Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2019 5:02 pm Title: Living Arrangements...Lofty Ambitions

I would  afraid of Michael and Lindsay hurting anyone if their plans didn't always fall apart and Lindsay should be worried about what Lynette is there.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2019 10:31 am Title: Living Arrangements...Lofty Ambitions

Ooh, two chapters... one down, one to go. I'm almost getting the giggles thinking what might be waiting behind those doors. I don't think Michael's wish about the lube comment will be coming to fruition. There's too many against the two of them.

I do have a question... how old are both Pearl and Jewel?

Well, on to the next...

Cathy

Author's Response:

Hi Cathy

Pearl is going to be 16, Jewel is 35 - yes another Secret about her is coming...

Hugs

Nicole

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2019 8:51 am Title: Dinner...An Ethan Appetiser!

Great update.  Terrific writing.  Love this storyline.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2019 4:29 pm Title: Dinner...An Ethan Appetiser!

Ethan's downfall is going to ease everybody's mind. What a vicious guy!

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2019 3:41 pm Title: Dinner...An Ethan Appetiser!

Thanks for update. 

But I don't understand why Ethan leaves the message that begins; 'So are you going to drop the charges or are you going to join Jay in the ground...' when he was leaving the message on Jay's phone?

Help, my brain is confused! (and yes we know that is easy to do!)

Love your stuff,

Deb L

Author's Response:

Hey Debs...Ethan and Phil thought that they would fool him into thinking he was calling someone else.

Happy reading

Nicole

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2019 7:03 pm Title: Justin's Groove's Back and The Nullification

Michael is getting 125k$? That's huge! I'm wondering what he is going to do with this money.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2019 4:40 pm Title: Justin's Groove's Back and The Nullification

Wonderful update.  Oh that Mikey.  Such an idiot.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 10:59 pm Title: Justin's Groove's Back and The Nullification

Brian can't sink to Lindsay's level but by not reacting the way she would exit he is risk g above her already, Lindsay will dig herself into a hole just to have a way to keep Brian focused on her along with his checkbook.

Michael is so happy to get his money he doesn't care that he dumped Jenny so he can be free, thankfully Ted is man enough to always be the Father, Dad, Man Jenny can look up too.

Looks like the cute little matchmaker is about to strike again.

Michael must be in drugs to think that Brian would let him anywhere near that lift he better enjoy being with Lindsay.

Though I do hope he has a wonderful meeting with his dad and that man eventually  steals the lint out of his pockets along with all his precious  money and collectables lol

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 2:02 pm Title: Justin's Groove's Back and The Nullification

Mikey actually thinks that he'll get the loft?  I don't think so.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 9:27 am Title: Justin's Groove's Back and The Nullification

So, Pearl has it set up for Ted and Blake to meet... yay!

Michael... what a buffoon! Two things wrong with his thinking... he can't go to Brian's... the judge just told him it has to go through Ted. Second, blood is not thicker than friends. There is no way in hell, Brian will allow Michael to live in the loft, even if Ben was not there! If he thinks an apology will get him what he wants... idiot! But first, he has to try ad get Brian alone... me thinks that's not happening!

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2019 5:57 am Title: Hopping To and Into It

I had to think for a minute as to why I hadn't read chapter 16 yet, then remembered when I read the other chapters, I left one in order to have two at the same time.

Anyway, I'm so happy to see Justin staring to draw again, and anxious to start painting. And it's good to see him and Brian already getting so close.

I'm a little confused as to WHY Ron and Nancy left Lindsay so much more money than Lynette, if they were aware of her deceitfulness. Was it because she was with Mel? It makes sense, but it doesn't make sense. They knew Lindsay was a witch and probably wouldn't share with Mel. So, why? I hope there was a clause in all the extra money Brian gave her, that she has to pay back, or he can take her to court. And Lindsay's STRAIGHT??? Not BI?!? Okay, a bit of a shocker. And why oh why, did she have to tell Michael about the meeting at Britin? He will just cause havoc!!! What you really have planned for her, again, I'm not completely sure, other than possibly letting her know she can use the samples she collected... but again... flawed plan... she knows Michael has been using the loft. So, I'm unsure.

Still sitting on pins and needles waiting to see what you come up for Michael's father. I can think of a few skanky descriptions!!!

I'm enjoying the rabbit side of this. My kids had about four chinchillas while growing up, two dwarf bunnies, and one flop-eared. So, yeah, we like rabbits!!!

On to the next,

Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2019 10:58 pm Title: Hopping To and Into It

Love all the updates.  Can't wait for another one on this story.  All your stories are unique.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2019 5:51 am Title: Dealing and Dispensing With

Well, well, well... It looks like Lynette had an ace up her sleeve! Lindsay has officially lost Brian, Mel, Gus, Jenny, Lynette, and Gregory. Oh! She has Michael!!! I guess the question of the hour is if, when Brian WOULD trick, did he stay at Babylon, or did he bring anyone back to the loft? If Lindsay had planned on using the sperm for herself, all is lost to her, if Brian never brought anyone back to the loft! And remembering the conversation when it was disclosed about them using the loft... it didn't sound like Brian had used it in a long time. But now, Lynette about to reveal everything to Brian and Justin. I also wonder what Lynette will have up her sleeve in regards to getting her money back from Lindsay. I can't figure out why Lynette was giving her money when she was aware that Lindsay was sleeping with her husband.

Yes, B/J are already HOT!! And poor Michael... he who laughs first and all that! “He doesn’t do relationships, he fucks and has done, onto the next one!” Haha, Michael... he's already in a relationship!

I'm looking forward to see what you have up your sleeve regarding Michael's father. Because... Divina or Danny Devore is not listed on your cast of characters! And Deb gave nothing away!

HUGS ~Cathy

Author's Response:

Hi Cathy,

Lindsay as is her want doesn't think she's lost or been bested by anyone, they are just sulking and will come around. As for the loft there is more to come on that and there is how Michael and Ethan actually met in the first place. With regards to Lynette and the money, in the first chapter when Mel found out that Lindsay had told Brian that nobody was hiring and he was giving her extra support money, Mel gave him his rights back and he stopped the support money. So she went to Lynette for it. And Lynette didn't know about her sleeping with Gregory until he told her the day he left her, it started when they came back to Pittsburgh.

Ah yes the Daddy of Michael...he's going to be a character to say the least, apples and trees and all that!

Happy reading and hugs,

Nicole