Date: Jun 21, 2023 9:20 am Title: Chapter 25
What a great story. I hated Evan, but I never wish anyone dead. So happy when Brian and Justin end up together, but I think you should write a short epilog about 2-3 years later focusing on the wedding of the century at Britin. I love complete closure. Fantastic writing.
Date: Jan 29, 2021 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 19
I don't know what to think about this Brian or feel about this chapter. In my opinion this Brian is selfish and couldn't stand up to Evan. He pretends to be annoyed with Evan but enjoys having sex with him and is versatile for him but not for Justin? What does he feel towards Justin and even l Evan ? The way Evan and Brian are acting, it's hard to say it's only pretense.
I am annoyed and a bit pissed off with this Brian ....esp in this chapter.
If he cared and respected Justin he would have stopped sleeping with Evan.
I also don't get this Justin. Why is he putting up with all this crap with Brian, knowing all well that Brian is actually sleeping with Evan and not just pretending to be with him? Why is Justin being faithful to Brian waiting on Brian, letting him call all the shots and accepting being on the side whenever Brian feels like it? Where is his self respect?
I want Justin to know the reason Brian and Evan were late and stand up to Brian and tell Brian to stay away from him until he chooses only to be with him. Then go out, have fun and find himself a new guy who respects him, cares about him and loves him.
I would like to see Justin, who is strong, able to stand up to Brian and have self respect for himself for a change.
Date: Jan 27, 2021 1:39 pm Title: Chapter 19
I don't understand this Brian and at this point, both guys should drop him. It's not fair to Justin to be caught in Brian's indecision. Justin looks foolish and weak and Brian has gotten on my last nerve. Evan can have him!
Date: Dec 31, 2020 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oh please don't decide to give up on this story. It is so good and we love it. If you must end it because you don't want to continue writing it, here's an idea, Evan cheats on Brian, gets caught and the prenup is voided, Brian gets his company and Justin. See isn't that great. Did I tell you, I love happy endings. LOL At least you are smiling and maybe thinking up a new chapter. You are such a great writer and I feel you will get the inspiration to continue the story. Just find a way to get rid of Evan. Happy New Year. 11+
Date: Jun 20, 2020 3:21 am Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for the update!! Boy oh boy am I sick of Brian bending over literally and (more importantly) figuratively for Evan. I don’t like him letting someone make him someone he is not. Even if it’s to stay out of jail. It looks like Brian May have found his backbone. And not a minute too soon because I’m done on Evan!!
Date: Apr 27, 2020 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 14
Thanks for the update! I want to believe that Brian isn't just using Justin, but it's SUPER hard seeing him straddle the fence between Evan and Justin. Enjoying the story but hating the fact that he's married to the other guy. Even if he has his reasons, he doesn't seem miserable in the marriage. I'd like to see Justin be strong enough to stand up for himself and not just go along with Brian's order for him or their relationship. Guess I'll have to wait and see!