[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2019 4:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Melanie has risen up to Lindsay's games and the fact that Brian isn't interested in Lindsay beyond friendship and she like Michael is skating on thin ice with that.
Brian got Melanie a Car!
Lindsay s hung to piss fire and Michael will be waiting for Hell to freeze for Brian to show up at the loft lol
Lindsay seriously believes Brian is a husband and Melanie is the cow who should be blessed to be in Lindsay's life, too bad she hasn't realized that it is only in her mind that could possibly happen.
Deb should save the beating because it doesn't faze Michael he is nearly immune to.her form of punishment by now especially when Brian is around.
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2019 11:45 am Title: Chapter 2
Ha-ha! Melanie got the new car.. not Lindsay... so, if anything happens... the car will be solely in Melanie's name, right?
Not sleeping at the loft... does he have a little blond with him?
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
You got this one right! I was waiting for you to see the story! xoxo
Date: Oct 16, 2019 7:28 am Title: Chapter 2
It's better and better I love to watch Lindsay and Michael make capricious kick and sulk, you describe them perfectly. And Brian buys a car for Melanie !! Is Brian already with Justin and live a quiet life without interference? I can not wait to read more.
Author's Response:
You're about to discover what's going on with Justin and Brian! I bet you'll like it!
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2019 6:53 am Title: Chapter 2
Welcome to KD as a writer! You're already off to a great start on this. Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Okayyy!!!! A comment, sorry a positive comment, by the master herself! happy dancing :D
Date: Oct 16, 2019 4:00 am Title: Chapter 2
Loving this!! Can't wait for Justin's appearance. Laughing at seething Lindsey and foot eater whinny Mikey! LMAO!! Great start to the story can't wait for more!! Love Brian bought Mel a car.... poor little icky Lindsey so mistreated boo hoo!!
Liz
Author's Response:
there will be a lot of seething Lindsay and foot eater whiny Michael! I'm happy you're loving it!
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2019 3:01 am Title: Chapter 2
This gets better and better.
Author's Response:
<3 <3 <3
Date: Oct 16, 2019 2:29 am Title: Chapter 2
This is so good already. Thank you thank you. I love an anti Michael and Lindsay story. More more.
Author's Response: Im glad you're liking it! I'll be updating everyday, sometimes more than just once a day, depending on how much i manage to write. But more is coming tjat's for sure. Thanks for reading.