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Date: Jun 21, 2019 2:23 am Title: He's Gonna Be The Daddy!

Did Michael ever wash his hands?  Just what is it Jenny did?  I'm a little sense.

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Date: Jun 21, 2019 1:08 am Title: Another for Justin and Hello Sapphire

Great to see Drew Boyd.  It looks like Emmett is going to get lucky.

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Date: Jun 20, 2019 10:27 pm Title: The Reunification in Germany and Therapy

Love that Daphne has shown up.  This is getting more interesting with each chapter.  It did serve Michael right not being allowed in Babylon, especially with his problem.  Just how many men was he with that could have given him what he got?

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Date: Jun 20, 2019 7:13 pm Title: Mother, Lovers and Brothers

Okay that was a surprise.  Deb and Carl the parents of 3 kids, though Mikey doesn't really count.  Who is Mikey having an affair with?  Who gave Mikey anal warts?  To think that Lindsay and Mikey expect to get keys to the loft! 

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Date: Jun 20, 2019 4:48 pm Title: The Three Bees

This chapter was enlightening.  Michael is as nasty as ever, using Brian's loft without permission and thinking that it's okay.  He and Lindsay are two of a kind.  Mel has mellowed and giving Brian back his rights was the right thing to do.  Now we find out that Brandon and Brian are twins.  It's a good thing they didn't trick.  I like Ben and the fact that he's Hunter's father is a bonus.  Ben, Brandon and Brian the three B's.

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Date: Jun 20, 2019 1:54 pm Title: Mel

I'm rereading this and am surprised by the amount of things I missed the first time.  That Lindsay had a separate account that Mel knew nothing about doesn't surprise me.   I do doubt that her sister was the one putting money into it.  Of course, Lindsay was too good to take any job offers if they were below her standards.  Then her having the nerve to decide she gets the use of the barn without asking is so her.

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Date: Jun 19, 2019 2:50 pm Title: Open Conversation and Hostilities

The beginning is hilarious with Brian grilling Justin about his "sexual" encounters with Ethan.

Isn't Daphne a little presumptuous regarding the bottoming?

Author's Response:

Yeah I did chuckle when writing that.

And nope...she's bang on [pardon the pun].

MissMerlot

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Date: Jun 18, 2019 7:21 pm Title: Denial is Not Just a River in Africa...Part 1

Once again it kicked out my rating.  So trying it again.

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Date: Jun 18, 2019 4:53 pm Title: Denial is Not Just a River in Africa...Part 1

Uh Oh Looks Like Lindsay Has Done Serious Explaining To Do and I Hope Lynette Kicks Her Flat Ass!

Lindsay and her crocodile tears didn't work her family is leaving her behind for A Much Better Dynamic.

If Lynette's surrogate is pregnant by Brian then she better have amazing lawyers cause Brian will make her wish she had never been born, I doubt her father would like knowing he was a grandfather again through devious underhanded means it would break his heart.

I am surprised Lindsay would allow anyone else to use Brian's sperm to have another child, just how my did Lynette pay her for Brian's sperm?

Michael got anal warts from someone else?

Ethan knows Justin is in Pittsburgh looks like the confrontation will be sooner than Justin hoped.

Brian and Justin are getting closer faster than they both thought but it is good they have each other to help heal.

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

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Date: Jun 11, 2019 4:45 pm Title: Open Conversation and Hostilities

Michael and Ethan deserve each other they both are Vile, Spiteful Brats who will hurt anyone to get their own way.

Lindsay should stop trying to act like she is the victim when she is the bully it just looks stupid and to rings false every time she tries.

Now that everyone is starting to fight back Lindsay might want to find a cushion for her fal! because it is coming and it won't be pretty.

Brian and Justin will figure out everything they just are taking the time to let each other heal and become stronger.

Will be interesting to see the force they become when they stand side by side and fight together.

Michael, Lindsay and their co-horts are going to wish they left time when everyone gets done with them😃

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Date: Jun 11, 2019 1:26 pm Title: Open Conversation and Hostilities

Let's see if I got this correct.  Michael is Brian's brother.  But I'm not sure where Justin fits in.

Author's Response:

Hiya

Yes, Michael is the half brother of Brandon and Brian - who are twins. Justin fits in, where he usual does, being the love of Brian's life. But it may take a wee bit of time for them to get there, but they are on their way.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

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Date: May 30, 2019 9:06 am Title: Teddybear and More About Brian

Always can count on you to keep matter interesting. Fantastic writting.!!

Ethan & Micheal. Idiots should not get away that easily hurting Justin so does Lindsay. Hope Jewel, Jenny, Pearl throw her whiny a** on bed of pins (atleast burn seeing Brian living with Justin in BriTin already). Keep it up Dad Ted.

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Date: May 29, 2019 7:11 pm Title: Teddybear and More About Brian

OOkaay.  Totally confused by this chapter, hope it clears up soon.

Keep putting out the good stuff hun!

Ta

Debs L

Author's Response:

Hey, the confusion was slightly deliberate, this next chapters deal with people really talking, some getting closer and others further apart.

Happy reading

Nicole