[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2019 2:40 am Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. Wanted to read more and get to the end of the chapters that are posted, but I see the next 3 are tiny print so I will have to do them at different times. Love this story. It is something so different. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2019 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 17
I'm very happy that Lucas has finally realized what is important. David is a grown man, still wanting to depend on Daddy to fix his screw-ups, whereas Hank as a child, has taken steps to fix his life. I have no doubt he will succeed too, especially with his new 'family's' help.
I'm confused with Mel. She was already told she better use that money for Jenny, and she turns around saying she needs a place to live. But, just how long is back support going to provide a roof over her head? But, Gabriel will flay her in court, and all the support money will be lost to her, as it will revert to Gus for Jenny's wellbeing.
I'd love to see her try and bring Brian up in court... I can hear the judge now... Ms. Marcus, I thought we were here to discuss your daughter, what does Mr. Kinney have to do with this?... then when Mel starts her rant, the judge will rule her unfit to be a mother. I mean, how is it Brian's fault she lied, doctored documents, and lost her job? This could get very entertaining.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2019 12:10 am Title: Chapter 17
Brian and Justin will make sure Hank is well looked after and that no matter what he will always have a family to help him when stumbles and falls, Hank is taking the steps to being the man that he can one day be proud of before he seeks others approval.
Lucas is realizing what actually matters in his life not in his world and perhaps one day he can look in the mirror and be proud of the man he sees staring back at him.
Getting away from the nest and finding better people will help him see that the world is a better place when you have true friends and family to share it with.
Leaving David to clean up his own mistakes is something he should've done years ago but he wasn't ready to grow up just yet, David, Michael and Mel are perfect for each other they are all selfish people who enjoy blaming others for their failures.
Wonder what Mel is going to do when she realizes she will never see one cent of that Money and that trying to tarnish Brian in court will pretty much guarantee no law firm will touch her and even The Big Q is above her pay grade.
Patrick makes it easy to talk to him because he has no ulterior motive than to just be a sounding board while you vent, his kind nature is a wonderful deterrent to someone who has been hurt before, cause he just wants everyone to be happy and if they can't be that right now then try for okay and move forward from there.
Patrick truly is a Unselfish Human Being.
Brian and Justin did Good😀
And by the time Justin finishes negotiating with Brian they will be Amazing!!😆if
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2019 7:44 pm Title: Chapter 17
Glad to see that Lucas is worried about his grandson and not the family name. With Brian and Justin's help Hank will turn out ok. Afterall he has Patrick on his side. Love how Gus and Justin, not to mention Lucas, let Melanie have it. Her and Dave are two of a kind.
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2019 4:13 pm Title: Chapter 17
It's great that Hank is coming out of his bad habits. His grandfather seems actually concerned and ready to be involved in his life and rehabilitation.
"Poor" Mel, unable to quit her fixation on Brian: she really doesn't see the big picture.
I love the way Justin is closing the unexpected deal.