[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2019 10:28 pm Title: The Fall and the Snake Hiss
Very interesting POV from Michael's side: the jealousy building and bubbling here and there. Great job!
Date: Jul 25, 2019 10:35 pm Title: The Fall and the Snake Hiss
I liked this. Widdle Mikey pretty much sealed his fate with that last comment to Brian. It must be something Michael has said to Ben over the years, in order for Ben to know what he was talking about.
For myself, I would be interested to know the dynamics of Brian, Michael, and Justin's relationships. I haven't forgotten when he walked into Britin, Michael assumed he would be sitting next to Brian, but was redirected. So I'm thinking the friendship was good, yet how could someone hide their contempt for Justin so well to fool everybody all this time?
On a side note, my chapter is sitting at my sick betas house. It's interesting when two are writing the same storyline to see similarities and differences. That said...
Good chapter,
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jul 25, 2019 2:12 am Title: The Fall and the Snake Hiss
Michael can't get a clue. Even going over the past all signs are there and as usual he ignores them.
Oh Ben, what hornets horn did you just put out there. I don't think Justin knew about the scarfing episode. But if Michael didn't save Brian that night would it matter if Justin was still alive? With Michael's inflated ego, if Brian had died Michael would've thought it was because he was moving away to be with David not because Brian was in crisis about turning the big 3 0 and wanted to just try scarfing for the ultimate climax.
Author's Response:
Sophiesmom! Oh you beauty, thank you for that idea - will credit you in the next chapter!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2019 1:00 am Title: The Fall and the Snake Hiss
Great chapter. Love this story. Actually always love when Mikey is evil. LOL Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2019 6:18 pm Title: The Fall and the Snake Hiss
Yes Idiot do keep painting yourself into a corner there is no way you are getting out of this mess without jail time, then it will be Lindsay's turn and with her habit of being a Whore to any man who can give her something it shouldn't be long now.
It has been years and still Michael and Lindsay couldn't tear Brian and Justin apart though they did cause a few rips but no permanent damage because their bond is stronger than ever.
Michael is going to wish he had stayed in away because he is not escaping this anytime soon.
Thanks for the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2019 4:26 pm Title: The Fall and the Snake Hiss
Is Mikey going over the edge? I hope so.
Date: Jul 24, 2019 11:04 am Title: The Fall and the Snake Hiss
Thanks for update