Date: Jul 19, 2019 4:58 am Title: Denial is Not Just a River in Africa...Part 1
If THAT can happen by just a kiss, B/j should be SMOKING in bed!
Michael dug his own grave with Ethan. Glad that conversation ended... baby, my love... *gag* but Ethan knows Justin is in Pittsburgh now... Just Where Does Ethan Live? Anyway... if Ethan has an STD now... that Michael would have given... what are all these guys doing? ... Barebacking? ... Michael better be concerned... Ethan is a little crazy when he gets angry.
Lindsay and her water works. She only wants the checkbook back. Not Mel, Gus, or Jenny. She also doesn't want them living on Brian's property. I was so proud of Ted! But it looks like Lindsay is up shit creek. I hope she has a heavy duty paddle! Well, with the death of her parents, I see where she had money to buy the house. But if she has her inheritance... what was that at the beginning getting money from Brian and Lynette?
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2019 4:00 am Title: Open Conversation and Hostilities
I am so glad Lindsay's sniveling and need for attention didn't get what she hoped to accomplish from Brian. THIS Brian has both Lindsay and Michael's numbers, and he doesn't appear to like them very much! And if Michael wonders why no one wants him to be happy (his words) he had a wonderful man in Ben. I'm sure they were all very happy for them.
Ah, yes! Please let Ethan make an appearance at the party. Justin needs to get a punch in right before the cops come. Is Carl associated with the PD in this story? I don't think it has been mentioned, outside of the fact he was in the Army.
Brian will teach Justin all the joys of bottoming... I have no doubt about that fact.
Very sad to hear of Kiki passing. I always liked Kiki, and she is always so nice in stories. And in this one, she probably literally saved Brian's life!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jul 19, 2019 3:22 am Title: Teddybear and More About Brian
WOW!!! Jam packed chapter!!! Not sure where I should start. I guess the main thing we kind of learned a little about Brian's secret. He's the one I've been wondering about. The shock of the word 'bite' must have brought the memory flooding his brain that he fell and hit his head. Jack the Bastard strikes again. It's a good thing Brian didn't kill him, but at the same time, too bad he didn't. I'm just glad Michael wasn't witness to that scene. The little chicken spit must have made a hasty exit when the commotion started.
Michael... I can't believe it was Ethan he was having an affair with. How did that work exactly when Ethan lived in California, and Michael lived in Pittsburgh? or were Justin and Ethan living in Pittsburgh and his show was in California? (I'm a little confused there.) If they lived in Pittsburgh, how did they not know anybody on the Avenue?
Anyway, it goes to show how really stupid Michael is... if Ethan escaped from his boyfriend beating him up... yes, how is it that Ethan didn't have a mark on him? And I hope Michael realizes he called Justin a: hopped up lunatic! Michael also better realize that Ethan was sleeping with other men... Thus Michael getting anal warts. OH, OH, OH... If Ethan has chlamydia, or whatever the STD he had, and the surrogate got that sperm inseminated... would that result in problems to the mother or baby? I'm not well versed on that subject. WOW!!! Not sure about the baby... but it CAN'T be good for the mother!
Yay! B/J went home together. Justin, Brian needs some TLC when you get home! And when Brian ran away... it indeed led him to his real mother.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jul 19, 2019 2:15 am Title: He's Gonna Be The Daddy!
CH 10:
OH MOTHER OF GOD! YUCK! YUCK! YUCK!
Michael's inner musings almost made me want to vomit. If he thinks he would EVER have a chance with the likes of Justin... the guy needs a lobotomy! Something is DEFINITELY not right in his head!
CH 11:
Yes, nicely played!! I sure hope (not really) that Michaeland Lindsay have back-up money plans. I'd be interested in knowing how it's Lindsay's house, and not Mel's (or Gus'.) So, Teddy has his family back. Justin got the claws and digs into Michael, who was embarrassed and humiliated... yep... it's got my seal of approval!!!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jul 19, 2019 12:36 am Title: Another for Justin and Hello Sapphire
I definitely had to back out of the chapter and look at the pairings. JR wants to set Ted up... was she hinting towards Ben? Then Jewel is wanting to set up Drew and Pearl... I thought... She won't really write Drew 'straight'... would she? So, I approve of your pairings. But then I finished the last section, and saw Pearl as the 'beard'.
Emmett... 15... I highly doubt he was sexually confused... did he experience drugs and Midsummer Night Madness?
I love how Brian is already helping Justin... showing he cares. If Brian really loves bunnies... that's good... because Justin needs 'somebunny' to love him. And Justin is finding out Brian might be his Kryptonite, that he was able to "twitch".
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jul 18, 2019 11:32 pm Title: Hello Mother...Hello Father...Goodbye Lover
OH HELL'S BELLS! Please let the surrogate be pregnant!!! I'm assuming they used Lynette's eggs and the stolen sperm. Now all we ahave to find out, was Michael the top or bottom? (squicks me out!)
I like that Mel seems to be pro-Brian!! Lindsay will be out on her ass after Mel finds out. I'm going to presume THAT is the REAL reason Lynette was giving Lindsay money.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2019 4:49 am Title: Chapter 16
I feel for Brian and glad that Justin is with him. What Lindsay & Lynette did is Insane. Lindsay stinking ass* gonna chapped after founding Ronald's will. So Yes, it will get Worse than it, for Micheal as well.
Great. Enjoyed it. Hugs:)
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2019 1:23 am Title: Chapter 16
Yes Lindsay is going to freak out when she finds out what Ronald did for Mel and in turn Gus and Jenny but who cares what that Whore thinks anymore.
Lynette will have to work centuries to gain an ounce of sympathy from Brian and Mel for her foolish stupid behavior.
I do hope Abigail drains Alistair dry?
And Michael better get ready cause his turn is coming around again.
Thanks For the Update 😃
I do hope Lindsay has a good time with Michael because a sledgehammer is coming at her head and it isn't going to stop swinging anytime soon.
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2019 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 16
Great update. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2019 6:58 pm Title: Chapter 16
Lindsay and Lynette are quite disturbed. Did Lynette really think that she could ask Brian, afterwards, if she could use what Lindsay gathered from the loft? And then, Lindsay living with Mel to spite her mother, while she is straight: she must be worthy of an Emmy.
At least, the parents were not blind and Mel will be set for life! Maybe will she have more opportunities to meet new friends/lovers.
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2019 3:48 pm Title: Chapter 16
This just gets better and better.
Date: Jul 02, 2019 3:37 am Title: Mother, Lovers and Brothers
ANAL WARTS?!?! Was Michael sleeping with more than one person... or was his 'peice on the side' sleeping around? He sure is worried about that key business, isn't he?
And - Lord, I hope since he contacted that, Ben has NOT slept with him.
Lindsay's bitchiness is getting out of hand. She needs dropping down a peg or two. Is she sleeping around, too? And what a terrible mother she is!!!
I liked that Debbie and Carl are Brandon and Brian's parents.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jul 02, 2019 1:51 am Title: Emmett, The Crash, The Bushel and The Hamper
Well, I guess I'm on this one now.had to reread the first three chapters. Now I know why Brian chose to help Justin. They met in a chat room.
All the men have kids... hehe... except Michael.
That bitch Lindsay better stay away from Gus and the new flame. (oh Christ! Brian's son is STRAIGHT!) If he's living at Britin, maybe she won't have the opportunity to interfere.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jun 28, 2019 5:18 am Title: Dealing and Dispensing With
Love it.. Thank you
Author's Response:
Hey, so glad you are liking this, more secrets...and of course hotness...will out.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Jun 28, 2019 4:17 am Title: Getting out of Jail...and Getting to Know Ems
Darn Michael and Lindsey
Date: Jun 28, 2019 3:47 am Title: Kvetching and Etching
Now I am getting the story stright LOL
Date: Jun 28, 2019 3:02 am Title: Emmett, The Crash, The Bushel and The Hamper
confusing but I hope I get the hang of it -)
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2019 5:53 am Title: Dealing and Dispensing With
Lynette is almost as conniving as her sister.
This is my favorite quote of this great chapter: “Condom goes on dick. Dick goes up ass. Thrust a few times. Cum and done.”. It's so Brian!
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2019 5:58 pm Title: Dealing and Dispensing With
Lindsay info hope you didn't take more than you have in your accounts because Lynette does not seem like the person to.take your word that you are broke.
Michael is a moron but since he suddenly wants to meet his Daddy then hopefully he will meet a person more selfish and entitled than him and they can harp at each other until the end of time!
Lynette may be devious but she has more heart than Lindsay by coming to.see Brian and preparing to tell him the truth she is continuing to severe the hold Lindsay had her on.
Ron Would Be Proud.
Brian and Justin are so Sweet and Hot, Very Hot Together and they will only get Hotter.
Might need everyone to keep Brian and Brandon from killing Lindsay.
Did Lynette use the samples?
Does she have a surrogate pregnant by Brian?
Is Lindsay ready for the hurricane coming her way?
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2019 5:24 pm Title: Dealing and Dispensing With
Think it took my rating away again. so here it is.
Date: Jun 25, 2019 5:23 pm Title: Dealing and Dispensing With
Great update. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2019 4:50 pm Title: Dealing and Dispensing With
We start with Lynette and end with Lynette.
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2019 4:05 am Title: Denial is Not Just a River in Africa...Part 1
Ohhh. So Lindsay is playing both sides of the bed? You do have a way with words.
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2019 3:50 am Title: Open Conversation and Hostilities
Michael is hard to take. At least Brian and Justin are getting closer.
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2019 3:16 am Title: Teddybear and More About Brian
Okay, Brian's ex-dad was Jack? Michael was fooling around with Ethan, blaaah. Did Ethan give Mikey warts? So much to learn.