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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2019 6:10 pm Title: Teddybear and More About Brian

Old Trout! That is the perfect name for Lindsay cause that is the face she makes when her plans fall apart and she is trying to come up with a convincing lie lol

So Michael intercepted or write the letters?

What A Maroon!!

Whatever they come up with to make Michael suffer should be funny and very clever.

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2019 4:44 pm Title: Teddybear and More About Brian

Great chapter.  Another twist to the plot.  Love it.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2019 1:29 am Title: He's Gonna Be The Daddy!

Great chapter.  Ted and Jenny is a perfect idea.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2019 6:38 pm Title: He's Gonna Be The Daddy!

Love the see you next Tuesday reference!!

Still loving your writing.  This is my fave of the five!

Thanks

Deb L

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2019 6:27 pm Title: He's Gonna Be The Daddy!

Magnificent fireworks! It was coming from everywhere! Justin and Ben were especially biting.

I didn't get Jenny's joke "I won't be there next Monday, see you next Tuesday OK?".

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2019 5:58 pm Title: Getting out of Jail...and Getting to Know Ems

Ew, gross! Michael and Justin? Poor guy!

Jenny, Mel and Gus living with Brian will be a nightmare for Lindsay.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2019 5:27 pm Title: He's Gonna Be The Daddy!

Well Lindsay thought she would get some extra money from Ted and now we can have Michael instead, if I was Mel I would make sure everything is in Lindsay's name on Monday and that the support for Gus is moved and only Mel and Brian have access, but leave Lindsay $50 in the account for both of they have a joint account.

Ted is the father Jenny is proud to call Dad he loves Jenny with his whole heart and cherishes her to the moon and back.

Michael tossing his child aside for a potential boyfriend is beyond Cold and Heartless he doesn't deserve Jenny.

Ewww He Doesn't Wash His Hands After Going To The Bathroom?!?!!

And Ewww with his attempt at flirting with Justin that is so nasty and he better stick withnMr. Wonderful cause Justin's As a had a Never Gonna Happen Sign Super glued on it!

It is always Fun to beat Lindsay at her own game.

Yes she and Michael should definitely live together with her Nasty Ads Attitude and Michael just being Nasty they would make wonderful roommate since neither Mel.Or the kids are coming back😆

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2019 2:01 pm Title: He's Gonna Be The Daddy!

I'm with Lindsay-What is so funny?  Whatever it is I'm sure Michael and Lindsay won't like it and Jenny wins.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2019 5:46 pm Title: Getting out of Jail...and Getting to Know Ems

Had to re read again and it disgusts me that Lindsay was so willing to help Michael that she just ignored how this would affect Jenny her daughter.

Why is helping Michael give up his rights to his daughter more important than protecting Jenny or considering how Mel and Gus would feel about this?

Michael and Lindsay deserve whatever pain is coming their way

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2019 9:37 pm Title: Another for Justin and Hello Sapphire

The bunnies are a great idea and a good change of pet, instead of cats.

Drew is an amazing catch for Emmett; I hope it's headed this way.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2019 7:50 pm Title: Getting out of Jail...and Getting to Know Ems

What is Micheal thinking?? no, he did not stood a chance with Justin. How that triple date would turn out? Micheal is stupid for ignoring being father of Jenny. Hope Deb give him a load smack, & Lindsay deserves too.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2019 5:07 pm Title: Getting out of Jail...and Getting to Know Ems

Michael and Justin? Ewwww!

That is a nightmare I hope never happens Justin is too mature for that child and Michael drags everyone down with his stupidity.

Not surprised he wants to give up his rights to Jenny she is more of an adult tan he will ever be and besides Brian has always been more of a father to her than an uncle anyway, Deb is going  to be so pissed when she finds out that she might chase Michael with a neat cleaner instead of  just smacking him upside the head.

Emmett being a millionaire is a good for him he will be smart with his money and let it go unlike some.

Lindsay is going to get her add handed to her if she doesn't stop meddling and trying to orchestra everything to get satisfaction so she can keep everyone focused on her.

Mel needs to realize that Lindsay is not going to change and that her sanity and the kid's sanity is more important. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2019 3:48 pm Title: Getting out of Jail...and Getting to Know Ems

Interesting.  Emmett is rich and a father!  Nice.  Does Deb know that she's no longer a grandmother?

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2019 3:22 pm Title: Getting out of Jail...and Getting to Know Ems

Oh, this was fantastic.  Love all the twists and turns of the plot.  Like Michael would ever have a chance with Justin!!!!  HaHa.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2019 9:14 am Title: Getting out of Jail...and Getting to Know Ems

Give me a break Michael does not stand a chance 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2019 10:50 pm Title: Another for Justin and Hello Sapphire

Great update.  The bunnies sound so cute.  Love how this story is going.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2019 5:49 pm Title: Another for Justin and Hello Sapphire

Pearl did quite a matchmaker and a bulldozer! lol

Lindsay is a Bitch who is gonna pay for the way she is treating Gus because she can't play Queen of the Manor.

Justin is making quite a lot of progress and moving into the house is just one of the starts he needed.

Having a cute baby rabbit to take care of and share with Brian will help them get closer will giving Justin inspiration to draw.

😀

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2019 3:36 pm Title: Another for Justin and Hello Sapphire

Lots of secrets and a bunny.  Very interesting.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2019 1:36 pm Title: Another for Justin and Hello Sapphire

So happy , that Justin is trying, moved in BriTin. Fear of ex is still lingering but Justin will fight back.

And Welcome to the newest addition. Jewel and Pearl in match-making. Yess, gonna be so much fun to read. Love the girls. ^_^

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2019 5:21 pm Title: Kvetching and Etching

Michael doesn't a child as wonderful as Jenny now a kick in the Ass (If He Had One!) would be better and save everyone from his need to be the center of the universe for five minutes anyway.

Ted would and has been a better father to Jenny while Michael as usual pouts from the sidelines she deserves to be a kid not cater to one.

Brian and Justin have made quite a progress and Justin drawing again is another step closer to him finding himself again in the light instead of hiding in the shadows.

Emmett is a widow and Yes is avoiding dating?

oh this dinner is going to be very interesting!

Thanks for the Update:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2019 4:57 pm Title: Kvetching and Etching

Wahhh.  With each new chapter I always want more!!!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2019 2:48 pm Title: Kvetching and Etching

Big improvement between Brian and Justin: long contacts.

Poor Jenny; she doesn't deserve the mess she is in.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2019 1:21 pm Title: Kvetching and Etching

Great update.  Love Ted & Jenny's conversation.  Thank you for making her more Mel than Mikey.

Reviewer: nickknack Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2019 12:38 am Title: Mel

I am so enjoying this unusual story.  Looking forward to more secrets :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2019 6:12 pm Title: The Reunification in Germany and Therapy

Wow!  Need to find out more secrets because these are amazing.

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