Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2019 2:12 pm Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

First, I forgot to mention in my last chapter review, that Brian probably shouldn't be relating his sexual plights with Justin in front of Lindsay and Michael. It will give them bedtime fantasy-material.

This is turning out to be the dinner from hell.

So, someone from the precinct was hiding evidence before Carl got involved? Was that for Lindsay or Michael's benefit?

Good thing Ben came in and had the keys and business card copy. And Mel's law knowledge gets them around using it.

So, Lindsay is involved! Bitch! I'm going to guess here... but since Brian told Michael a few times that he wasn't going to go... I bet he DID tell Lindsay, and Lindsay ended up calling Michael... maybe even helped plan the bashing.

The only thing I can't understand is WHY and HOW it has taken them this long to piece all the evidence together... because it was in a flashback two years ago, about Carl getting the evidence and him and the kids going through it.

I love how you have taken actual canon events and put your own little twist on them to make this story plausible.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2019 1:20 pm Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

Wow it is coming out the scum is floating to the top

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2019 1:36 am Title: Doctor Doctor This is the News

Great update.  Oh that Mikey is just so awful.  Wonderful writing as always.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2019 5:03 pm Title: Doctor Doctor This is the News

This was good. So all those years ago there were so many clues and hints dropped. But it seems everybody was falling for the wholesome facade. But at least David put his foot down about 'you can cook... nothing wrong with your hands'.

So, David and Brandon, huh? It will be interesting to find out the story of why David sent Michael home. What was his breaking point?

I can imagine Michael's anger at not being recognized. And his comment about brunets being better than blonds, didn't quite get him what he wanted. He was passed up by both Brian and David for a blond. Take that, Michael!

I'm also looking for more Michael excuses and to see how the Tiffany items come into play. Who actually found them? How long did Michael have them? And how did he not expect anyone to find them? How will Michael explain them? Questions, questions... looking forward to finding out all the answers.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2019 3:48 pm Title: Doctor Doctor This is the News

Mikey just can't help himself.  He's not getting out of this one.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 10:42 pm Title: Why - Brian and How - Michael

Michael isn't pathetic he is just Evil!

I do hope he spoke out loud and someone recorded that he Did Attack Justin and steal their rings.

No one seriously noticed that Brian was falling apart (Just Like On The Show) he was dying without Justin, just like Justin was dying without him they can't stand not being with each other.

That is the kind of love stories and movies are made of cause Brian and Justin would actually die on the same day if the other went first.

That is a Love Michael and Lindsay don't understand cause they see Brian as an object to possess and others can covet, they see everyone around them as their toys and if an outsider comes in and shows their toys what life is like without them then they get dangerous.

Because someone else has usurped their place and no one has time to cater to their demands.

Brian found his Happiness with Justin which the Gruesome Twosome hated because they know deep in their hearts that Brian would never choose them so they tried to break them up but that also backfired.

So what is Lindsay's part in this story and will she be going to jail too?

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 6:11 pm Title: Why - Brian and How - Michael

It was ridiculous for thinking Micheal saving Brian. In Qaf Seriously, Brian came out of abusive past, work hard and became successful business man. Couldn't die for being 30 yrs. Brian has much important reasons to think from that night (met Justin & his son Gus.)

I like Jen coming forward for Brian. Shame on Micheal face is evident.

Love the updates. Beautiful written. :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 5:17 pm Title: Why - Brian and How - Michael

Wow, fantastic chapter and writing.  Love that the truth is spilling out.  I was taught as a child not to hate, to strongly dislike someone or something, but I have to admit the one person I do hate is Michael.  You can tell how powerful your writing is when it is possible for a real person to feel so much emotion for a fictional character.  Can't wait to see how bad it gets when Brian knows for sure that it was Michael.  FIREWORKS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 12:58 pm Title: Why - Brian and How - Michael

This is going good, can't wait for more!

Ta

Deb L

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2019 10:28 pm Title: The Fall and the Snake Hiss

Very interesting POV from Michael's side: the jealousy building and bubbling here and there. Great job!

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2019 2:12 am Title: The Fall and the Snake Hiss

Michael can't get a clue. Even going over the past all signs are there and as usual he ignores them.

Oh Ben, what hornets horn did you just put out there. I don't think Justin knew about the scarfing episode. But if Michael didn't save Brian that night would it matter if Justin was still alive? With Michael's inflated ego, if Brian had died Michael would've thought it was because he was moving away to be with David not because Brian was in crisis about turning the big 3 0 and wanted to just try scarfing for the ultimate climax.

Author's Response:

Sophiesmom! Oh you beauty, thank you for that idea - will credit you in the next chapter!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2019 6:18 pm Title: The Fall and the Snake Hiss

Yes Idiot do keep painting yourself into a corner there is no way you are getting out of this mess without jail time, then it will be Lindsay's turn and with her habit of being a Whore to any man who can give her something it shouldn't be long now.

It has been years and still Michael and Lindsay couldn't tear Brian and Justin apart though they did cause a few rips but no permanent damage because their bond is stronger than ever.

Michael is going to wish he had stayed in away because he is not escaping this anytime soon.

Thanks for the Update 😃

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2019 11:04 am Title: The Fall and the Snake Hiss

Thanks for update