Date: Jul 12, 2021 3:22 pm Title: He Pays for Their Happy Ending and Time to Say Goodbye
I'm going to miss this. Great story that I will enjoy reading again. Now what was it Michael is paying for to Adrien? I'm assuming that Michael told him he was Brian and that he was with Michael.
So glad you liked it. Not quite that, Michael told Adrian that he and Brian were going to be together someday and set about building up a trousseau fund for their retirement to Provincetown - so was sending Adrian money for that. As he didn't get a chance to cancel the payments before he went to jail and with no access to his account other than by post - which of course won't get there - he's going to be paying until the money runs out. Hehehehehe! Hope that clears that up.
Date: Jul 12, 2021 12:43 am Title: He Pays for Their Happy Ending and Time to Say Goodbye
So, It's over?! This def one of my fave stories of yours!
I got the 'thing' with this one, which I get with some of your stories; I want to race to the end and see the story unfold to conclusion, but the closer I get I realise I want more!
P.S. still a bit lost with some of your ''cryptic' refs/clues in last 2 chapters and would still have liked to know how much time Queen Evil got and how much extra time Idiot Evil got from his 2 other trials! I know what you think, leave something up in the air to draw our own conclusions - meanie!!
So glad you liked it. But...not quite over, I will do a short because of course they have to try and repeal...don't they?
Thank you for your reviews as ever Deb!
Date: Jul 11, 2021 1:31 pm Title: He Pays for Their Happy Ending and Time to Say Goodbye
I loved it so much Miss M. Going somewhere safer and where they could be just them. I like. ðŸ¥° >>>Cat
Thank you kindly Cat, loved writing it and getting the kind reviews. A short fic will follow later in the year, the gruesome twosome have to appeal don't they?
Date: Jul 11, 2021 10:08 am Title: He Pays for Their Happy Ending and Time to Say Goodbye
Wow! First I have to say how lucky I am I checked this out a short time ago, so I found this one too!
Everybody sounds like they're happy and in love! And the boys will keep getting money from Michael's payents it sounds like.
This was an amazing sequel.
Thank you for the stories!
Aww thank you Cathy, so glad you liked it.
Date: Jul 11, 2021 8:50 am Title: The Muzzalation of the Muckrakers
I went searching today through the 'Most Recent' and found this! I hate not getting updates in my email, as I miss so much!
Anyway, Mikey sounds like he's going to be living in a world of hurt for many, many years. It's too bad he can't go back and relive his life - NOT! Where would that fun be? You'd think he'd just want to sit back and be QUIET, trying to make those 25 years go by peaceful. But not MIKEY!!!
Nancy also sounds like she's gone to Hell too. Poor, poor bitch!
Date: Jun 29, 2021 5:00 pm Title: The Muzzalation of the Muckrakers
Very good. Now Slick is really going to make his life miserable!!
Not sure about the 'P-Town' reference, did I miss something?
Also not metioned in this chapter is what sentence Nancy got? I know she took the deal of 6 years for the abuse, but what about the attempted murder and breaking and entering?
Looking forward to next chapter. Looks like it's nearing the end.
Date: Jun 01, 2021 8:12 pm Title: Why He Decided to be a Villain Instead
Oh thank you, almighty writer! I asked for a hard sentence, and you delivered in spades.
I have to wonder if you get to giggling when you're writing the evil that spews from Mikey's mouth, because I know I do while reading it!
This was so good. And the fact that everybody that mattered was out of the courtrooom so he couldn't shout anythng at them, was just icing on the whole sentencing!
Date: May 18, 2021 6:36 pm Title: Thunderbolts
Touché! When I realized they were going to hear video - I was so positive that Mikey would admit he wanted to kill Brian because Brian didn't love him and loved the Boy Wonder. I almost had it right. And dancing around -
GUILTY - GUILTY - GUILTY...
Please have a stiff, hard sentence planned!