[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2021 1:51 pm Title: CHAPTER 5
Just reread this. I don't know if you'll get a notice of this comment. Sich a good story and love Mikey getting his just desserts, bitter ones to boot. >>>Cat
Date: Aug 15, 2021 6:43 am Title: CHAPTER 5
This was great!! Michael got what he deserved, and Deb, I can't feel sorry for her either. I'm just glad that David realized that Michael was the one who hurt Justin, and sent him back home, where Brian had figured it out as well!! You can't fool Brian Kinney!!
Date: Apr 16, 2021 6:33 pm Title: CHAPTER 5
did read it again
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2020 2:36 am Title: CHAPTER 5
Mikey deserved what he got. And Deb, she never learns does she? Dont get me wrong I like Deb. But when she smacks, someone needs to smack back. Great writing.
Date: Jan 06, 2020 3:27 am Title: CHAPTER 5
Wonderful ending
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2020 3:18 am Title: CHAPTER 5
Really loved this. Such great writing.
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2019 7:16 pm Title: CHAPTER 5
This was really good and I enjoyed it very much.
Thank you for your excellent stories and writing. Look forward to you finishing 'Bundle of Joy' too.
Deb L
PS I loved it when Mikey got his! Mind you, so did ranting Deb!
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2019 3:55 am Title: CHAPTER 5
Cathy,
This story was great. The events of your story also fit in well with the episode. It definitely seems like something a jealous Michael would do.
I heard in one interview that it actually was Hal who wielded the bat in the garage scene because Alec McClure (Hobbs) had already left before they filmed it and only Hal was available.
~Lorie
Date: Dec 09, 2019 2:08 am Title: CHAPTER 5
Wow, this was a really great read, well written. I think you captured Michael's devious nature spot on. As for Debbie in the last chapter, I think this too, was spot on. She would definitely go into psycho momma mode for her "precious Michael"
Thanks for this alternative ending to the bashing.
Thanks for sharing
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2019 2:07 am Title: CHAPTER 5
Absolutely perfect. And, Deb was done so well. Just what was needed to show the real person she was. Loved the dance scene so much. I watch it over and over. Wow, it is great that they added the little bit of Randy and the champagne. Love your writing. Maybe you will have a new story for us one of these days. Have a happy holiday season.
Date: Dec 09, 2019 2:07 am Title: CHAPTER 5
This was the perfect ending for this story.
You wrote Debbie exactly how she would have reacted in season one. A bit over the top, but still Deb.
Michael, what's to say? Should have learned to keep his mouth shut. Learned from Deb that that is highly impossible.
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2019 1:43 am Title: CHAPTER 5
Fantastic. All the times Debbie call Brian an asshole and kept praising Michael makes this chapter so believable. Brian helping Vic when Deb runs off is so him. Emmett became such a take charge guy which is wonderful. Great ending especially the latest dance moves in New York.
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2019 11:44 pm Title: CHAPTER 5
Perfect ending in so many ways, especially with the return of Justin's memory. It was further proof that Michael had NOT won! Ya did good, Kid!
HUGS and LOVE,
~Nichelle
P.S. Thank you so much for the card. Your thoughtful, loving kindness towards me always brings a tear to my eyes. Thank you so much for simply being YOU.
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2019 11:16 pm Title: CHAPTER 5
Oh Cathy, this is so perfect. I so enjoyed reading this. Thank you for a wonderful story. -Cat