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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2019 5:45 am Title: Chapter 14

Who's Michael's POA? Debbie said, "It worked for Lindsay,"... yep, and she been in a psyche hospital for fourteen years. Michael's POA should sign him in, as he's not fit to make his own decisions. And Deb should have let him try and take the neighbors car. Arrest the mother, and throw the key away. Grand Theft Auto. But, oh my. Poor Jenny having to witness that and knowing it was fake. But, it will be interesting to see just how far Brian and Jennifer will go with this.

Poor David and Melanie. NOT! Gabriel got them both! And Melanie is a lawyer. She KNOWS you ALWAYS tell your attorney everything. As Harry said, 'egg on the face'.

Hank has a new family, one that will love him for himself. I'm surprised Grandpa Cameron was okay with his son being gay. If he's so worried about 'appearances'... what is he going to say to his son for embarrassing the family name?

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 4:45 am Title: Chapter 14

Your killing me. I'm just loving how the characters have grown. I don't read WIP. But you hooked me. 

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2019 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 14

More please 🙏🏽 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2019 2:35 pm Title: Chapter 14

Amazing chapter!!!

Gabriel and David: I love how Gabriel managed to treat David like he is not above the average.

Harry and Mel: she knew she shouldn't have lied, even by omission; too bad she just did that and more. Harry served her with an honest truth that she will need some time to digest, if she ever does.

Jenny seems to be on the right way to get what she needs.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2019 5:37 pm Title: Chapter 14

Sweet! Having fun time reading it.

Michel doing this charade, will loose him Jenny for good. Is his daughter just a play toy for him. I like this Deb not falling for Michel Bulshitts*.

As Brian said they have a wedding to prepare for. He will show Michel that Justin was Always More important for Brian.

Mel should had already came clean but Harry took a wise step. Good for him. Thankyou for the update. Hugs, 🙂

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2019 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 14

Yes they should use Michael thinking he is reliving his past to prove he is unfit to be around Jenny he is stupid enough to play crazy let's just make him that way instead and with enough people to witness it perhaps Michael will enjoy a stay in the hospital for a time?

Jenny is seeing that Mel and Michael aren't worth her time anymore so she isn't going to expound the energy it takes to get them to think beyond themselves, instead she will use her time to help Gus and Ian find a permanent home that will make them all happy and while also finding herself again.

David going after Hunter is stupid but then again he was stupid enough to marry Michael and add him to his accounts so obviously he makes Michael look semi smart.

His pathetic jealousy of Brian has cost him a lot but hurting Jenny and Hunter will cost him more because Jennifer will not stand back and let any member of her family be tarnished by the likes of David and his Daddy, they don't know power until they come up against one pissed off Jennifer she will make them go fetal and wish they had never heard of The Country Club Sect.

Hank came to Deb to warn Jenny and is helping Brian and Justin in the process while also saving himself, with time, patience, love and understanding he will show his dad and grandfather that they where wrong about everything and that is isn't blood that taints you sometimes it is the family you are born into.

Hank like Brian will show them that he is twice the man they will ever be and that family isn't blood but the ones who help guide you when you fall and love you when you aren't perfect 24/7.

Mel lying to get lawyer was stupid but what will make her more stupid is walking into that courtroom with just Michael by her side is an idiot but a lawyer who defends themselves will always have a fool for a client.

So that means it won't be hard to prove to a judge where Jenny truly belongs because all they have is mud to sling while Gus and Ian will have the truth on their side.

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2019 10:34 am Title: Chapter 14

Love this chapter.  Mikey play acting and not being believed.  Poor Brian having to go along with it.  David finding out he isn't as hot as he thinks he is.  Hank actually listening to Deb and getting help.  Jenny telling her mother what she thinks of her and her manipulations that aren't working not even on her lawyer who isn't her lawyer.  Good job.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2019 9:00 am Title: Chapter 14

Oh and all I can say in reference to Mel's meeting with Harry is BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Not only did Jenny let the bitch have it, but Harry did TOO! Serves her right!

Okay, it's 5 am, time for a little nap because I have an appointment at 8. I swear these bouts with insomnia lately have me reeling BUT having this to read definitely made it bearable!

HUGS,

Me again!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2019 8:55 am Title: Chapter 14

Spectacular chapter!!!! First, let me just start off by saying- or more accurately, CUSSING- that Michael needed to be SMACKED SO HARD that he was physically sitting at the right hand of the Devil. That little mother ! And then he had the nerve to....LAWD HAM TURKEY I could have chewed bullets and shot every single one of them into the crack of his ass! Hopefully, whatever plan the family comes up with will be to Jenny's good, while getting that sorry excuse for a sack of bones out of their lives for good! That Dirty Mother-Shut-Yo-Mouth needs to piss off the RIGHT person so he can be outfitted for some cement boots! For real!

Anyway, moving on before I start sounding like I'm cussing on network tv again: I LOVED Jenny's talk with Gus and Ian. I appreciated how honest and open with her regarding Lindsay's condition and the resulting breakthrough. I believe that after being repeatedly lied to, and systematically emotionally abused by her so-called parents, she needed to be gifted with ALL of the information, even if some of it was theorized. At least, it all got her to thinking and being able to see the truth versus the fiction Mel and Michael had been spouting to her all her life. I also think that knowing Lindsay remembers her will go a long way in restoring Jenny's self-worth.

Next was the conversation between David and Gabriel... BRAVO, Baby! That was one helluva encounter and one I don't think David will forget anytime soon! First, his arrogance in thinking to discredit Hunter and the backpeddling, trying to come off as a concerned parent made me want to reach through the screen and snatch his larnyx out. I outright nodded my head and laughed in Gabriel's assessment of Sir Sanctimonious Snakeskin, as he picked apart David's true motives for not wanting Hunter and Jenny around. But I actually cheered aloud when Gabriel put the big PIN in the metaphorical revenge balloon David had been blowing. I'm so glad that Jennifer and the family had the forethought to hire him on Hunter's behalf. There's no doubt that David is desperate on so many levels that he would use anyone in his goal of self-preservation. Too bad for him that he didn't employ that same theory when he married his trophy. I would feel sorry for David but... Nah! My feelings just aren't set up that way! He deserves everything he gets- and that will ultimately be taken away- simply because he's a first-rate DUMBASS!

The situation with Hank actually broke my heart for so many reasons. His cries and pleas for attention has resulted in addiction, and yet his grandfather... WHOO CHILD! If that man were a RL person instead of a fictional character, I would have marched myself over there to smack him blind! It's no wonder Hank has always been angry; look at what he's had to endure at the hands of so-called family! Hopefully, Blake can help him and set him on the right road to recovery, so that he can design a life for himself. Sobriety is a lifelong journey, that begins with the will to reinvent yourself. I really hope he succeeds.

So looking forward to more and to the wedding fourteen years in the making. It's sure to be EPIC!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Chelle 

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