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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2019 3:22 pm Title: Chapter 21

Great news about Molly!

I love this part "All over the world people loved the heavy rock Brian and Emmett played, but for Justin, it was the soft lullabies that his husband sang to Gus that got to him.". It's really showing the depth of Justin's love.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2019 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 20

I hope Justin and Brian will discuss more about having another child, just to avoid Justin missing this possibility.

Alex is going to have "fun" with these two mad men.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2019 5:58 am Title: Chapter 21

Oh, thank you, thank you!!!!  I'm sorry I took the route of asking for an update on FB. I'm sure if I would have waited until tomorrow, I wouldn't have needed to do that.

Anyways, you usually update all your stories around the same time, and I was really missing this. I wanted to see how therapy went, and you didn't disappoint. I'm as sure as I can be, that with a little weedling from Alex, both boys will lose it. They already seem to be messing up.

Oh, Jennifer!!!  You are one sneaky little lady. Gotta love her. Oh, please write about Lynette's wedding - or lack of one. Cripes! I'm laughing just picturing it!

Why would Brian say at the end, I think we should find a surrogate, when Justin just told him Molly was going to do it?

Also, I just wrote a one-shot which featured 'Collier?'  Is he the one with the long, dark curly hair? I looked at the DVD to get what exactly what Justin had said to him, but I fast forward it, and missed his name. For some bizarre reason, while reading your story, I've been picturing that trick Ethan cheated with in Harrisburg. Dumby Cathy - I know. Sleazy slimeball!!

HUGE HUGS  ~Cathy  [and thanks for the quick update!]

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2019 4:40 am Title: Chapter 21

Well Collier and Michael really convinced Alex that their obsessions are more  important than their pitiful attempt at a relationship, Alex wasted his breath trying to get Michael to see reality he wants the spotlight and isn't going to enjoy how it shines on him.

Jen is brilliant because by having a benefit the night of the wedding and the guest canceling shows Nancy and Lynette just who is the Queen in Wasp Nest.

Brian, Emmett, Blake and Ben raising money and lots of publicity for a worthy cause and denying Nancy and Lynette the spotlight isn't a Bitch Slap, it is a 'Stomp That Ho' beat down without lifting a finger but leaving them bloody just the same.

Nancy should've learned by now Never Brag If You Can't Back It Up and Be Careful Who You Associate With Because Their Stink Will Cover You For Years To Come.

Brian and Justin having a baby is good news they are leaving the idiots to stew in their own rancid soup while they move forward with their lives.

Thanks for the Update :)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2018 7:49 am Title: Chapter 20

I have to apologize for the delay in reading and reviewing this chapter. I never expected that it would take me a week to get to it. What with Christmas and my attempt at writing, I kind of ran out of time. THEN, when I thought everything had slowed down, I received a 30,000 word story to beta. I started thinking tonight that I had remembered seeing a story update of yours, and sure enough, I found it, and it had been posted for a week. I feel terrible. So sorry about that. ANYWAYS:

This was a really good chapter update. It had a little about everyone, (well except Linds and Mel.)  But, I love the realtionship between B/J, D/E, and T/B.  Brian and Justin are so very happy together. They are unstoppable in their love. The happy day at the beach was a nice break for them. A New Baby? Brian would love a little blue-eyed, curly-haired, little blond daughter. Ooh, I could just see him now.

Emmett should maybe do another article with Leda, in order to stop some of Bellwether's nonsense. Either that, or after a few calls to his editor by different people, making it sound like they would start a rally against their paper, maybe would put a stop to some of it. I'm sure the Ironmen could put up some stink. But, I absolutely adore Drew, for trying to put Emmett's mind at ease, and loving him regardless of his past.

I'm happy for Ted. He wanted Blake, but wasn't sure how to go about letting his interest be known. Thank god Blake took that decision out of his hands.

You Go Alex!!! I can't believe Brian actually called him about Collier and Michael. (Kudos Brian.) I said before, they wouldn't be able to fool him, but it sounds like he already has their number. He also has Nancy and Lynette pegged right. I do believe, they will fall from any social grace, once this is over. You can't fight true WASP's and win.

I think Collier is right about thinking Michael might screw up and say the wrong thing if he is not in his presence. But, I'm more concerned about Brandon getting Michael alone. All Brandon has to do, is promise Michael a place to stay, and I'm afraid Michael will sing like a canary.

Thanks for all your stories. I really enjoy reading them.

HUGS ~ Cathy

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2018 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 20

Please update

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2018 3:28 am Title: Chapter 20

Nancy and Lynette are not going to pushed it thrown off the cliff they will walk off it Happily iitf they think they will finally get the applause and adulation they deserve.

This isn't Social Suicide it is Blessing for every person they have ever hurt to gain another ring higher in the ladder, their frenemies will find in this gossip for a few years, but their real enemies will enjoy hounding and destroying any attempt they make to repair the damage for decades, this scandal won't be easy to cover and their enemies won't let it be <giggles>

Bellwether and Brandon might want to be careful the crowd are fickle and what they crave one minute they loathe another, plus when karma turns her finger on them I hope they enjoy having their lives torn apart for their indiscretions.

Everyone getting away gives them all a chance to talk and figure out their relationships and what they each need to be happy.

A I hope Alex is being paid Very Well cause Michael and Collier might be the reason he officially quits <laughs> one on one is good because they will try to deceive but they will let something slip, just like when they are together and that info will get them both committed hopefully for life ;-) 

Perhaps Collier's parents need a room too?

Thanks for the Update

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2018 4:22 am Title: Chapter 20

Love how we get a look at everyone and what is going on with them.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2018 2:57 am Title: Chapter 20

Really, really great chapter.  Love how the story is moving along.  Hope you have a happy holiday.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2018 2:55 pm Title: Chapter 19

Lindsay would rather play "The Blame Game" then admit she screwed up way before Justin was a blimp on Brian's radar, and that Brian pulling away from her  is because he is tired of being used, like her mother and sister use her.

Brian wants, needs people around him who respect him and respect boundaries, not see his fame as a way to keep the spotlight on them, when they bring nothing to the table but their constant need for attention and greed.

I don't really think Jennifer needs Lindsay to handle Nancy, Lynette or Collier's parents, if she really wants to help then it is welcomed but if she is using this to score points with Brian and avoid Mel then she can sit at home?!

Michael is an idiot who should've ran to Deb who would've got him checked out and had Collier reported which could've got him locked up, now he is stuck with in Collier's abusive delusion and with Alex having to talk to them he will never see a dime.

Dr. Alex Wilder isn't easily persuaded by money or social standing, he will make sure Collier doesn't get any money from his family, while also making his parents see that Collier is way off the deep end with his obsessions and that Michael isn't too far behind.

They will be committed after one session cause neither one will be able to keep to the script once Alex subtly pushes their buttons, just hope it is all on tape for their families and authorities to see?

Perhaps Lindsay should talk to Alex too?

Thanks for the Update :)

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2018 1:31 pm Title: Chapter 19

Did Justin get through to Lindsay?  Will Alex be able to help?  Loving this.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2018 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 19

Justin was way too nice with Lindsay: I hope he won't have to come back.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2018 11:40 am Title: Chapter 19

Wow, great chapter.  Love that Justin protects Brian and now Mikey is stuck with the nut case !!!!!!!!!!!!!  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2018 6:01 am Title: Chapter 19

Well, I think all that went well. Not. Gotta wonder if Lindsay will take to heart everything Justin said to her. She sure is one exasperating, headstrong woman. It's always gotta be someone else's fault with that woman.

Michael sure got himself into an awkward position. What dummy is gonna stay with a person after Collier did to him what he did? He might have felt he didn't have anywhere to go, but after he left Collier, he could have called Debbie and fessed up everything about Collier. She might be angry with him, but she would never stand by and allow Michael to be tied up, whipped, and practically raped. Deb would have made sure he was brought either to a hospital or a police station. Things definitely would have been over for Collier if he had done that. Now he's stuck. How can he manage to get away if he has to live with Collier's parents? I have to wonder if Collier will keep going off the deep end, and keep abusing Michael.  And Kudos for bringing in Alex as his therapist. Alex is smart and won't be easily fooled. Especially when he can observe the two of them together.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

P.S. on a side note, regarding what I asked you to do, hm, hm... I'm doing it myself!!!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2018 2:17 am Title: Chapter 18

Well, the plot is moving along nicely. Drew willing to give Emmett everything he's ever wanted in life, is so awesomely sweet.

Now, Brian asking Justin about babies, goes to show that even if it was something he never thought about, he would be willing if Justin wanted it. And I love the protective quality that Brian has regarding Justin and Gus.

I take it they will be taking Gus with them island shopping, but it sounds like Justin's parents are going to stay behind and deal with the Collier situation. I can't wait to see how Mama Maria reacts to the knowledge her son is still a messed up psychopath. It will be interesting to see how they handle the situation. And speaking of Collier, he's been decidely quiet these last few chapters.

I have to wonder what Justin plans to say to Lindsay. She's mighty stubborn and set in her ways, and already wants to place the blame on Justin. So, hopefully this 'talk'  doesn't take a turn for the worst, because I think Lindsay will be out on her ass. I can also see, if it had to go to court, the judge ruling in Brian's favor, as the danger Lindsay put Gus in, by outing who Gus' father is. She wasn't protecting Gus by doing that.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2018 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 18

Justin would be wasting his time talking to Lindsay she wants the spotlight focused on her which Gus and Justin are standing in her way.

She refuses to see her actions have consequences that could hurt Gus, and avoiding the problem creates bigger problems in the future, Mel and Lindsay need to address the problems in their relationship then decide to move forward together or apart but Gus is not a yo-yo to be passed between them when they get upset or want to hurt the other, Mel is realizing that but Lindsay has yet to grasp that having a child doesn't mean the world caters to your every demand.

Blake and Ted are heading towards Bliss, looks like Ben and Sean are getting ready for their own trip down Orgasmic Highway along with Brian and Justin and hopefully Emmett and Drew lol

Thanks for the Update :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2018 5:12 pm Title: Chapter 18

Blake knows how to get Ted's attention!

Ben is on the way to get some fun with someone worthy and interested in a good way.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2018 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter.  Love how the story is moving along.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2018 3:12 pm Title: Chapter 18

Everyone is finding and enjoying their someone, except for Mel and Linz.  Does that mean only males have soul mates?

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2018 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 17

Wow, a whole chapter of Lindsay playing, "Woe Is Me", and "Let's Blame Justin.  I loved it. I loved her trying to play innocent, and placing blame at Justin's feet. If Lindsay hadn't announced Brian as Gus' father, would Collier have even been at a children's play gym? So, everything leads back to square one - Lindsay.  And if Mel hadnt overheard Lindsay telling Deb, and Nancy had told her, I think Mel and Gus would have been gone. I know Brian kept his rights, but I will have to look back to see if they gave Mel any. Because if Mel left with Gus, she would have had to take him to Brian. I hope Brian plans on taking Gus with them when they leave. I don't think Lindsay's in her right mind, in order to be responsible for a small child.

It will be interesting to see how much time has past, by next chapter. Will Lynette's engagement party take place?

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2018 4:26 pm Title: Chapter 17

Mel and Brian don't let Lindsey get away with her BS. Another great chapter for the amazing story!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2018 11:50 am Title: Chapter 17

Loving where this story is headed. 

 

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2018 3:37 am Title: Chapter 17

Lindsay needs to grow up and stop expecting everyone to cater to her tantrums, Brian's life is not a toy for her to play with when she gets bored.

And Brian doesn't have to include her in his life because after all It Is His Life!

She Get Over Yourself Spoiled Princess!!

Man she sounds like Michael using Justin as an excuse for why the spotlight is no longer on them and Brian isn't sharing his fame and wealth.

Just because she is helping doesn't excuse her actions because her Golden Goose Gus wasn't keeping Brian focused on her.

Mel is doing now what she should've done before she cheated, she is confronting the elephant in the room Lindsay's need for attention in any form and Mel's need to avoid the problem.

Time for Mel and Lindsay to be grown-ups and talk about everything so they can decide to either hold on or let go once and for all.

Gus needs stability not revolving doors.

Thanks for the Update :)

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2018 2:31 am Title: Chapter 17

Lindsay need to see someone about her mood swings.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2018 2:07 am Title: Chapter 17

Oh this is really getting better and better.  Fantastic writing.

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