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Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2021 7:39 am Title: Chapter 52- Relationships and Friendships

EEp, can you make sure there are spaces between different character's lines, please? I find it so hard to read on my phone.

But most importantly, I love how Justin is opening Brian's mind so much and making him see he's worth it.

And I love how much Gus talks, such a typical kid lol

Author's Response:

I thought I  had fixed that.  I will do it now.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2021 9:08 am Title: Chapter 52- Relationships and Friendships

Very interesting chapter (not that the other aren't). I love how Justin is pushing Brian to analyze and see things another way.



Author's Response:

yes, Justin is very interested in helping Brian grow as a person.   I love how he has offered to cook with him.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2021 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 52- Relationships and Friendships

Things are looking good for Brian.  Wonder what will happen when he tries to drop Gus off instead of staying to eat at Deb's.



Author's Response:

Brian is moving forward

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2021 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 52- Relationships and Friendships

Brian can make things so complicated. Great story.more please.

Author's Response:

He is a complicated man.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2021 1:24 pm Title: Chapter 52- Relationships and Friendships

Not the big, scary "R" word... LOL. TAG



Author's Response:

He's not there yet, but maybe soon.

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