[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2019 2:46 am Title: Chapter 16
Wow, made it this far. Fantastic story. Is there some reason why I couldn't get the writing larger? The small print is hard on my old eyes. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2019 9:30 am Title: Chapter 16
Should we be concerned for Ian's safety? Michael has seriously lost it! Justin had the magic words for cracking the veneer. Deal with it Mikey... Brian treated you like a trick! But, now that Michael has admitted it's an act...
They must have set everything in motion telling the guys in Woody's what to say.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Nov 06, 2019 12:34 am Title: Chapter 16
thanks for update
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2019 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
The last sentence is disturbing: I hope Gus is not a new obsession for Michael.
What would happen if Gus went to see Lindsay during a bad day? Would it make her mood worse or will she see that Gus is an adult now and therefore she isn't in the past anymore?
Michael had some difficulties to keep his story straight.
Great job! Alex' POV is very interesting.
Is OLD an actual disorder or the result of your great imagination?
Author's Response:
OLD is an actual disorder with all the things Alex and Ian described.
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2019 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 16
Michael couldn't even even pull off insane right he ruined his cover pretty quickly and now Brian has been sucked in again to Michael's childish drama.
Alex is wasting his time with Michael it is just another excuse for why Michael refuses to see that Brian never loved him beyond friendship and even that didn't last.
Michael isn't crazy he is just a Selfish, Spiteful, Brat who feels Brian is his property that everyone can admire but no one is allowed to touch without Michael's permission.
He wants to be envied by everyone on Liberty Avenue while he sits on his flat Ass reading comics and thinking he is in the same league as Brian or better.
Just Lock Michael Up Todd The Box In The Ocean and the Key In The Volcano or Vice Versa lol
I wonder if Deb really heard about the description of OLD cause her constantly calling Brian and her treatment of him to protect Michael sounds pretty Damn close too.
Gus wanting Lindsay to know that he loves her and her imperfections is a good thing it will help her see that she doesn't have to put on a act with anyone they accept her flaws and all.
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2019 6:15 pm Title: Chapter 16
I wander if Alex can help. Must be scary to see Mikey looking at Gus like that.
Date: Nov 04, 2019 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 16
This story is like a drug. Want more!!!!!