Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2019 3:53 am Title: Chapter 25

You can't figure crazy just gotta make sure they don't hurt others and themselves while they feed their delusion, Collier and Michael are themselves as some great Love to Brian and Justin but actually they are just annoying pest who need to be squashed quickly.

Ted came up with a good idea to force Michael and Collier to act especially now that Collier is about to be cut off.

Time to fight back with class and dignity while the others scramble to be accepted in the gutter where they belong.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2019 1:43 am Title: Chapter 25

Great Chapter!! The pissants AND Brandon need to be brought up on charges immediately!! That is a classic case of stalking and Brandon should be charged as an accessory. 

Alex was spot on to call Collier's mother to get them to cut off the money. Although I'm not sure how much it will help since he's sharing space with an equally delusional mess of a man. Michael is gullible and greedy by turns so it will be interesting how that plays out. I can't see Michael willingly sharing the apartment rent-free and footing all of the other bills as well. But since they share a common goal, it's not so far-fetched to think that Michael will fall wallet first into financially supporting Collier, especially if it means the latter is promising to remove Justin out of Brian's orbit.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

WRITE ON StarBaby,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2019 5:59 pm Title: Chapter 24

Each chapter without Michael and Collier making an appearance is Lovely even a slight mention doesn't put a damper on the camaraderie everyone is feeling towards one.

Nell and Jen are going to be one strong force to reckon with especially if they can find that Bellweather's life ain't exactly squeaky clean, I just love when people in glass houses throw stones cause it means they have nice shiny windows ready for breaking.

Michael talking to Brandon means he should be in debt for decades which could be fun if he and Collier have a joint account?

Thanks for the Update :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2019 2:33 pm Title: Chapter 24

What a nice way to end a day.  A bonfire on the beach and everyone getting along.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2019 10:58 am Title: Chapter 24

Wonderful chapter.  I love that there is so much happiness in this story.  I know Michael will cause problems, but I think they will be controled.  Great writing,

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2019 5:48 am Title: Chapter 24

I continue to fall in love with this story! Drew's family are some real gems. Everytime I read about Nell, it makes me happy. Justin is right; Jen and Becca are going to love each other. I can't wait to see what they do the Bellweather and the Petersons.

Like Mel, I'm worried about 'The Stupids'. Michael and Collier deserve each other, and neither of them deserves the attention they so obviously crave. If Brandon gets the go-ahead, he should be blackballed within the industry for giving lunatics a platform. Mel should probably accidentally-on-purpose show him the report she has on Collier, or at the very least find a way to stop him. Might a potential lawsuit/ gag order be an option? Either way, Michael certainly shouldn't be discounted because only goodness knows what idiotic stories- be they true or delusional- would have left his mouth to Collier in a bid to seem relevant...SMH What a mess!

Looking forward to more, StarBaby!

HAPPY Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2019 3:11 pm Title: Chapter 23

You just had to have Lindsay have an epiphany, didn't you? Maybe, if we are lucky, she won't be able to pull the whole redemption thing off. She has done some pretty bad crap because of her jealousy and her feelings of entitlement. She did everything and anything to be the Be All, End All. Just picturing her on Brian's arm, so she could be eye candy, gave me shivers. But the fact that she only slept with Sam, was because she wanted to punish Mel for gaining the respect and approval of Brian, is just so very wrong, on so very many levels. In her quest to start being honest with everyone, I have to wonder if she will be upfront with Mel about that. And, will she be upfront about her true feelings for Brian?  Lindsay needs to take the twelve steps of AA, and apply about 4-5 of them in her life if she plans on total redemption. Especially the one about  admitting to another human being the exact nature of our wrongs. Damn  that Craig Taylor for pointing all of that stuff out to Lindsay.  Otherwise, we could have had her gone. Like I said, we can hope she fails at the redemption process. But it sounds like Ron is no better than Nancy or Lynette. Yes, she had some great role models, huh?

Sounds like Brandon is heading for trouble if he is going to chase after Michael and Collier. Bellwether doesn't sound like he's going to fare too well either, if Leda can do an indepth article with Emmett.

Ha!  Leda was desiring Sierra, and yet at the same time, Sierra was desiring Leda. They certainly would make a strikig couple. And it sounds like it will be in the not-to-distant future.

Loving this story. Thanks for the update.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2019 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 23

Lindsay was had to grow up and face her life sooner cause later would've seen her divorced and far away from Gus because Brian and Melanie would've made sure of that.

She has finally opened her eyes to see her parents and sister's way of life doesn't guarantee happiness it just means everyone runs from you faster.

Being honest and dealing with this need for attention could help save her marriage to Melanie and later her friendship with Brian but first she has to show Melanie and Gus that they are the most important people in his life not being popular and getting all the accolades just for being around someone famous.

Brandon must want to be sued because anything he gets from Michael and Collier will be hearsay because neither of them know the full story, maybe he can get a job printing take out menus with Howie?

Thanks for the Update :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2019 5:40 am Title: Chapter 23

Lindsay is no longer on everyone's shit list.  Which means things are going okay for Gus.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2019 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 22

Goodness Star, I'm sitting here crying! Not many know, but both of my sons are on the Spectrum, so I could relate to Drew's family and their interaction with Nell. It's always an adventure, and although hard some days, I wouldn't be who I am today or will become tomorrow and beyond without Joshus and Samuel. So a major Thank you for not only taking a realistic approach, but writing it with compassion.

I think Emmett just gained a family for life!

Lindsay is either going to have get on board with Brian and Justin's plans or get thrown overboard out of their lives. I don't think she's going to be happy, but if she's wise, she'll suck it up and not do anything else to give Mel and Brian pause. Can't wait for MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2019 5:21 pm Title: Chapter 22

Great  chapter.  Love the addition of new characters.  Terrific idea and writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2019 2:53 pm Title: Chapter 22

Love this look at Drew's family, especially Nell.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2019 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 21

Terrific chapter.  Love a happy Brian & Justin and a miserable Mikey !!!!!