Date: May 24, 2016 9:13 pm Title: Stowaways
Noooo OMG what a cliff hanger. More soon, please
Author's Response:
Will be working on it tonight while I watch Hollyoaks.
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2016 8:49 pm Title: Stowaways
I'm....in...tears right now!! Poor little guy, to see his 'Pa' like that! I think once Brian sees who Tommy is hugging, he'll understand why Ted was so free with the info. I'm glad Lindsay didn't go in! That nosy pain in the ass wouldn't be able to keep the secret if she knew and I imagine that is of the utmost importance. No doubt Max is looking everywhere to get his 'husband' back.
Looking forward to another update...SOON!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
So not a Lindsay fan. I love sweet Tommy.
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2016 8:12 pm Title: Stowaways
Thank goodness for Ted. I'd forgotten that Ted told the kids that their presents were in his car. It all makes sense. Now to see if Brian recognizes Justin. Tommy did.
Author's Response:
Yep the kids were being scamps.
Date: May 23, 2016 7:53 am Title: Christmas Eve
And I thought the last chapter had twists and turns! Yikes! I may have to create a couple family trees if this gets much more complicated, lol.
I'm glad Erik genuinely loves Ted and that he's been protecting Justin, keeping him safe from Maxwell.
I hope Gus and Tommy aren't about to be harmed in some way. Did they sneak out of the house for an adventure? Does Tommy want to go find his papa? The thought of Maxwell getting his hands on both of them is really scary.
Author's Response:
Hopefully the story isn't going to get too confusing. I don't want to end up confusing myself. I've done that before. I'm glad you're liking the story so far.
Date: May 23, 2016 7:27 am Title: The Trials of Ted
Such twists and turns!
It boggles my mind that Erik and Ted will possibly adopt Justin's baby. Erik does seem to be assuming an awful lot. Wake up Teddy! Gorgeous looks aren't enough.
So Marissa isn't Maxwell's daughter? Can't wait to find out whose daughter she is.
I'm glad Jennifer has finally left Craig and has taken Molly with her.
Author's Response:
Jennifer will be seen more soon.
Date: May 23, 2016 7:14 am Title: Toyland
I wonder if Michael remembers Justin and the shitty way he treated him.
I love the interaction between Gus and Tommy.
Brian clearly does care for both of his sons but doesn't want the responsibility of being a full-time father. Even if he's helping Justin primarily out of self-interest as well as wanting Tommy to have his birth father, at least he is doing something positive.
Author's Response:
Brian does love them both. Michael's day is coming.
Date: May 23, 2016 6:59 am Title: Mommy Dearest
Sneaky, how Justin managed to name Kinnetik--love it.
I'm so glad Brian's going to take care of Tommy and make sure his son doesn't receive any more of the treatment Jack dished out to him as a child.
I really want to know how Brian will react when he finds out that Justin told Michael he was pregnant. I'm also wondering if Brian will try to track Justin down in order to help him.
You have me hooked on this story!
Author's Response:
Yes, I wanted Justin to name it just like in the show. The Brian and Michael show is coming to a climax soon.
Date: May 23, 2016 6:46 am Title: Prologue
Just discovered this story and am already enthralled by the AU you've created. My heart is breaking for Justin, but he's showing what a good father he is: ensuring Tommy escapes and staying to care for his unborn child.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm so glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2016 5:08 pm Title: Christmas Eve
Strange coincidences . . . TAG
Author's Response:
Yep.
Date: May 20, 2016 2:42 pm Title: Christmas Eve
What a surprise (AMD noti a good INE, sorry) to read about Erik and Justin. Anyway, I'm glad you're going fast with the story.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you didnt' like the surprise. But hopefully the rest will be to your liking. Thank you for reading and commenting.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2016 1:02 pm Title: Christmas Eve
OMG!!!! Erik is Vic's son and he had an affair with Justin???? I am completely FLOORED!!!! And I already can't stand that whiny bastard Michael (yeah I'm an Anti-Michael junkie). I hope Justin wakes up very soon with his memories in tact! The fact that both Justin and Erik were trapped by Max is....ARRRRGH!! Please write fast! You've left me breathless here!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Sorry it took so long for the new chapter. I'm saving the real anti-mikey stuff for when everyones there. I'm glad I shocked you by Erik.
Date: May 20, 2016 11:59 am Title: Christmas Eve
Ok I wasn't going to read this when I saw the child abuse warnings but I managed it ( I work in child protection) but I am finding this very interesting
Author's Response:
I'm glad you gave it a shot. And if it makes you feel any better that's the last part of abuse on any of the kids in this story.
Date: May 20, 2016 11:40 am Title: Christmas Eve
Hmm this chpter is really good. I'm hopping that Brian will really be to save Justin now. Hopping be able to bring him home to Tommy. Please let Justin be happy to see Brian and still really love him. Please more soon!!
Author's Response:
I hope you like the new chapter as much as the last.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2016 5:55 am Title: Christmas Eve
uhoh, the boys listened to all that! Let's see if I have this straight. Erik is Vic's son and possibly Marissa's father. He knew that Justin is Tommy's father and didn't tell anyone? Where are the boys?
Author's Response:
Yes about the Erik, But the boys didn't hear the story. They had already left on their mission. Next Chapter.
Date: May 20, 2016 5:35 am Title: Christmas Eve
What the HELL! You are blowing my mind.
Author's Response:
I'm glad.
Date: May 20, 2016 2:14 am Title: The Trials of Ted
Come on, Ted - connect the dots already! Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
Poor Ted. But the truth is out there now.
Date: May 19, 2016 10:31 pm Title: The Trials of Ted
Hi SLHR,
I just read all four chapters and I have to this is very interesting plot. I feel very bad for Justin. I'm very proud of Justin for protecting his son Tommy. This also shows me how much he loves Brian. I'm really hoping Brian can save Justin and his new baby. I know Brian is going to love Justin new baby like it's own. I know t's still early but I'm hopping Justin and Brian wil have another baby. Please post more soon!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. We'll have to see what happens with Brian and Justin before we give them a new baby.
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2016 7:30 pm Title: The Trials of Ted
Hopefully someone will connect Justin with Degas. It appears that Ted's friend is taking him for granted.
Author's Response:
Degas now has a name.
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2016 6:07 pm Title: The Trials of Ted
I hope someone breaks their foot off in Maxwell's ass!!! Like seriously! I also hope that Ted puts two-and-two together and remembers where he knows Justin from. BTW... I've always loved Ted. With the exception of that Tad-nut from S5 in canon, I've always hoped that he would love himself and then that someone would love him. I don't know if Erik is that 'someone' but it's nice to see Ted have somebody too. More sson! I'm so addicted.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I like Ted too. Not yet for Maxwell but it's coming.
Date: May 19, 2016 6:00 pm Title: The Trials of Ted
Who is the Father?
Author's Response:
Now I can say it's in the new chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2016 2:24 pm Title: Toyland
I've just bumped into this story and I'm already hooked. Update it soon
Author's Response:
Just did. I'm so glad you're liking it.
Date: May 18, 2016 11:37 pm Title: Prologue
Loving this story so far! Hope you update soon!
Alana
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope you continue to like it.
Date: May 17, 2016 7:18 am Title: Toyland
Aw, the Gus & Tommy interaction was so sweet. But poor Justin. More, please. TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you. They are cute together.
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2016 5:22 am Title: Prologue
Loving this story! Hope you update soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm trying to keep it a fast updated story.
Date: May 17, 2016 1:22 am Title: Toyland
I love this story, great job can not wait for Brian to find Justin.
Author's Response:
It's coming but not as soon as some might like.