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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2020 1:54 pm Title: More Learning, She's Back and an Arrogant Step

Can't wait to see how Lindsay does hunting.  Am looking forward to Emmett going off on Michael.  That should be epic.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2020 6:10 pm Title: The Fruits of His Labour

Great chapter.  Wow, surprised that Dixon is Michael's father.  Terrific writing.

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Date: Mar 05, 2020 1:42 pm Title: The Fruits of His Labour

I love this story but it always leaves me puzzled.  Brian is vampire and warlock?  How does that factor in?  How can anyone say that the two of them together can't rule?



Author's Response:

Hiya - sorry for the late response. the explanation for that is coming in Chapter 35...happy reading.

Thanks

Miss Merlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2020 5:02 pm Title: The Fruits of His Labour

So another layer of Brian is revealed and it doesn't scare Justin and it helps strengthen their bond by the time they get back to Pittsburgh they will be unbreakable?

I guess one they bond sexually whatever makes Brian lethal will be tamed because he and Justin will be like Soul-bonded which is much harder to break?

Dixon suppressing Justin doesn't sound like it was his idea so who knows Justin's true heritage?

Deb and Dixon made Michael?

For that alone they should be destroyed!

Justin learning from Brian what they can handle and what they can't takes away some of the vulnerability he probably feels when around other vampires.

Nice that everyone is keeping an eye on the progress their Kings are making but they don't really need to see everything😅

Deb should really watch her back because the noose is dangling close by and soon it will be around her neck along with Michael.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2020 11:38 pm Title: Facing History, Dispelling Myths and Messing with Heads

thanks for update

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2020 12:42 am Title: Facing History, Dispelling Myths and Messing with Heads

Great update.  Love when Mikey isn't getting his way.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2020 7:45 pm Title: Facing History, Dispelling Myths and Messing with Heads

Sadly Michael doesn't realize he's not going to get what he wants.  Sad for him, lol.  Justin and Brian are now closer then ever.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2020 5:22 pm Title: Facing History, Dispelling Myths and Messing with Heads

Of Brandon had come it means some serious stuff is about to go down Deb may have a foreboding feeling but she won't see it coming when Brandon strikes.

I thought Michael wanted to be free to pursue his pursuits David is pursuing Christopher who is going to have is his exams while Michael Will fail another.

Deb and Michael's arrogance is getting worse the more they are denied access to who and what they need it will be the reason for their greatest downfall.

Brian is helping Justin get stronger while also dispensing some rumors by the time they get back they will be quite the force to be reckoned with and a danger to anyone who pisses them off.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2020 12:38 am Title: What's New Pussycat

Great update.  My only problem is with reading so many WIPS (yours and others) all at once, I sometimes forget that last chapter so I just reread all or part to refresh my mind.  Hate to say sign of age, but it is true.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2020 9:11 am Title: What's New Pussycat

thanks for update

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2020 5:24 pm Title: What's New Pussycat

If Brian and Justin are tracking the original origin of Herma then Deb and Michael are headed for quite a downfall along with Jennifer.

Lindsay thinking she stands a chance with Mel is hysterical but I look forward to Brandon giving her quite a challenge.

Secrets always have a way of coming out hope everyone is ready to handle the consequences cause it is very far reaching?

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2020 11:59 am Title: What's New Pussycat

Seems both covens have secrets.  But Deb is due for some serious correction.  Poor Vic.  Jennifer knows something.  Maybe our boys can find out what?

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2019 3:54 pm Title: History of Herma, Michael, Jennifer and Debs

*sighs* Obiously Whiny Michel done it. Snooty Mama Novotny favourite Baby. Its good seeing Jennifer raging on them. But what is locked Christopher memory? Is that to be fear off. Interesting.

Thank You for the update. Hugs. ðŸ™‚

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2019 2:07 am Title: History of Herma, Michael, Jennifer and Debs

Great update. Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2019 6:09 pm Title: History of Herma, Michael, Jennifer and Debs

Not surprising that Michael was the source of the original strain of Herma in the US he couldn't get laid her in the states so he had to go abroad, but who is manufacturing a replica strain?

Jennifer has a secret oiver Deb and Michael but will that save her if they choose to fight back?

Jennifer is scared of Brandon, why?

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2019 12:25 pm Title: History of Herma, Michael, Jennifer and Debs

Should have known that Michael was behind things.  But who locked the drawer and why?  Who brought in the new strain?  



Author's Response:

Hiya, can tell you about the drawer it was David as for the new strain...now that will spoil things.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2019 6:54 pm Title: The Feeling, The Scheming and The Reeling

Lindsay as well Michel have NO chance. Both make a perfect DumbA*** Duo. Mama Novotny scheming not gonna work.

Meanwhile lovely to see Brian & Justin upside down flirting. Cute. Enjoyed it. ðŸ™‚

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2019 6:50 pm Title: Hanging About and He Struck Again

"A little reciprocation please, thing about the gazebo..." Aww 😁

Awesome! Its Sweet. Love the update. Hugs. ❤

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2019 2:08 am Title: The Feeling, The Scheming and The Reeling

Amazing chapter.  Who would of thought the Jennifer was in league with Lindsay.  Okay as long as Justin learns that Emmett and Drew are together, things should be fine.  Brian and Justin are coming together.  Wahooo.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2019 12:13 am Title: The Feeling, The Scheming and The Reeling

Great update.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2019 5:37 pm Title: The Feeling, The Scheming and The Reeling

Lindsay has much chance of getting Mel as Michael does of getting a brain I think she has realized that there maybe consequences if she isn't a queen besides pissing Jennifer off.

Drew and Emmett are a couple?!

Sneaky Devils! 😊

Brian and Justin are going to have some serious rows and some down and dirty make up sex that will have everyone sweaty and fanning themselves from the aftershocks lol

Going to be very interesting

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2019 2:57 am Title: A History Lesson and a Lesson Taught

I just finished the last three chapters. I am almost sickened by Michael's display .. kissing Deb on the mouth... was Debbie ONLY disgusted because he hadn't brushed his teeth?But, if he is ADOPTED... she's NOT his mother... so it's plausible.

I'm curious what Debbie lost, or did Michael steal it when he leaned over her?

Debbie is so power hungry. That's why she wants Michael to get in. She will end up being the ruler... not Michael.

I liked how Gus and JR were brought in. Scholars... smarter than Lindsay and Michael.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2019 2:14 am Title: Hanging About and He Struck Again

Great chapter.  Wonderful writing

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2019 5:52 pm Title: Hanging About and He Struck Again

Deb is pure devious but without realizing it I do believe she is about to meet her match and it won't be pretty for her.

Michael is disgusting and he will pay for it.

Does Jennifer have the same plan as Deb?

That is Justin just coming into his full strength imagine what he will be like at full strength?

Imagine all the fun Brian is going to have helping him get there 😜

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2019 3:10 pm Title: Hanging About and He Struck Again

Amazing.  What happens when they finally have sex?  The more we find out about Michael and Deb, the worse they become.  Does Vic know?

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