Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2020 3:28 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: REALITY BITES

Think the addition of the girls is great.  Again, fantastic writing. I always like Vic.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2019 5:50 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: REALITY BITES

Does a certain blonde realtor own the building the loft is in? It sure sounds like it has Jennifer Taylor written all over it.

Christ, I can't believe Deb stood by and allowed Lindsay to act like Gus was an imposition. And what the hell bug crawled up Deb's ass blaming Brian for not answering his phone? Michael's shitty attitude is okay, because Brian didn't answer his phone? That woman needs an attitude adjustment, and Daphne is just the one to give it. She may be small, but that girl has all the fine WASP breeding, and smackdown's are going to be her specialty. And why ban Michael? I wish he'd have a job as a dishwasher, or something! Can you imagine Daphne as his boss?

The plotting that we were privy to when Michael and Lindsay forgot that we were sitting there and could hear every word. It's too bad a secret recorder couldn't have been left down in the couch cushion.

All money is now going between Mel, Ted, and Brian, right? Lindsay cannot physically get money from Ted, correct?

I am curious just what Michael may have tried to do in reference to the coach. As far as the tricks, yeah, we are all aware of his mantra, "He's had you, so fuck off."

Vic is a very wise, smart man. At the start of his and Mel's conversation, I couldn't help but think how much of that would have went over the other three's heads. But, when he talked to Mel about getting her and Gus out, I think it's high time Mel moved herself and Gus to sunny California.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 7:57 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: REALITY BITES

Certainly not upset you have to write more to give us the story lol 👍👍 I really enjoyed Vics intervention and then his quiet advice to Mel. I also enjoyed the new perspective on Blake I hadn't thought of that side of it. 

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 3:19 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: REALITY BITES

Great chapter.  I like Vic.  I have always felt he was a great character and had such wisdom but due to his age, he wasn't a focus.  I like his ideas for Mel.  She should take LIndsay and make notes- then take them to the court.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 12:31 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: REALITY BITES

Mel has to stop stalling before Lindsay, Michael and Deb bring her down too cause they wouldn't hesitate to say that she ignored Gus's crying too or neglected him to go out instead of taking care of her responsibility.

So why continue to hand them ammunition and instead take it out of their hands by taking Gus away, it will save Melanie as well because she is seeing the true Lindsay for who she has always been but managed to hide well, a Spoiled, Self-Absorbed, Mean Over-Inflated  Princess who is use to getting her own way.

Denial Is Just Denying The Obvious.

Brian protected Deb and she used her supposed form of love to abuse him while also demanding more, if Deb chooses to give Michael one cent of her retirement fund then she deserves to suffer.

How much is in that fund?

Perhaps it is time for Vic to take his own advice and get out while he still can?

Wonder what fabulous outfit Lindsay actually needed the money for?

Of course Rodney isn't intimidated by Deb she has nothing on him and he can see through her act like cellophane, even Blake can see through Michael, Deb and I bet Lindsay to the nastiness they keep buried inside.

Aunt Del sounds Amazing and will probably be very useful to Daphne cause lets face it Deb will be fired when she tries to bully Daph and doesn't stop at the first warning.

Does a certain Blonde True Wasp Queen Mom own the building Brian and Justin's loft resides?

Damn I Can't Wait Until It All Comes Crumbling Down Around Them!!

Thanks For the Update 😃