[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2019 1:05 am Title: Chapter 1
It's great that Brian is willing to help David. Things should improve for him.
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2018 4:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cody Bell being Justin's cousin is a nice surprise and keeps Justin safe from their stupidity.
Brian moving past his first impression of David and David doing the same shows how much growth both of them have done since last seeing each other.
I also like the way Brian, Ted, Drew and Blake are helping David get back on his feet and make a better life for him and Hank, perhaps Justin can paint a mural for his new practice?
Lindsay and Michael are playing childish games with adult consequences that neither one is mature enough to face.
Thanks for the Update, can't wait for the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2018 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a twist. I never expected that. Can't wait for more to find out what happens to Michael and Lindsay.
Date: Oct 05, 2018 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Goody! Another storyline where we, hopefully, get to see those two arrested for their delusions and entitlement issues. Love it!
Thanks
Deb
Date: Oct 05, 2018 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Really nice.
Cody is Justin's undercover FBI cousin who Lindsay and Michael are going to hire to hurt Justin? Are those two really that stupid? Putting a hit out on Justin just because he's married to Brian. Ha! Maybe jail time will smarten them up.
With Brian and Drew backing him, David should be okay. I have a feeling David and Hank kind of became part of the family. Family helps family. Brian offered his and Ted's services. Blake a place to stay. Family.
Date: Oct 05, 2018 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Awesome chapter a little twist with Cody and as per usual Brian likes to quietly help his friends
Date: Oct 05, 2018 9:44 am Title: Chapter 1
SO SO GOOD! I'm proud of the man David has become, even if I'm saddened by the circumstances. It took real courage and character to admit that he was wrong about what he thought of the Brian and Mikey show, and then to seek Brian out to warn him.
As for the rest of them, I really love that they are willing to help David reestablish his life, and that of Hank. It especially shows character growth on Brian's part, who always had an antagonistic relationship with David.
Evil Mickey Mouse and Broom Hilda's days are numbered, and that makes me HAPPY!
Excellent Writing, and I can't wait for the next installment!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 05, 2018 9:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter. Love how you put David in such a different light. Glad to hear you are working on more chapters.
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2018 8:03 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this part finally David is a nice guy and less arrogant. Brian will help him start again. I hope Justin and Cody get Michael and Lindsay paid, they're so mean and jealous.
Date: Oct 05, 2018 7:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh Wow! David's reaction had a tissue out. He has turned out to be a very kind man. I was proud of Brian for offering financial backing for a business. I hope he can really grow and prosper now that he can get settled with his son. Will Justin offer a painting to David?
Nice twist with Cody as the cousin and FBI at that! Well, if Michael and Lindsay are able to go through with it, they will be looking at jail time. But how are they going to get the money to finance this crime?
Thank you so much for this latest installment in this saga. I'm really enjoying it.
XOXO ~ Cathy