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Reviewer: starlight Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2018 6:22 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

Love what you did with this, can't wait to see where you take this! 

Star



Author's Response:

Oh wow, Star. Thank you for reading and revewing on this. It means a lot to me that you gave it a chance. Deb's plot bunny wouldn't leave me alone, and the only way to get it out of my head was to put it down on paper. Then Michael's demise just kind of got away from me. There will only be a second part to this though, written mainly from Justin and Brian's POV.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2018 5:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

Michael seriously need to grow up boy won't he be surprised when he sees Brian isn't going to change his mind and that Justin is still around.

Brian said to Michael what he should've said years agon "Grow Up Michael" and that he is not coming to Michael's rescue anymore, time for Michael to save himself and leave his fantasies for bedtime.

I do believe The Brian and Mikey Show could be heading for cancellation?

New York isn't going to be much fun for Michael, what a shame <giggles>

Merry Christmas and Thanks for the Interesting First Chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Blue. I always love reading your reviews you leave for stories you are reading. They are always so insightful. Yes, the Brian and Mikey show has definitely been cancelled.

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2018 4:39 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

Thank you for this wondeful Christmas gift! please don't be one of these authors who update only once every month! you have a great story here and I feel lots of Michael being put at his place by both Justin and Brian! Signed: Your new number one fan!



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh! Thank you for that. I plan to have the last chapter posted shortly after New Year's, which will be mostly written from Justin and Brian's POV.  I will tell you, though, that Mr Novotny is not done trying yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2018 3:16 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

Love this look at an unlucky Michael.  I'm going to enjoy this a lot.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. Yeah, I love a woe-is-me Michael. I have big plans for the idiot. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2018 2:50 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

Thank you so much for snatching up this bunny! You are off to a wonderful start! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Deb



Author's Response:

Thanks Deb. I'm so happy you gave me a reason to try my hand at writing. I couldn't get this dang story out of my head, and figured the best way to do that, was to put it down on paper. Unfortunately (or fortunately) the story got away from me, and Michael's poor demise to the Big Apple ending up writing itself. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2018 10:04 am Title: CHAPTER 1

I like this beginning. I hope Michael gets kicked and goes very far. 



Author's Response:

Oh, I have big plans for Mr. Novotny. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2018 10:03 am Title: CHAPTER 1

Very interesting start.  Can't wait for an update.

Merry Christmas!



Author's Response:

This should be updated soon. I'm shooting for shortly after the first of the year. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2018 9:07 am Title: CHAPTER 1

I like it. "Go Home Micheal, Grow up!" that's something important Brian should spoke to Micheal in show, to clear Micheal's delusions.

Kudos for your writing. Update Soon Asap.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm happy you're enjoying it so far.

Reviewer: kerri240879 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2018 8:05 am Title: CHAPTER 1

Welcome! Interesting concept; looking forward to seeing more. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. It means a lot.

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