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Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2019 8:05 am Title: Chapter 4

And now Michael !!! Oh yeah I love it. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2019 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 4

Boom Goes The Dynamite!! rofl

Reviewer: Prisca512 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2019 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

Really excited to see where you go with this story. Love anti-micheal/lindsey stories.  Thanks for sharing💙

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2019 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm surprised Mikey's head didn't explode...LOL This just gets better and better, great writing can't wait for more.

 

Liz

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2019 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oh this is so much fun.  There is going to be gossip and Michael is not going to come out good.  Wonder what Lindsay hoped to accomplish?

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2019 4:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

LMAO!!!!!! Yep, I'm sitting here laughing like a hyena that now Lindsay and Michael can't have ANY delusions left about just who Justin is. I have a feeling that baby or not, Lindsay is going to probably faint dead away because not only is Brian partnered with someone who is extremely talented and well-off, but because of the reality of her 'Trap Brian' game has officially been lost.

As for the Screech-mobile, well I could imagine that he will be depressed for days. Maybe even enough to give the Avenue's eardrums a much needed, and well-deserved break from his voice and presence. 

I can't wait to read MORE!! Great job!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2019 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 4

Excellent!!! Liberty Avenue is going to be buzzing for hours!

Michael really is dumber than usual.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2019 1:40 pm Title: Chapter 4

Entertaining as always, Lori! I do love me some whiny Michael and manipulative bitch, Lindsay, any day.

Keep up the good work... and answer my email... okay?

XOXO  ~Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2019 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 4

Love this story, absolutely love it.  I really, really dislike Mikey and Linds so you are doing a great job with them.  Fantastic writing.

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