can't help feeling sorry for her. Later Darling ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2019 1:59 am Title: Chapter 9 ~ Do You Want To Know A Secret?
Kathleen,
Great writing as always. I love this story. Gus finding and using Brian's toys reminds me of something my grandchildren did once to their mother. It will be funny if Jen blushes the next time she sees the boys.
~Lorie
Author's Response: Thanks! It is hysterical that Gus found Brian's toy box. Oh My God! Your poor daughter. I don't know what is worse, the embarrassment, or tying to explain why they're not children's toys... Ha, ha, ha... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2019 12:02 am Title: Chapter 9 ~ Do You Want To Know A Secret?
Great chapter. I love a happy Brian and Justin. Wonderful writing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm all about the love between Brian and Justin too! Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2019 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Do You Want To Know A Secret?
Gus using Brian's toys to play with his kitties is Hilarious!
Gus asking Justin to marry him too had me going Awww! That is one adorable kid Brian and Justin have.
Lindsay still thinks she has a chance to keep Brian, Gus and the money in her life too bad she forgot that once you get in Brian's bad side, you stay on Brian's bad side for Infinity and Beyond! (Yep had to do the Toy Story reference lol), she has a much of a chance of Brian forgiving her as Michael does of staying out of prison.
I feel bad for Mel she neglected her health to cater to Lindsay and hating Brian for one night of Bleh that makes him cringe in remembrance and celebrate that dick will always be his favorite choice, but in a way because Mel always wish that Brian would die that this stroke is a karmic payback and second chance to change her ways.
Jennifer is going to get quite an education about having a gay son/sons and Deb is about to learn what it truly means to be happy and pleased with her life.
Michael and Lindsay are seriously about to learn what life without Brian is like.
Thanks for the Update 😃
Author's Response: Jennifer's reaction to Gus's choice of toy's is priceless. You can't help thinking Gus is so sweet and adorable, asking Justin to marry him too. Lindsay's mind just keeps bouncing between manipulations, and delusions, proving her crazy and unstable. You're right about crossing Brian, he has a mind like an elephant, he never forgets, or forgives. Mel could never see that Lindsay was the one who used Brian to make her insecurity surface, and fester. You're right karma a bitch! I think Jen's still blushing, unable to stop her imagine of Brian pleasuring her son with all those toys. Debbie's free of her infantile son, and ready to start a relationship with Carl. Love is in the air... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2019 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Do You Want To Know A Secret?
Secrets don't stay secrets long do they? What will Brian say once he finds out that the kitties were playing with his toys.
Author's Response: "Secrets don't stay secrets long do they?" Especially with this family, between Debbie and Emmett the gossip is sure to circulate around the Avenue. I can imagine Brian will be a little disturbed about Gus finding his toy box, but he'll also see the humor in the situation. Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen