[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2019 3:39 pm Title: Reason for the Ad-Vancing and More S-Luthering
Great update. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2019 1:07 pm Title: Reason for the Ad-Vancing and More S-Luthering
Love seeing another chapter. You write fantastic tales.
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2019 2:13 pm Title: Smooches
So Brutus and Shorty are now a couple?
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2019 7:57 am Title: Smooches
They have a problem.... and we have curiousity. Wonderful update. Hugs :)
Date: May 28, 2019 5:19 pm Title: Smooches
Great update. Really getting more interesting. Terrific writing.
Date: May 28, 2019 3:56 pm Title: Smooches
Shorty and Brutus may have some fun later on with the bratwurst!
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2019 3:41 pm Title: Smooches
My My My things are sure getting interesting and steamy!
Faal is right When Do They All Get A Break From This Craziness??
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2019 7:23 pm Title: Listening, Tonsuring and Almost Getting Away with It!!
Such a wonderful chapter. Lindsay back off. Justin is much Much better wasp, sting hard & sudden. She needs to get out of her Delusional Peter Trance. But her Inner Banshee screaming is welcome to read.
Those photos does helps. So much suspense.... hugs:)â¤
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2019 5:27 pm Title: Listening, Tonsuring and Almost Getting Away with It!!
The first scene with the phone call with Brian is hilarious! I imagine Lindsay hearing, then seeing what was actually happening.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2019 5:00 pm Title: Listening, Tonsuring and Almost Getting Away with It!!
Great update. Love when Mikey is in more trouble and loony Lindsay in her delusions. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2019 4:58 pm Title: Listening, Tonsuring and Almost Getting Away with It!!
Lindsay listening to Justin get Brian off is all kinds of Creepy and so Michael that it makes my skin crawl.
She really can't see that her actions are once again setting herself up for a fall that she will not recover from this time because there is no Michael to cushion her fall.
Now would Gardner Vance be stupid enough to go after Mayor Brian Taylor-Kinney with Lindsay's help?
I swear if he is that stupid then he deserves to go back to prison and never get out just like Lindsay who is more concerned with getting Brian then asking about Gus or Jenny smh
What plans do See and Faal have for Lindsay and will get humiliation be more public than it was before? lol
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2019 3:07 pm Title: Listening, Tonsuring and Almost Getting Away with It!!
Lots of questions, can't wait for the answers.
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2019 7:37 pm Title: How Many Faces Do You Have
Oh, Wendy should realize that Peter gone 8 years ago when Tinker bell came in his life. Always good to read Lindsay foaming/fuming out her mouth. Smackdowns awaits ahead, right?!
ThankYou for updates. Hugs:)â¤
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2019 4:51 pm Title: How Many Faces Do You Have
Wendy might want to remember that her Peter is dead just like her dreams of grandeur and she will be dealing with Brian Aiden Taylor-Kinney who is not in the mood to play her childish games.
Michael will never get out of prison under his own steam again he wasted his opportunity to flee chasing his childish wish and now he really has lost his Freedom Forever.
Jim Stockwell is dead and Gardner Vance has nothing looks like they are getting their Just Desserts.
The best revenge Zee, Faal, Brian and Justin can do is living their best lives and letting their enemies crush themselves with a little help of course ;)
Luther probably does want forgiveness but he has to earn it with each of his children because his need for control harmed them all.
Lindsay was so focused on Brian she never even asked about Gus and Jenny that narrow-mindedness will always be he downfall.
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2019 4:31 pm Title: How Many Faces Do You Have
Mikey and Lindsay won't know what hit them.
Date: May 07, 2019 3:45 pm Title: How Many Faces Do You Have
I imagine how Lindsay had a rough time admitting that Justin was back to Britin for good.
Another evil cliffhanger! Is it really Brian or is it Justin deciding to stop her on her tracks.
Date: May 07, 2019 3:16 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire
I'm lost: at the beginning of the chapter, Luther is with Zaden in the Brohouse and at the end, he is in the Ward C of the prison's hospital.
Is Jones really dead or is it a trick to get Michael to confess and drop the act?
Author's Response:
Hiya,
Yes Luther was with Zaden at first but then he had to go back to the hospital in order trick Michael into returning as well.
Yes Jones is dead. Michael really did kick him to death imagining he was Justin.
Hope that clarifies things for you.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2019 11:39 am Title: How Many Faces Do You Have
Great chapter. Mikey is getting his, now we must work on Linds. Terrific writing. Happy that you are doing ok since these stories came up so quickly. Sometimes you just need a break. Take care.
Date: Apr 30, 2019 8:43 pm Title: Baulk, Talk, Squawk and Walk
Poor Gardner, losing his house! Bad luck; at least he is out of jail.
Date: Apr 30, 2019 8:36 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire
I love your stories but NO, Luther does not get turned into a good guy, he's done way too much to even think he gets forgiveness, please no.
You can write him as a good guy but he will always be a BAD guy in my book.
Michael has to be one of the stupidiest people in the world. He is such a sleeze, and never sees himself as the idiot and moron he is.
bec
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2019 1:59 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire
As NYC has no death penalty, When will Michael get his comuppance?
He's already serving 50 yrs, so life for the murder won't be much difference.
As murder is a violent offence, can he pls be tranferred to a really nasty maximum security prison and get the shit kicked/raped out of him there, as soon as he opens his stupid mouth?
Still loving your work,
Deb.
Date: Apr 30, 2019 1:59 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire
As NYC has no death penalty, When will Michael get his comuppance?
He's already serving 50 yrs, so life for the murder won't be much difference.
As murder is a violent offence, can he pls be tranferred to a really nasty maximum security prison and get the shit kicked/raped out of him there, as soon as he opens his stupid mouth?
Still loving your work,
Deb.
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 10:31 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire
Oh this was good. Love when Mikey gets what he deserves. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 5:38 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire
Luther and Zee were able to talk and it cleared up some things but they still have more to overcome if he wants forgiveness for the He'll he put his family through simply because he is grieving the loss of his son.
Michael is so stupid that he couldn't tell he aS walking into a trap and now he may just die in prison.
Wonder what plan they have for Lindsay?
Thanks for the Update :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 3:57 pm Title: A Small Thaw and The Catch Fire
Woah. Jones is dead? I'm confused is Luther turning into a good guy or still a bad guy?