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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2019 2:28 am Title: The Consequences of Being Cocksure

Sometimes it's hard to keep all this straight.  So Mikey kept the rings wanting them changed so he and Brian could wear them?  Who did break into the loft?

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2019 8:24 pm Title: The Consequences of Being Cocksure

Wonderful update.  Fantastic writing as always.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2019 5:52 pm Title: The Consequences of Being Cocksure

Stupid Is As Stupid Does and Michael along with Lindsay are all kinds of Stupid!!

Michael also like Lindsay gave them all the evidence they need to convict them both.

Ben always could do better than Michael and now at last he can finally have a relationship where someone loves him for just being him and he will never be a placeholder for anyone ever again.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2019 4:48 pm Title: The Consequences of Being Cocksure

I love how Brian says that "I never knew how much I hated it until you weren’t able to do it anymore!"; I don't know if it's a habit coming from Debbie, but it's something that is highly annoying. Justin was right to insist on "for emergencies".

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2019 3:14 pm Title: The Ring of Truth, Yes He Didn't Admit It...But He Never Denied it Either!

Hey... nice update. So, did Ben find the rings in the dresser while putting away the clean laundry? I can hardly wait to see how you spin this! Especially if Tiffany's contacted the police. But then, shouldn't Michael have been arrested? I guess I will have to wait.

It was funny how the scowls were on Michael and Lindsay's faces at the diner. I can almost picture them.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2019 6:08 pm Title: The Ring of Truth, Yes He Didn't Admit It...But He Never Denied it Either!

Oh Shit!! 

Michael You Are So Dead They Are Going To Have To Bury You Thrice!!

Love the FOCUS reference it makes sense but was completely over Michael's head then and now.

Yeah Knew Brian Loved Justin From The Beginning It Was so Obvious!

Brian was going to propose?!

Justin was too?!

Daph made a good suggestion about Justin's rings it truly is the symbol of their love for one another.

So Michael is going to jail Forever Now!

Wonder if Lindsay had a hand in the robbery and if she did what she would've taken?

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2019 4:57 pm Title: The Ring of Truth, Yes He Didn't Admit It...But He Never Denied it Either!

Excellent the "FOCUS" acronym! Emmett is a wonderful person and friend.

It's great to see Ben finally being proactive.

Where dd they find the rings or where did Michael hide them?

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2019 4:17 pm Title: The Ring of Truth, Yes He Didn't Admit It...But He Never Denied it Either!

New surprises every chapter. 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2019 3:49 pm Title: The Ring of Truth, Yes He Didn't Admit It...But He Never Denied it Either!

Love it, thanks

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2019 3:43 pm Title: The Ring of Truth, Yes He Didn't Admit It...But He Never Denied it Either!

Wow, great chapter.  Love the blue and green rings.  They finally got Mikey.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2019 3:26 pm Title: The Ring of Truth, Yes He Didn't Admit It...But He Never Denied it Either!

Michael still thinks he can get away with what he did?  So he's the one who robbed the loft?  Does the box mean that Brian had bought rings as well?  Amazing chapter.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2019 6:40 pm Title: His Mouth Comes Back to Taunt Him

Good Update. Mikey should learn to not move his lips and say "Ridiculously Romantic." I think (as if) they didn't have enough evidence, it will be one more nail in his coffin.

But, where else is Lindsay going to come in? In seems that both Lindsay and Michael are determined to blame the other. Are they co-conspirators - or not?

I guess we have to wait and see. Interesting developments.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 8:34 pm Title: His Mouth Comes Back to Taunt Him

Oh wow I love how you are tying up every little ends and leading the gruesome twosome to prison 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 4:48 pm Title: His Mouth Comes Back to Taunt Him

Boom Goes The Dynamite Again!!

Michael deals his own fate by trying to be clever when he is beyond all doubt Stupid!

I wonder if anyone else was watching Michael and decided to record him mouthing the words along with Brian?

If Lindsay cleaned the apartment of blood isn't that tampering with evidence twice?

Wonder how many of Lindsay's lovers will be sticking around to help when she stands trial and all her secrets start flowing out?

What doctor was stupid enough to jeopardize their license for Michael and what did he promise it do for such a request?

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 3:51 pm Title: His Mouth Comes Back to Taunt Him

I guess the police could ask for the sealed records; if there is suspicious event.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 1:12 pm Title: His Mouth Comes Back to Taunt Him

Let's try this again.  Hope you get the 10 this time

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 1:11 pm Title: His Mouth Comes Back to Taunt Him

Sorry it too away my rating , again.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 1:10 pm Title: His Mouth Comes Back to Taunt Him

Oh, great chapter.  Love when Michael is in trouble.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 12:48 pm Title: His Mouth Comes Back to Taunt Him

Wow.  The noose is getting tighter and tighter.  Good job.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2019 1:38 pm Title: But Was Thwarted and Now Enmeshed

So, Lindsay is looking at - at least three years... it could be very possible a judge might not be that lenient considering the extenuating circumstances. The fact she was trying to break the glass (which was stupid on her part, as the cops can get them anyway) tells me she might be guilty of more that she's hoping to hide. The thing I'm most curious about, is what's her reasoning for being there in the first place when she was supposed to be lying down? And why did she want to be there? I'm looking for an ulterior motive. And HOW did she have a hose handy to wash the blood away? Why did she have a hose if she didn't know she needed to wash the blood away after Justin was bashed? Maybe she planned for someone else to do it, but Michael beat them to it?

Anyway, I'm thinking Mikey might be scratching his head to come up with another lie:

I'm enjoying it!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2019 3:24 am Title: But Was Thwarted and Now Enmeshed

👍🥰. Loving where this is going 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2019 8:10 pm Title: But Was Thwarted and Now Enmeshed

Got caught up.  Great story and writing.  Of course, I love when Linds and Mikey are in trouble.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2019 5:38 am Title: But Was Thwarted and Now Enmeshed

This was great. Never seen morons like Lyndsay & Michel. They are Truly a Remarkable pair jeolous idiots.

ThankYou for updates. ðŸ™‚

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2019 3:19 pm Title: But Was Thwarted and Now Enmeshed

Very interesting and unexpected development!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2019 2:38 pm Title: But Was Thwarted and Now Enmeshed

Three Years?!

Well it s a start and Lindsay will look so lovely in Orange along with Michael she is so stupid and that stupidity got herself caught just like Michael.

Their arrogance and hatred for Justin and Brian  lead to their downfall because they do hate Brian for not loving them or choosing them or following their demands.

Michael thought he had a car in the hole with proof of Brian cheating but all he got was proof that Brian and Justin were always meant to be together and nothing he or Lindsay did could stop that.

Thanks For the Update 😃

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