[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2019 8:51 pm Title: Being Taught a Lesson...David and Being Played...Michael
Thankyou for the reminder. I get it. :)
So What is Micheal & Lindsay upto...as usual no good. Still behave like he owes anything. Yupp! they are so gonna their nut head slapped. AND Yes Do the DNA test Mikey (I believe Lindsay lied again, cocked ugly with David maybe).
Bubba's arm awaiting for these fools Not before Micheal & Lindsay get a kick of a lifetime from Slick and Justin.
I just remember chapter 1 , that's why Brian wanted Justin to pinch him. right?
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2019 8:15 pm Title: Being Taught a Lesson...David and Being Played...Michael
Wonderful chapter!
Fan of David & Micheal getting smackdowns, them having shit fits.
Micheal is really not a father material. I mean I like Jenny But Mel actually have a child with Man-child. In Show as Micheal always depends on others to hold his pinky finger and help him. Truth is Reality is Bigger than Comic books Micheal. Grow up!
Thats smart of Slick and Lindon. Lets see who cause whom misery Mikey, take your responsibility , lol.
"....Baggie eat, I mean meet Micheal" 😠lol Brian should just sic Baggie & Ballo at Micheal and give Micheal a running of his guilty life.
Author's Response:
Hiya, thanks for the review, but I forgot to correct the end before I posted it, so you might want to read the end again for the next chapter to make sense.
MissMerlot.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2019 5:44 pm Title: Being Taught a Lesson...David and Being Played...Michael
Slick and Lindon are about to play Who's the Real Father and of course need Lindsay in attendance so she can do her guppy impression while trying to figure out who Hit It, Quit It and Forgot It Existed (Again) while her face turns redder.
David should really stop acting like everyone wants him around and just accept that he is tolerated Barely and his stock is sinking every second.
Nancy on his arm isn't going to be a Wow it is going to be Kerplunk lol
Michael thinking Matthias wants him is about as funny as him not going back to prison why would anyone want dirt when they can have a seven course meal every night and it never gets stale?
Michael not caring or wanting to be around Jenny is not surprising he got bored because his toy broke through the box and found a better class of people to be around who actually care about her, plus she can't help him get to Brian so she is of no further use to him.
Can see why he and Lindsay are friends they not only share the same brain but the same icy dead heart when it comes to their children.
Karma has already served them twice the third time comes with champagne, fireworks and it looks like company too. ;)
Author's Response:
Hiya, thanks for the review, but I forgot to correct the end before I posted it, so you might want to read the end again for the next chapter to make sense.
MissMerlot.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2019 4:38 pm Title: Being Taught a Lesson...David and Being Played...Michael
Hmmm, I thought Michael was not her father?
Author's Response:
Hiya, thanks for the review, but I forgot to correct the end before I posted it, so you might want to read the end again for the next chapter to make sense.
And he's not her father...but he doesn't know thst.
MissMerlot.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2019 3:26 pm Title: Being Taught a Lesson...David and Being Played...Michael
Ha ha ha, David and George! Hilarious!
As Brian thought: "What the hell are they working on?".
Author's Response:
Hiya, thanks for the review, but I forgot to correct the end before I posted it, so you might want to read the end again for the next chapter to make sense.
MissMerlot.
Date: Mar 05, 2019 1:30 pm Title: Being Taught a Lesson...David and Being Played...Michael
Cliffhanger. Love them. Makes the wait for another chapter even more interesting. Terrific writing.
Author's Response:
Hiya, thanks for the review, but I forgot to correct the end before I posted it, so you might want to read the end again for the next chapter to make sense.
MissMerlot.