Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2018 5:05 pm Title: Chapter 6

It's Ethan Isn't It?

Well whoever it is will pay for using a five-year old to get information.

Blake sneaking into town to be with Ted is what he will need to deal with the Crap heading their way.

Having guards watching everyone's back is smart and might force this stalker out of hiding or make a mistake?

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2018 2:51 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm trying to trust Lindsay, but well...the jury is still out on that one. At least her story corroborated Mel's somewhat so it could be that she's actually telling the whole truth. The fact that Brian is also suspicious of her would make her want to keep her proverbial nose clean, since it would be easy to lump her in with Whiny Wonder and his brand of friendship. I think it's a good move to not only have everyone guarded, but also to keep watch on who they interact with that's not in the usual camp. An employee of Brian and Emmett's makes sense, but it also doesn't because what could have caused them to betray the NDA, except that there was an advance that went unaddressed, or worst yet, unnoticed? Unless, of course, it's an infatuation with Whiny Wonder, and the fact that Brian chose Justin over his heart's desire...

On the flipside of that theory, somehow I think whomever was asking Gus questions might be more interested in Justin. Which brings up the questions of if Justin had a serious past relationship that went south when he began seeing Brian more regularly? Or some crazed fan perhaps that has noticed the secret meetings of the Kinneys over time? Then again, maybe it is a former conquest of Brian's who Idiot Man may have acquired in pre-Justin days, or maybe even the owner of Babylon itself?

So MANY directions this storyline can take with an array of suspects, and I'm looking forward to every twist and turn!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2018 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 6

Yay, another chapter.  My idea about the one who let the cat of the bag only works if the stalker is Justin's.  Love how Ted has everything under control.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2018 11:40 am Title: Chapter 6

I know Brian and Emmett are called, "Dark Angel" and this "guy" at the indoor kids gym, said "his Angel made a mistake", but why do I get a feeling this "guy" was referring to Justin, and not Brian? After all, if this guy was at the kids gym, and that's where Justin was, it makes sense that he was following Justin, and then he asked Gus about Justin. Anyway, what did Gus mean when he said, "He didn't say it to me." Was there another person with this guy? And how close in proximity was this guy to Gus when this guy made that comment? Was he in the tunnel with Gus?

Well, we have a piece of the puzzle. We'll have to wait until you give us more to go on.

XOXO ~ Cathy