[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2020 2:28 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY
Great chapter. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2019 3:10 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY
First, let me say, imagine my TOTAL shock tonight when I signed on and seen a dozen updates from stories I read, and not one of them came into my email!!!! I AM P-Oed! I was starting to wonder if everybody had taken a hiatus from writing. Granted, I've been busy, but I certainly would have stopped in to read a chapter here and there! ARGH! Okay, rant over.
Nice chapter. I enjoyed the talk between David and Hank, which also answered some of the questions I had. But to contact Justin and get the sound bite of all the voicemails that Michael (and I assume Lindsay) left, was genius. There could have been no doubt left in David's mind what he needed to do regarding Michael.
It sounds like Laurie was raised the same WASP way that Lindsay was. Gutter WASP. It certainly wasn't the refined way Jennifer Taylor was.
Professor B... a potential love interest? Any particular Professor B? Hmm... I had to chuckle... but I can't explain why right now. I might have to PM you. It's almost too funny.
Well, onto the next chapter.
HUGS ~ Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2019 7:39 pm Title: CHAPTER TWO: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY
Interesting back story with Hank and Justin who is an artist, but also a very brainy and astute businessman.
Date: Oct 23, 2019 9:21 pm Title: CHAPTER TWO: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY
So I'm hooked on where this is going....
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2019 6:07 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY
David did has Eyes finally Open. I agreed to your points.
"GO HOME MICHEAL." Is the answer. Rather than feeling pity, His Fans should realize why Michel got sent back from Portland. Big Q was ok But Michel failed to be A Responsible Man at 31, hold a relationship, Whereas Justin even at 17 is Much more mature & responsible than Michel.
Justin didn't know what he was in for but he still Step Forward And that Took Guts. Can't be said same for michel. *sigh*
David's decision about moving on is a firework to be happen though. lol. wonder how 31 year old infant will react. This is another thoughtful chapter. I miss B&J in it but Enjoyed it. ThankYou for update. 🙂
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2019 2:35 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY
So it looks like the Camerons are moving to California too. And it looks as if Hank is trying to hook his dad up with Ben. Not a bad move.
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2019 12:36 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY
Yeah David doesn't want to admit it but he and Brian are living a similar life with people who are too selfish to care about anything but their own needs and the Power they have over others.
David like everyone else (Except for Justin) fell for Michae Michael's act and it but him hard in the Ass (At Least He Has One!) always look beyond the surface there the truth lies, and besides with a mom like Deb how could you not think he was Self-Appointed Prince with no motive beyond basking in the blinding light of Brian Aiden Kinney while sitting on his flat Ass waiting to be taken of care by his loyal subjects. (Swear He is Related to Lindsay and Laurie)
Hank admiring Justin who was making a name for himself at seventeen while Michael couldn't find his Ass with giant arrows and a strobe light at nearly thirty Hank is going to be a very successful young man before he enters high school.
While the best Michael can do is the Big Q and his fantasy world of comic book super heroes.
Laurie is so Lindsay which means her fall should be public and very painful she will freak when she loses her access to David just like Lindsay to Brian.
It always surprises me that while Justin was forming his own business and working to finish high school Michael considered him The Gold Digging Twink, when if Michael and Lindsay weren't vying for position in Brian's bed they were trying to suck every dime out of his bank account.
Who Exactly Is The Gold Digger Here?
And what will they do when they find out Justin was making money before he left high school and will be making more from his commissions in Pittsburgh, his new job in California and will have more money than Lindsay could dream when Craig loses to his grandparents and Jennifer?
Plus Lindsay and Nancy trying to take on Jennifer should be popcorn and ice cream worthy to behold.
Michael running home with his tail between his legs is a revolting thought but him being denied All Access to Brian will be Hilarious for some and earsplitting for others cause that whine will reach epic proportions and so will Debs'
Wonder if Professor B is one Hot Benjamin Bruckner?
glad i.could crack.you.up hope I can do.it again later😄
Thanks For the Update 😃
Author's Response:
Hey Blue... the answer to your question is...HECK YEAH!! Even that surprised me. But yeah, I just couldn't see him with Michael in my story... well at least not in the 'forever' sense. But it should be interesting to see how all of this plays out, especially since there is one other 'history' that no one yet knows about where Ben is concerned.
Stay Tuned, Darling!
HUGS,
~Nichelle