[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2019 3:01 am Title: CHAPTER 2: CHAMPAGNE DREAMS and THWARTED WISHES
Have read two chapters. Sorry I am late in doing so. I have been playing at writing a B and J story. I am not a writer, but this crazy story has refused to leave my brain. I write it as a reader, not a writer. It has gotten so long that it makes me nuts, but I see an end in sight. As to this story, I love it. Wonderful writing as always. Hope all is well with you.
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2019 2:19 pm Title: CHAPTER 2: CHAMPAGNE DREAMS and THWARTED WISHES
That's indeed a good question!
I'm impressed by Lindsey's level of plotting. Brian must feel so bad to realize what his best friends are trying to do.
Is Mel going to pursue the wedding ceremony?
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2019 5:06 pm Title: CHAPTER 2: CHAMPAGNE DREAMS and THWARTED WISHES
I love the fact that two people who can't make a decision without getting Brian's opinion first think they know what is best for Brian or Justin.
They are too self-absorbed to realize that Brian doesn't need their advice and that Justin surpassed them into adulthood when he was ten.
Lindsay's only success was being a teacher to those with talent while Justin was born with it and Michael is still fourteen waiting for that unfinished handjob.
Lindsay got off Lucio cause I would have brought that mansion down on her head but the words I would've used to render her deaf, dumb and mute.
Michael and Lindsay can take their opinions and shove them up their non-existed Asses.
Brian and Justin getting out of Pittsburgh is the right thing for them I just worry about Gus who will be used to get Brian to bend??
Yeah You Hooked...Damn You! 😆😆😆
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2019 4:26 pm Title: CHAPTER 2: CHAMPAGNE DREAMS and THWARTED WISHES
I am almost ready to cry... you took this simple plot... and made it phenomenal! I am so very proud of you! HAPPY TOO!
For not really putting ANTI in the category... you sure wrote like an Anti little beaver! hehe...
Between the title (Thwarted Wishes) and the door slamming upstairs is almost making me think Mel might have walked out... all the time rethinking some of her own decisions of late. And Lindsay's: rethinking? You can’t mean… Yep, dear, little Lindsay... I DO think she rethought about marrying a manipulative bitch, whose real dreams are wanting Brian and the white picket fence.
And Brian... I'm liking the more grown-up way of thinking and also realizing that Justin is a sure and good thing. And Emmett sounds like a very good friend... and Brian sees that too: wrapping his arm loosely around the neck of one of his closest friends. It will be interesting to see how Ted comes into play.
I just have one request: please, please, please, please... let us be privy to the conversation Brian has with Michael.
It will be interesting to see what the decision about the job in California entails... but knowing it wasn't offered on Justin's merits and credentials, I can't really see him accepting it.
I did read the reviews from the first chapter, and it seemed everyone's interested in how the wedding came about. Four words to those in question: READ PLOT BUNNIES, PEOPLE!
THIS IS SO GOOD! THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT!
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2019 12:33 pm Title: CHAPTER 2: CHAMPAGNE DREAMS and THWARTED WISHES
Darn we still don't know how they ended up married. You corrected one of the storylines that always bothered me and gave us an Em to die for. Loved it.
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2019 9:40 am Title: CHAPTER 2: CHAMPAGNE DREAMS and THWARTED WISHES
NOR Lindsay NEITHER Michel ever came across as good or concerning friends as I watched 8 times after watching 1st time. Their thoughts are pointless & petulant.
Justin & Brian are right to live their life their way. Its non of family buisinees As That family put bet on their happiness & love.
Curious to read MORE. 🙂
Date: Sep 27, 2019 9:20 am Title: CHAPTER 2: CHAMPAGNE DREAMS and THWARTED WISHES
I seriously hope you are writing this quickly... I want more NOW NOW NOW... please lol
I really like the characterization of "the gang" in this story... Brian is more mature (even if in his own thoughts mostly) and calling out Lindsay on her BS just makes me happy... and having Mel see it without as much fight is always great!
Date: Sep 27, 2019 8:30 am Title: CHAPTER 2: CHAMPAGNE DREAMS and THWARTED WISHES
Michael and Lindsay are still so evil but fortunately Brian and Justin see their games. I expect more when they know that Brian and Justin are married. They will stay married is not it? It's so funny when they surprise everyone by living their life as they want. Nobody decides for them. Great chapter!
Date: Sep 27, 2019 8:04 am Title: CHAPTER 2: CHAMPAGNE DREAMS and THWARTED WISHES
Omg I am so dammed loving this series I love all the slam downs of the evil twins, I cannot wait for another glimpse into our boys lives
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2019 5:19 am Title: CHAPTER 2: CHAMPAGNE DREAMS and THWARTED WISHES
This was a fun chapter. I love the way Emmett is looking out for Brian and not putting him down with regard to taking care of Gus. He's just concerned about it being for a longer stretch of time. And that can be difficult on anyone, even those who are full-time 24/7 parents.
Really enjoyed the whole take on Brian giving them the tickets for their honeymoon. Now I'm wondering if the munchers really did get hitched in your story. LOL! Wouldn't that just chap Lindsay's ass for Mel to call off the wedding only to find out that Brian and Justin are married. LOL! Can't wait to find out Michael's reaction and what Lindsay and Michael will both do when they find out both Brian and Justin will be in California reagarding jobs!
Looking forward to much more!
*Hugs*
Deb
Date: Sep 27, 2019 4:00 am Title: CHAPTER 2: CHAMPAGNE DREAMS and THWARTED WISHES
Wow that was not expected. Still not sure how they ended up married. Can't wait to find out.