Date: May 25, 2016 9:44 am Title: Stowaways
AwwI feel for Tommy. Ted broght him to his Pa without knowing it, and Brian has been searching for Justin. I know Brian is going to get the shock of his life seeing Justin again. Tommy is going to beg his daddy to wake Justin up. Is Justin baby ok? Wht dd that Dumb husband do to him?
I'm wondering how Brian is going to get Tommy to come to him now that he has seen his Pa?
I'm really hopping Brain can help him and bring him home. Please more soon
Author's Response:
That is my problem with new chapter. Brian's response and tommys.
Date: May 25, 2016 12:18 am Title: Stowaways
Kinda hard to read when everything is connected no spacing.
Author's Response:
Oh no. When I get home from work I'll fix it.
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2016 12:16 am Title: Stowaways
Prince Brian has arrived! Wake up, Justin! TAG
Author's Response:
Yes he has.
Date: May 24, 2016 9:53 pm Title: Stowaways
So cute that Gus and Tommy were looking for their presents in Ted's car. I'm surprised they stayed so quiet while Ted drove to the care facility.
Will Mr. Keller turn out to be Philip?
Why, oh why, do I think Prince Brian has arrived to awaken Sleeping Beauty?
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A note about the way this chapter displays. The print is really tiny and, if I increase the text size on my tablet or my laptop, I have to scroll back and forth horizontally to read the story.
I didn't have a problem reading since I switched to Reader View, but it was a bit awkward to move between the story and the review box after leaving Reader View.
All the other chapters display fine. I have no idea why this one is different--just thought you'd like to know.
Author's Response:
When I get home from work I'll see if I can fix it.
Date: May 24, 2016 9:26 pm Title: Stowaways
...all I hear at the moment is "dun dun dunnn" as Tommy loosens his grip on Justin.
More Please? (sitting at the edge of my chair.....)
Sandy
Author's Response:
I'll work on next chapter when I get home.
Date: May 24, 2016 9:13 pm Title: Stowaways
Noooo OMG what a cliff hanger. More soon, please
Author's Response:
Will be working on it tonight while I watch Hollyoaks.
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2016 8:49 pm Title: Stowaways
I'm....in...tears right now!! Poor little guy, to see his 'Pa' like that! I think once Brian sees who Tommy is hugging, he'll understand why Ted was so free with the info. I'm glad Lindsay didn't go in! That nosy pain in the ass wouldn't be able to keep the secret if she knew and I imagine that is of the utmost importance. No doubt Max is looking everywhere to get his 'husband' back.
Looking forward to another update...SOON!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
So not a Lindsay fan. I love sweet Tommy.
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2016 8:12 pm Title: Stowaways
Thank goodness for Ted. I'd forgotten that Ted told the kids that their presents were in his car. It all makes sense. Now to see if Brian recognizes Justin. Tommy did.
Author's Response:
Yep the kids were being scamps.