[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2019 4:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
I wish Michael would shut p his voice peels paint and makes dogs cry.
Ted being the godfather is good because at least he will care about the baby which Michael never will (And never did on the show which was promptly ignored to further the story) and Ted would never use Brian's son to make stupid demands on Brian.
So Nancy wouldn't shell out a dime to celebrate her first grandchild that is so shocking.
Lindsay looking down her nose at everyone while trying to keep the attention focused on her makes my skin crawl like the way she treats Lynette, should worry about a sister you made into a enemy she might have some heavy dirt she would love to share over a drink.
Very inconsiderate of Deb to center the shower on Lindsay while ignoring Melanie who will also be the mother, just because she isn't carrying the baby doesn't mean her role she be forgotten.
Brian is not playing by either Michael or Lindsay's rules but he is creating his own.
Happy that he started his agency early.
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2019 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1
So very happy to see a story from you... I love the premise... and Samantha is great for inspiration... isn't she? When you said that about some instances might seem familiar... I really wouldn't worry about that, as MANY stories resemble each other. e.g: the loft robbery... Michael stealing the Rage profits...
But, if a past story inspired you to write, more power to them. As long as you take that plot and put your own spin on it. GOOD LUCK!
NOW... I'm assuming Brian is based in New York... with his own Ad Agency? That's how it kind of read to me. And, I'm proud of him for seeing through Michael and Lindsay already. (Is there a back story to that?) Bt, for knowing all of Lindsay's manipulations... I'm surprised he actually donated! It will be interesting to see if he gives up his parental rights or goes for a third parent adoption. I'm thinking it's best to not give up those rights... he might have to fight Lindsay down the line.
I love his closeness and respect with Melanie and Ted.
Looking forward to more...
HUGS ~ Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2019 7:20 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this first chapter. Your character presentation is all I like.
I think I'm going to love this story because I love when Melanie and Brian (helped by Ted and Em) face Lindsay and Michael and do not let themselves be manipulated.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! I was afraid people won't like Brian being this out of character this early on in the story but I'm strongly feeling it!
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2019 2:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Loving this. Mikey with foot and mouth disease. Brian and Mel bonding. Great story line.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love your stories btw! the one where Justin comes back and help getting Brian of jail is one of my all time favs!
Date: Oct 16, 2019 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1
That was great......loved the first chapter and am looking forward to Justin being
introduced. Looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Justin is about to make an appearance. Let's say he's one chapter away!