Date: Jan 17, 2019 6:32 pm Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos
Love it
Author's Response: Thanks so much! ~ Hugs Kathleen
Date: Dec 01, 2018 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos
Oh For Crying Outloud! I was folding towels, and it just hit me that Lindsay told Michael, "I returned to Pittsburgh, so Brian and I could have another baby!” Did the hospital check her blood work, or did Lindsay tell them she is, while her delusional mind's playing, 'Wishful Thinking'?
You better hurry with the next chapter, pretty please, to save my sanity!
Evil Kathleen has struck again!
Cathy
Author's Response: Hmmm... Is she, or isn't she pregnant? That is the question, and who could the father be??? I'm pretty sure Brian going to pray for wishful thinking... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Dec 01, 2018 6:17 pm Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos
I've had a recovery period of five minutes, so maybe I'm coherent enough to write a review. You sure write crazy well. (that's a compliment in the greatest form.) Michael and Lindsay have left me speechless, in the aftermath of what Brian walked into, in the hospital, and had to hear. I usually have to pick my jaw up off the floor in regards to certain sex scenes, which yours qualifies for, but I never expected to have to do it, in regards to reading about delusional, manical nutcases.
I reread CH 4 before I read this, and I'm happy I did. It didn't have me feeling any sympathy towards Mel's plight, at all. But, on the flip side, had me feeling all sorts of pain for Brian. To go from that glorious vacation in Italy, home to the madness he did, well, I'm very happy he has Justin, along with Ted, Emmett, Daphne, and Gus, to help keep him sane. I fervently pray, Brian lets all of them handle all of this on their own. He doesn't need their shit, or the stress in his life. He has Justin and Gus at home; just let him enjoy his life for now. I'm assuming he will take care of Debbie and her house, anyway. Maybe Brian needs to move Debbie into a nice one-bedroom apartment.
I'm assuming Brian got to either speak with Mel or her doctor. I hope he got to talk to Mel, in order to find out who's the father of Lindsay's baby, although I doubt Mel's aware of Lindsay being pregnant. Sounds like Lindsay's been dipping into the male pool again. When you can't work, one must play. Or, OMG! Did she still have some frozen samples of Brian's? Oh Lord Have Mercy! I long for that to NOT be the case.
Hopefully, since Michael found out it was Daphne that made him shit his pants, and now wants revenge, he won't get out of the loony bin after his 72 hour hold. I have visions of him in a white straitjacket. But in case he does get out, my plea, dear Kathleen, is whatever he plans for her, please let it backfire.
I have to admit I was a little confused during the talk at the diner, as most of the time, I couldn't tell who was speaking.
I want to compliment you on the pictures you post at the end of each chapter. You always manage to find one that totally fits with your last paragraph or two. So, this is me, saying thank-you.
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Author's Response: Sorry Darling, I swear I thought I responded to all the comments from this chapter... Yes, this chapter was jammed packed with all kinds of crazy. It's hard to feel any sympathy for Mel, when most of her problems are self inflected. Brian's going to need another vacation after he gets through dealing with his dysfunctional family. After his stint in the psych ward and weekend jail reservation, Michael may just forget about Daphne, but if he doesn't I'm sure it will smack himself right back in the face. Sorry about the confusion with the dialog in the diner, I'll try and be clearer... So glad you like the pics! I just posting the next chapter... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Date: Dec 01, 2018 7:54 am Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos
Michael knowing what Daphne did is not good for her; he might make a bad decision.
The only good thing is that Gus and Justin are staying with Brian.
Debbie is going to demand Brian that he fixes the mess that happened and I don't see how he could refuse.
Author's Response: Vindictive Michael is sure to be on the warpath, once he figures out what to do. Debbie might want Brian to step back into his provider and protector role. But he's unlikely to be manipulated as easily as before. Brian can lock himself away in the loft with Gus and Justin, finally happy just being with his two boys. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Dec 01, 2018 7:41 am Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos
Read both stories...in one sitting...more, more, more oh how I love it
Author's Response: Squeals! Thanks so much, I'm so glad you're enjoying this fic... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Nov 30, 2018 5:23 pm Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos
So funny.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Darling! Hugs ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2018 5:46 am Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos
Wow. The girls and Michael, now that's a combination. Okay, who is pregnant? Mel or Lindsay? Michael should stay in the loonie bin. Looks like Gus is in good hands and soon Brian will be too. Great job.
Author's Response: Yes, the troubled triplets. Debbie has her hands full, or maybe your right. Michael and Lindsay might need an extended stay at the psych ward. Now that Brian has Gus with him, he's not apt to let him go back to the girls. Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Date: Nov 30, 2018 12:58 am Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos
Great update. I love when the crazies act up and they were really at it in this chapter. Poor Brian. Hope he stands his ground and makes them clean up their own mess.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, they really are acting crazy. It might take awhile to figure out the right medications. I feel sorry for the nurses in the psych ward. Later Darling ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2018 12:37 am Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos
Justin and Brian so needed the time away to strengthen their connection because the chaos in Pittsburgh sure did escalate.
I can work up an ounce of worry for Mel like Lindsay can work up none I mean it doesn't take a rocket scientist to call 911 for an ambulance <huge eye roll> it is really true Michael and Lindsay can't make a decision without Brian, but they sure can be selfish, self-absorbed idiots without him.
And if Lindsay is pregnant then she can be a slut without Brian's help.
Michael and Lindsay can fight about being Mrs. Brian Kinney but they can't remember a small child, a stove still on or Mel lying unconscious?
MORONS!!!
Nurse Ratchet is going to need medical attention after dealing with those two.
I doubt whatever is going on with Mel will stop her ranting at or about Brian to anyone she can find.
But without a job, a proper place to live and money what chance does she think she has against Brian, his past has nothing to do with how he loves his son, but her actions are up for consideration with a huge magnifying glass.
Hell Mel can't get a job in a law firm anywhere because of her attitude, in court she will be worse because like Michael her mouth has no filter when she is aiming to win.
If Deb were smart she would stay away from Brian but that ain't happen <sighs sadly> like Michael she also has a one track mind which is "Brian Fix It, You Owe me, My Kid, After Al I/We Did For You".
Crap is Siberia Far Enough?
Fantastic Update, Thanks
Author's Response: Yes, it's a good thing Brian now has Justin by his side. Maybe they need to grab Gus, and head back out on vacation again. Self absorbed idiots is right. Now their delusions have landed them in the loony bin, right where they belong. The nurses might need to start self-medicating. Yes, Mel's chances of keeping custody of Gus is slim to none. Your right, no job, no home, and no money won't sway any judge her way. I wonder how the weather is in Siberia this time of year? Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Nov 29, 2018 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos
Kathleen,
So happy to see another chapter of this great story. The weasel and the bitch are delusional. The hospital staff should have fun with them. so happy that Gus and Justin are bonding. A kid couldn't have better parents than those two men. they could use some more hot sex though. Love this story.
~Lorie
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you like it! When the nurses pass out their medication, it will be two for you, one for me. Brian and Justin might have to sound proof Gus's bedroom, so he won't hear all that hot sex you're requesting! Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Nov 29, 2018 9:48 pm Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos
I can't stop laughing. Mel in the hospital, OK more serious than what Ted knows because she passed out before hitting her head. Michael and Lindsay in the psych ward due to arguing about their religions of who Brian is married to or whiom he's going to marry. Lindsay forgetting the oven was on and Deb's house almost burns down. OMFG what else can go wrong? Oh yeah the nurse suggesting Brian be analyzed.
Shame Michael eavesdropped on the conversation at the dinner. I think with all going on he'll forget about getting even with Daphne. Ha! He'll probably be too scared to face her let alone try anything.
I guess Gus has his father's taste in men. Took right to Justin like he's known him forever. Brian lucked out there.
Author's Response: Brian made it out of the psych ward just in time. although he might have liked to ransack the medicine cabinet before he left. Just kidding, now that Gus will be staying with him, he won't have time to indulge in his bad boy behavior. Michael and Lindsay can argue until the end of time, or at least have a long vacation under doctors supervision. They're both going to explode when they find out Brian has already given his heart to Justin. Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Nov 29, 2018 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos
OMG!!! WHAT A CHAPTER!!! First of all, Brian and Justin are just so wonderful to read about. The way their relationship is progressing is just what the doctor ordered amongst the chaos Brian's life has been and is about to become once more. The meeting at the Diner, and the introduction of them as a couple to Em and Daph was simply marvelous! The Tell-a-Queen network is sure to be buzzing with that news! I laughed aloud at Michael's discovery that Daph was the one who punked him. I still laugh hysterically every time I think about that scene. Just freaking PERFECT!!
Now onto the drama with a capital 'D' that occured at Deb's house... Mel really needs to get an attitude check and QUICK! Her whole demeanor makes her an unfit mother, and we won't even talk about the fact that it's apparent that no one wants to work with her. That alone should have her singing a different tune. As for the custody papers, well now, I don't blame Brian one damn bit, especially with how unstable she is acting alongside her 'wife'.
Speaking of which, Lindsay's pregnant?! And she's claiming that Brian is the father?! Oh, my good gravy! The story behind that ought to be good! I wonder if Melanie knows, which could very well explain her attitude towards Lindsay. Or maybe she has yet to find out about Lindsay's extracurricular activities. i mean, she must have had quite a bit of free time being unemployed and all, and I'm sure that Gus' naps would have left plenty of time for Lindsay's 'Maintenance Man' to come through. The only other possibility I can think of is that it was all planned between Melanie and Lindsay to get more money from Brian, and whereas it's certainly viable considering their financial situation right now, I can't see Mel agreeing to it willingly. I can't wait to read more about the backlash of BS from this.
As for Michael and Lindsay's meltdown about just who is Mrs. Brian Kinney, I say that the people in the white coats and Nurse Ratchet go ahead and start issuing 'Happy' pills, or better yet a happy shot to their hindparts right now because both are clearly out of their minds! It is amazing to me that even as Melanie is lying crumpled to the floor that they can still somehow find time to argue about who Brian belongs to. Pathetic, imbecilic, uncivilized idiots doesn't even come close to describing how stupid the Wonder Twits really are....SMH Brian's reaction to the nurse's questions and assumptions based on what she was told was EVERYTHING! I laughed aloud at his explosions, knowing good and well that I would have reacted the same exact way. I do wonder though, if he was able to talk/argue with Melanie to at least get a small picture of what led to her current hospital stay. And about Lindsay's pregnancy...if there is one? Here's to hoping that Lindsay is lying, and she's just indulging in some wishful thinking to keep them from medicinally dragging her off her version of Fantasy Island.
Great job, Kathleen! You have me sooooo HOOKED into this story!
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response: Yes, never a dull moment on The Avenue. Emmett has his work cut out for him to spread the word that Brian Kinney's in LOVE! Oh poor Michael, he got punked by a girl. NOT! Even though Mel's not with them in the loony bin, she might need some psych drugs herself. Is Lindsay pregnant? Or is she just delusional, okay we know she's delusional. But if she is pregnant who's the father? So many questions... Yes, no need to concern themselves with Mel laying on the floor. It's much more important that they continue the never ending argument of who's Mrs. Brian Kinney. I think the best thing Brian can do is slowly back out of the room and run like hell... I'm so glad you're enjoying this one. Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen