Date: Dec 15, 2018 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow, great chapter. Love how all the characters from the series are there, but in different ways. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Dec 15, 2018 7:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
Another enjoyable chapter!
[Report This]Date: Dec 15, 2018 5:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
Well I am all caught up and I Love This Story!!!
So happy that Brian and Justin took the chance to get to know one another, they need to talk before sex happened and now that soon sex will be happening it looks like they are on the right path.
Michael dressing up as an Ass then getting shot in the Ass with paint before getting doused with water is a good start but he deserves so much more.
Deb needs to realize that satisfying Michael's interest could lose her the chance to find wonderful people to add to her life and to think for herself.
Cause Michael wouldn't do the same for her of it meant she would do his bidding.
Michael doesn't have a key to the loft but now Brandon and Justin do? <evil grin>
Ted taking the time to talk to Blake without meaningful outside influence is good they both need to decide what they want for each other.
Like that Brian and Brandon are brothers in this story and protective of each other, they really do have big caring hearts that need to be cherished not abused.
Can't wait to see who is lucky enough to get Brandon's heart?
Thanks for The Update:)
Date: Dec 12, 2018 9:26 am Title: Chapter 7
I was so happy to see an update of this story, and found myself really hoping it featured the GLC party.
It was kind of a touching scene at Jen's when Brandon got there. I'm glad to know Brandon has an awesome person like Jen in his life and on his side. Oh, and I agree with Jen. Tannis and Phillip would be on my list, right after Michael. which was funny to see it was just the three of them getting the paint balls and water balloons thrown at them. I can't figure out why they were allowed to wear costumes, when just an old pair of overalls would have sufficed.
Is Michael really that clueless that he can't figure out Brian might be with Justin? Oh, I really can't wait until Brian and Justin get back to the Pitts, and start hanging around together. Oh, please have them move in together. Everybody on the Avenue will have to come up with another way to react when they see him. Maybe they can start sniffling and act like they're crying. hehehe
HUGS ~ Cathy
Date: Dec 11, 2018 3:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
you can't leave us hanging for too long! that's purely evil!
Date: Dec 11, 2018 3:08 am Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter. Wish I could have been there to shoot paint balls at Mikey. Now that would have been fun. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2018 2:33 am Title: Chapter 7
Glad to see the Michael got what he deserved. Will he get a clue when it's handed to him on a platter?
Date: Dec 11, 2018 2:00 am Title: Chapter 7
Really great chapter. Idk the lightbulb will go on over Mikey’s head.
Date: Dec 09, 2018 1:27 am Title: Chapter 6
Okay, Star. I had fun with this chapter. I loved Brian and Justin honest and open 'talk'. And when it seemed to have to come to a halt, and Brian's, Tell me about you and Molly and your many trips to the Pittsburgh PD, I thought, "Classy, Kinney". Of all the conversational topics out there, he wants to talk about their arrest record? Too funny. And this is after Justin offered to let Brian win 'The Bet'. Brian's Stud persona just took a major hit.
I was a little concerned about Debbie's motives, when she first started thinking that Michael's newest tale wouldn't get Brandon and Brian out of trouble. But, luckily, she started to second-guess her son, and went to Lindsay for the truth, and got an earful from both Lindsay and Brandon. Then Deb suggesting paintball, I laughed my ass off. They really don't want to have him wearing the donkey suit, if that is what they are going to play.
And Star, you had the best ending to a chapter I have ever read. Michael spent the next two days wondering why everyone kept pretending to cock a gun at him and laughing after talking to his mother. Christ, I'm still LMOA!
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Date: Dec 06, 2018 12:42 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh what a terrific chapter. Can't wait for the paint ball fun. Wish I could shoot Mikey with the rest of them.
Date: Dec 05, 2018 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
Excellent! The teasing game started and the kiss was a great promise for more.
I love Lindsay, Mel and Debbie in this story: it's refreshing to have them supporting Brian.
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2018 3:00 pm Title: Chapter 6
How nice that Deb has come around. And how wicked is their plan for Michael. LOL.
Date: Dec 03, 2018 6:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
These are so funny and wicked. Michael already is an ass.
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2018 1:25 am Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait for the party. Looks like Brian might have a chance with Justin. I'm not sure why but I thought Finn was Ted when you first discribed him because that's what I could see. Glad that it turned out to be Blake.
Date: Dec 01, 2018 9:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
I liked this chapter. It also answered a couple questions I voiced in my last review. "How old is Gus?" and "Who is Finn?" And boy-oh-boy, was I happy to learn it's Blake. I always love stories where Ted and Blake, and Emmett and Drew are partners. I love both men, and I believe Blake and Drew make them happy. But, oh my! Is Teddy in for a shock and surprise. I have to wonder how long it's been since Blake has been gone. I would say quite awhile, as it sounds like he has accomplished a lot.
Still looking forward to the GLC party, especially since there's a chance we get to play, 'Pin The Tail On The Donkey'. Besides, what child does not like that game? If one of the kids don't think it first, all Brandon or Lindsay has to do is say, "I wonder if..." in the hearing range of one of the kids, and they'd run with it! Who knows, maybe a live, moving donkey would be a lot more fun, than a stupid paper one on the wall.
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Date: Dec 01, 2018 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter. Can't wait for Mikey to get what he deserves. He is so annoying. Love this story.
Date: Dec 01, 2018 3:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
Blake is back! I always like this guy and he was a great match for Ted.
Brian is surprising with his comments about Ted.
Date: Nov 28, 2018 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
I am normally NOT a Lindsay person, but I almost feel like clapping her on the back. I can hardly wait for Saturday and the party at the GLC. Will Michael go through with it? I suppose he can't complain too loudly, if he thinks it's what will get him some brownie points with Brian. What a devious ploy of Lindsay.
Do we have to worry about Lindsay? Is she upfront about not wanting Justin hurt? Or is what Michael said, true, and Lindsay wants Brian for herself? Just how old IS Gus? Because it sounds like something that just recently occurred, since Michael was able to convince Brian to hold off in his donation for a couple of years.
So, who's Finn? Hadn't heard of him, prior to Justin and Connor showing up at his place.
I hope Justin gives Brian a chance, especially now that they are both in California. Maybe they can establish a friendship, and sort of relationship, before going back to the Pitts, and delusional Michael. And Ted and Emmett need to have a serious heart-to-heart with Debbie about her not-so-innocent widdle boy. And if Debbie won't listen, they need to go and tell Jen EVERYTHING!
Looking forward to more,
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Date: Nov 27, 2018 4:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
Excellent! Lindsay has devious ways to get what she wants and, for once, she acts for everybody's benefit, except Michael's.
Date: Nov 27, 2018 9:06 am Title: Chapter 4
Somehow you managed to make Lindz likeable!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2018 2:42 am Title: Chapter 4
Love Lindsay's idea for Michael. Someone need to tell Deb what is really going on.
Date: Nov 27, 2018 1:42 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh this was good. Can just see Mikey in costume. Love this story.
Date: Nov 20, 2018 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yeah, Daphne is here and in a very feisty mood.
Emmett and Brandon could be a hot couple! As Brian said "they are both tall".
Date: Nov 20, 2018 1:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
I am down on my knees begging for you to drop anything else on your life and focus solely on this story! I mean this is the best thing I have read in a long time! please don't keep me ... sorry, i mean us waiting !!! I have to refresh my anti-michael page, hope will get chapter 4 :D Love and lots of lit kisses
Date: Nov 20, 2018 6:36 am Title: Chapter 3
Kudos goes first to Brian for thinking up this elaborate plan, and second to Ted, to convincingly, tell Michael about it. I can't help but wonder how Brian will react when Michael shows up at Kinnetik, or later at his loft, and makes an embarassing play for him.
Michael just can't leave well enough alone, can he? It was bad enough how he started the rumor the night before, tonight he had to spread it to the wrong people, putting Justin even further into trouble. Maybe Emmett and Ted need to set up an appointment with Justin, and can tell him the truth of what happened, and lend their silent support to Justin.
Daphne, the very best friend of Justin's, needs to sit down with Justin, and have a heartfelt conversation, that only best friends can get by with.
After the last chapter, I did Google, "The pros and cons of the different castration methods." So, just in case our beloved author has plans to let Michael get away with too much, I will send you the most painful one as a suggestion to you. I love the way you can write Michael and Lindsay, and I have to say you can write crack as well as the best of them. I left the latest Plot Bunny, and I think you would be perfect for it. Will a little begging and pleading work?
XOXO ~ Cathy