[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2019 8:48 pm Title: Final Judgement
Excellent idea to get Vic to enlighten and "pre-heat" Michael!
Date: Oct 07, 2019 8:35 pm Title: Final Judgement
pleeeeeeease let us see how asshole novotny gets to watch everyone living happily without him and get to read his empty brain's commentary!!! hope you got my point coz dunno if i explained myself the right way lol
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2019 6:00 pm Title: Final Judgement
Wow, Michael Is Finally In Hell Where He Belongs!!
He got exactly what he deserved for the pain he caused so many for his selfish actions that always bordered on cruelty when anyone fought back.
Hopefully Craig is enjoying his time in Hell and Lindsay will enjoy her time there as well because no way is she going to change.
Michael should be pleased to watch everyone else live their lives Happily where he pays for his sins over and over again.
Deb will grieve and then she will mend with time, patience, understanding and love from her family her heart will heal.
yes Thank Goodness Jenny takes after Melanie and Ben.
Brian will be okay too he has Justin and Justin has him to help through the dark days.
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2019 12:59 pm Title: Final Judgement
A very good look at what happens if you die in disgrace. Serves Michael right.
Date: Oct 07, 2019 8:19 am Title: Final Judgement
Oh yes! The best punishment for Mikey. Woo hoo!
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2019 11:43 pm Title: Speaking...Part 4
Wow, wasn't expecting that, but it is perfect. Never was a favorite character of mine. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2019 9:44 am Title: Speaking...Part 4
WOW! Just WOW!
I have been waiting for one of my fave authors to kill Michael for ages! Kudos to you!
This was great, although it would be better if he suffered a bit instead of dying instantly. LOL.
Do we get an account of someone who actually saw it (maybe B/J), rather than a second hand account? Also poor Deb.
Thanks for great chapter,
Deb L.
Date: Sep 27, 2019 3:38 am Title: Speaking...Part 4
Oh. My. God.
I'm not too shocked in fanfiction any longer, but that shocked me big time.
I can just picture Uncle Vic sitting in front of sparlking pearly gates, just sitting and waiting there as Michael arrives up top, I can see it so clearly. Michael steps out of the elevator that seems to be hanging in the air among the clouds.
Vic grimaces: Michael what the hell happened to you?
Michael: Nothing, it was that fat asses fault, he did this to me. But I get the last laugh because at least I'm in Heaven and he still is having to trudge along down there.
Vic shook his head back and forth.
Vic: You're not gettig into Heaven, this is just the Pearly Gates, this is where you will be Judged and then sent on to where you have to spend eternity. And from what I heard no one who has killed in anger has ever made it passed these gates
Michael smiles: God will understand that I did everything for love, for my love of Brian, you'll see. God knows all and sees all, he'll know and understand.
Loud Voice: Michael Charles Novotny you have been judged and it has been found that you will spend eternity in HELL!!
Michael starts to sputter and yell: No, you can't be serious, God knows why I did everything, God has to see I did it for love!!
Loud Voice: It has been determined that you do not love, you covet, you obsess, you hate. Again HELL!!
Michael started to sputter but no one knew what he had to say he suddenly flew back into the elevator he just came out of, the door closed and it dropped at an amazing rate of speed.
Vic shook his head back and forth and turned to head back through the glittering, sparkly gates
"You never understood what love was Michael, never."
The End, lol
Can't wait to see what you have in store for Vampira, what ever it is she deserves it.
Thank you for sharing your words with us.
bec
Author's Response:
Dear Bec, thank you so much for the review and the kind words. And more importantly thank you for saying yes to me! I hope you like what I've done with it!
Happy reading!
Nicole (MissMerlot)
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2019 1:47 am Title: Speaking...Part 4
So Michael bought the bullet? Wow.
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2019 8:33 pm Title: Speaking...Part 4
Whoa, that's unexpected! The death row "residents" should be so lucky: they are avoiding a serious noisy cohabitation.
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2019 7:29 pm Title: Speaking...Part 4
Micheal was over his head. He got Justice, he deserved. Will Lindsay back down? whatever Vance & her is brewing in their delusions for revenge. A waiting game now.
Immpresive written. Curious to read More. ThankYou for the updates. :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2019 6:16 pm Title: Speaking...Part 4
Holy ShitBalls!!!
They Are All Finally Free of one Michael Charles Novotny!
May he enjoy roasting in Hell cause Heaven wouldn't have him on a bet.
Next to pay are Lindsay and Vance.I
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2019 5:10 pm Title: Speaking...Part 4
Woah!!! Amazing chapter! Michael finally got what he deserved. Will Lindsay be next? You really know how to keep us on the edge of our seats!
Love the conversation between Hunter and Deb, too. He probably felt a bit unsure of her reaction, but she was Grandma all the way.
Hope to start reviewing more. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Deb
[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2019 8:06 pm Title: Speaking...Part 3
Read both updates. They were great. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2019 3:58 am Title: Speaking...Part 3
Shame Justin wasn't able to get it all. Poor Michael thinking he and Brian were going to be together.
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2019 3:35 am Title: Speaking...Part 2
Lindsay is so delusional. Love how Justin's mind works.
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2019 6:00 am Title: Speaking...Part 3
Wonderful! I love how Justin, Brian Zee and others are tasting recipe & talking inbetween.
what's with Justin Birth certificate. why craig has it.
Nancy and Lindsay being DELUSIONAL, thinking they could bend them on their will. Her case needs to be open & unshut to all.
Smart move Justin. Lindsay will pay, this way or that way, so her mother for their idiotic rumors. Needs to be Shut their stinky mouth. Counting on Zee and Justin.
Micheal is just gone way over his head.
ThankYou for update. Hugs:)
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2019 3:56 am Title: Speaking...Part 2
Hell no. Idiot Gardener should better know rather believing shits Lindsay spouting. All she needed a 4-padded walls around her.
[Report This]Date: Sep 12, 2019 8:41 pm Title: Speaking...Part 2
Lindsay and her daydreams! I almost pity Gadner.
She will be less chirpy when she will see what she will need to give back.
[Report This]Date: Sep 12, 2019 5:56 pm Title: Speaking...Part 3
Perhaps Tom should recoup the money Nancy was giving Marvel over the years why should she get to continue to live like a Queen with her Lover on his dime? I(I wonder if Lynette would like to get her money back too?)
Gardner is going to lose what little he has left cause Lindsay will drain him dry like she tried to do to Brian and Melanie.
Michael makes my head hurt he needs to face reality
[Report This]Date: Sep 12, 2019 5:40 pm Title: Speaking...Part 2
Lindsay is so Delusional she wil!look so fashionable in a straitjacket with her hair all wild and her eyes bugging out.
Was Brian drunk when he said that?
So Lindsay will have to pay back that support huh I do believe she borrowed and siphoned a lot from Gus's support account that didn't go to Gus.
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2019 12:19 am Title: Speaking
Great chapter. At least Craig is gone. Never did like him. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2019 6:32 am Title: Speaking
Good point as why Craig was suddenly here. That nasty warden being put in his place & out. Even Craig is dead, there still Vance and stuff they stored to cause trouble for Justin & Brian. What are there plans? Is there someone else involve too.
Its good Michel is already in jail. so want to punch day/night out of him.
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2019 5:18 pm Title: Speaking
Craig died the way he lived full of Hate!
Everyone being out of town will drive Vance and Lindsay crazy hopefully it will also help to reveal their hand too.
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2019 5:15 pm Title: Speaking
The thought of Michael and Brian in the same bed is pretty disturbing.
Craig dead won't be a relief for Justin yet; I guess he will have to deal with some "legal" stuff and it might shed a light on some dark areas.