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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2018 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 3 ~ Change is Good

I think if Mel tries to sweet talk Ted into giving her money she will be quite surprised by his answer.

Ted sees Mel for what she us and he is not going to be her tool to bleed Brian dry.

Brian is giving Melanie her wish he is stepping aside and letting her take care of HER Family.

Whatever trouble they have in Canada Is Their Problem to Solve the support that Brian Legally Doesn't Have To Give them, is for Gus And Only Gus.

Time for Mel to put on her Big Girl Pants and Get A Job along with Lindsay.

Michael doesn't want Deb to order him around then he should bean adult and find his own place instead of watching pornography (Ewwwwwwww!!!) all day and reading his stupid comic books!

Brian and Justin being away from everyone and getting to know one another is just what they need before heading back to Pittsburgh, they will be stronger for the drama heading there way

 

Daphne is scary but everyone finding out that Michael got owned by a petite woman will be Hilarious!!!

Fantastic Update!!! ;)



Author's Response: Mel's showdown with Ted is coming right up. But not to worry Ted stands strong supporting Brian. While Mel has a meltdown, confessing her failure's in Toronto. Brian might have to step in and flex his legal muscles, demanding equal custody, or maybe even full custody considering that the girls can't even support themselves. Michael got punked by a girl! HA! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2018 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 3 ~ Change is Good

Hey Darling! I definitely agree with the title...Change is GOOD, especially when it comes to ignorant people getting EXACTLY what they deserve!

Daphne is an absolute menace in the very BEST of ways! LMAO! She's certainly one of the few chicks I would have loved to hang out with growing up in Brooklyn; she'd fit right in. IF Michael ever finds out he was bested by none other than Justin's best friend, there's going to be no place he'll be able to show his face EVER! Is it wrong for me to beg you to make it so, oh writing Goddess?! LOL

As for Ted....YES!!!!! BRAVO, Baby Boy!!! Poor little Lindsay wasn't expecting to be outclassed and bested by someone she totally believes is beneath her. And he did it so smoothly, too! I won't put it past her to convince Mel to try her luck with him, since they are supposed to be really good friends...or are they? Yes, I picked up on the sarcasm when Ted alluded to all of the times Mel claimed she didn't want or need Brian's money. Well, I'm with Ted...Let the harridan prove it!

Speaking of which, what has the Tyrant Twats of Toronto gotten themselves into that they NEED the support check? That reveal should be interesting to say the least, especially if it's because of something they failed to do or even have to do, like leave Canada. I really do hope they try to push the financial issue with Brian so they will have to justify their reasoning of why they are using Gus' support check for any and everything that is NOT Gus. Oh, hello Skeletons...are you all coming out of the proverbial closet? I mean it is Halloween and all...LOL

And now for Captain Asshole himself....WOW! What a lazy, dysfunctional scuzzbucket! First, I cringe every single time I hear his voice in my head...YIKES! But now the thought that he is looking at porn....BTW, I really hope that Debbie took Michael's computer to work with her, after having searched it while he was downstairs in the basement reading his comics. It's funny that he doesn't like to be micromanaged when that's all he's ever tried to do to his friends, and now his own mother. But now that Deb knows the true nature of Michael, I hope she has a lot of fun treating him like he was fourteen in age, instead of just in his mindset. Having him move into the basement, and systematically curbing his 'freedom' should make him see the advantages of being an ADULT at long last. However, I have a bet going with myself that as always, he'll probably just see it as his due for being born. For some reason I just thought of "Flowers in the Attic", so I suppose I suppose Michael's story could be called "Crabgrass in the Cellar" or should that be Crab Ass. I don't know, but I shall have loads of fun reading what happens NEXT!  

Brian and Justin are just sweetness and hotness personified! I'm so glad that Brian is not answering his phone at all, and that they are really taking the time to get to know each other without the pressures of everyone else. I think they will need to be on a solid foundation with each other by the time they return to the Pitts. 

Can't wait for MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: Oh Yeah! Michael needs a new nick-name, how about Stinky Novotny? Strike One - Lindsay, Strike Two - Melanie. Yep she waltzed right into Kinnetik ready to demand the support payment, but Teddy stands strong, and she has a meltdown instead. Michael in the basement, Crabgrass in the Cellar! Laughing my ass off! Brian and Justin are falling hopelessly in love, just the way it should be... I finally got my laptop back from the computer hospital. Chapter 4 will be posted this afternoon. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2018 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 3 ~ Change is Good

Great chapter.  So many mini cliffhangers.  I love it.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response: Thanks! Thast's so sweet of you so say! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2018 1:23 pm Title: Chapter 2 ~ Romancing the Blond

Holy Cow! That was one hot, Hot HOT chapter! Did you have to stop for a cold shower in the middle of writing it?

To Brian it’s the greatest present he’s ever received...

First the gratifying shower blowjob. Second, the sensual way Justin came just from nibbling kisses and licks from Brian's tongue. And third, the arousing, erotic sex they had in bed.  I'm so very happy that Ethan hadn't ever spoiled Justin first time. Now, will Brian remember those three little words he said?

And oh, such is a wonderful thing as 'overdraft pritection'. :)

Thanks for this steamy update. Will the Toronto trip happen next? Looking forward to it.

XOXO ~ Cathy



Author's Response: Hot! Hot! Hot! Just the way we like it! We'll have a few more days in Italy, and then to Toronto for a big Surprise! Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Keykoles77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2018 6:07 am Title: Chapter 2 ~ Romancing the Blond

Yay, so good so far! Keep those chapters cummung... I mean coming! Hee hee😍😏👬❤❤



Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Not to worry more coming, and cuming... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2018 2:22 am Title: Chapter 2 ~ Romancing the Blond

You did an excellant job of making Brian romantic while keeping him in character.



Author's Response: It's amazing what he can do when he wants to... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2018 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 2 ~ Romancing the Blond

Just wonderful and oh so hot !!!!!  Love this story.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2018 4:08 pm Title: Chapter 2 ~ Romancing the Blond

 

Kathleen,

This chapter was perfect. They woke up in each other's arms, had a HOT shower, spent a romantic day together while screwing chin-rat over, then made love and fell asleep in each other's arms again. Love this story.

~Lorie

 



Author's Response: Thanks Lorie, The boy's have been having a very romantic vacation so far, and there's so much more to come... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2018 4:01 pm Title: Chapter 2 ~ Romancing the Blond

Ah.... L'amour! So wonderful, fun, intense and emotional. And Brian's silent acknowledgement that he's finally ready for Justin's presence in his life...Splendid job, Darling!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: Squeals! Thanks so much Darling! They really are falling head over-heels in love with each other. Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 8:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ Confession Is Good For The Soul

I hope Ethan won't get away with all the BS he told Justin and all the money he got out of it.



Author's Response: Sorry I missed replying to your comment last week. Not to worry Ethan will get his, everything comes around goes around... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2018 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ Confession Is Good For The Soul

 

Kathleen,

I just loved this first chapter. Brian being supportive and loving to Justin and giving him a chance to let his feelings out safely was beautiful. I cried a lot reading this. Hopefully there will be a lot more very soon. This is an amazing story.

~Lorie

 



Author's Response: In this fic Brian is working on being open when expressing his feelings. He wants to show Justin that he's willing to change, and that he wants more from life than being a playboy. He's ready to settle down now that he's found someone he loves. I'm so glad you're enjoying this fic. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2018 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ Confession Is Good For The Soul

Brian to the rescue.  Love it.



Author's Response: Thanks Darling! ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2018 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ Confession Is Good For The Soul

Ethan needs to be punched in the throat, as does Hobbs! Beyond the physical abuse from the dumb jock, the mental and emotional abuse he suffered at the hands of Ethan, really demands some type of recourse. I know between the two of them, they will probably come up with something.

I love the fact that they are having a  kind of mini-vacation. Hopefully, they find time on the flight back (or to Canada) to establish ground rules tailor-made to them. As for Michael, I still can't wait for him to get his! Mel will probably fight the idea that Michael is a vindictive little runt, but how can she dispute the undeniable truth of Justin's existence. I mean, shouldn't she possibly be able to look up police records OR call and ask one of her contacts in the precinct nearest Brian's loft to verify what she's told. In my opinion, she should have started by questioning just WHY Michael called to 'tattle' and what purpose it would have served for him to do so. But ahh, that's just me, who is naturally suspicious of people's motives.

Great beginning and looking forward to so much MORE!! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: Ethan may need a punch in the throat, or a kick in his ass, but will you settle for a smack in the wallet? Now Hobbs, I'm still working on him. Yes, a mini-vacation sounds nice, and they'll just be hitting to highlights this time. Maybe next time they'll have time for a nice, long relaxing vacation. I'd like to think Mel and Lindsay might be somewhat reasonable in this fic, but Mel of course will still have an attitude, and hold a grudge against Brian. Michael, just like he's always lurking around stirring up trouble, I'll be doing the same for him. So glad you're enjoying it so far... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2018 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ Confession Is Good For The Soul

I enjoyed this chapter immensely. I like this Brian. It was really sweet of Brian to have Justin enjoy his time in Italy making new happier memories. Hopefully all his old memories or the chin rat will desinerate into nothingness.

There's not much Brian can do about the residual effects of the bashing except be there when just needs him. Whether to talk or to listen.

So glad the fiddler got to see just who he was replaced by as his moneytrain walked away from him.



Author's Response: Thanks, so glad you liked it. Brian would like nothing more than to make Justin happy, helping him forgetting all about his past. Or at least be there for him as he works through his insecurities from the bashing, and his abusive relationship. It was nice to let Ethan see that Justin has traded up, after being taken advantage of by him... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2018 6:23 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ Confession Is Good For The Soul

Wow, another great story.  The pictures are beautiful.  Great writing, but it always is. 



Author's Response: Thanks! I had fun finding the pics for this chapter, they're so beautiful... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2018 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ Confession Is Good For The Soul

And so the beginning started. A loving trust. Thank you for filling in the back story of how Brian came to be in Florence and how he knew where Justin was. And I'm so glad he did. It was just what the two of them needed.

The next question is how long will they stay in Italy? Will they be there long enough to do some damage to Ethan's life, or will they leave right away and head to Toronto to deal with Mel and Lindz?

So happy you've stated this sequel. I'm very happy with the start...

XOXO ~ Cathy



Author's Response: After leaving everyone on the cliff, I though it was best to give an update on their backstory. They'll only be in Italy long enough to see the sights.Then they'll be off to Toronto to see Gus, and deal with his mothers... So happy you're enjoying the second part of the sequel... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

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