[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2019 7:13 pm Title: CHAPTER ONE: TWO-HUNDRED and FORTY-ONE DAYS
I imagine how David must have been feeling after hearing Michael little play. I bet Emmett will be very happy to see his ex-roommate come back.
Date: Oct 28, 2019 1:32 am Title: CHAPTER THREE: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY 2
great
Date: Oct 28, 2019 1:07 am Title: CHAPTER THREE: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY 2
Michael is such a whiney person- I won't call him an adult since he is only an adult in age, not actions. I just absolutely love the talk between Em and Daphne- their solution is priceless. Michael feels so entitiled and he really is not entitled to anything. He really should grow up but won't
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2019 7:46 pm Title: CHAPTER THREE: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY 2
Love how Daphne and Em managed to spike Mikey's plans to stay. Perfect. Looks like he's getting just what he deserves as a mommie's boy.
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2019 4:49 pm Title: CHAPTER THREE: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY 2
Emmett and Daphne living together is a smart move cause unlike everyone else who has been beaten into submission by Deb to fulfill Michael's wishes and her demands Daph isn't afraid to fight back and isn't intimidated by Deb or her red fingernail, she can twist Michael and Deb into such knots it will take them hours to realize they were insulted and got their Asses handed to them by a teenager.
Hell Daphne can out Wasp Lindsay to the point she will wish she had never met Daphne and make her wonder what exactly Nancy had been teaching her. (Molly can out Wasp Lindsay and Nancy and she is a kid lol)
Everyone who actually can't stand Michael and aren't exactly that fond of Deb will enjoy the show of watching Daphne knock them both down a peg or two it will certainly spread fast that there is a new voice on Liberty Avenue who isn't ashamed to fight for everyone's piece of mind and hearing. ( Plus Jennifer making her appearance on The Avenue and standing shoulder to shoulder beside Daphne will help turn the tide against Deb)
And Daphne's parents might like the fact that she is surrounded by people who will look out for her and she will be close by.
Emmett and Drew Boyd are together thanks to George and Malcolm.
Michael should get use to being with Deb cause no one wants him and no one wants Deb and her opinions in their lives, she like Michael.enjoys suffocating everyone to make themselves feel important.
I see Daphne and Jennifer's presence on the Avenue giving everyone the chance to say what they really feel about Deb, Michael and perhaps Lindsay too the truth needs to be heard it is time they did.
Seems getting out of Pittsburgh has helped Justin blossom and I bet it has done wonders for Brian too, the monkeys are off their back for the time being.
Oooo I Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!
Thanks For the Update 😃
Date: Oct 26, 2019 3:17 pm Title: CHAPTER THREE: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY 2
Lol awesome move by Emmett and Daphne and the whine moves on and I wonder if mummy dearest has changed her locks lol
Date: Oct 26, 2019 5:56 am Title: CHAPTER THREE: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY 2
Thank you for adding Emmet and Daph to help the Mikey story. I love the idea of Emment and Daph living together and the twist of Drew being realted to George.
I hope Mikey gets used to his version of Hell with Ma......lol cause nobody else wants him that's for sure.
Can't wait for the next chapter as always.
Liz
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2019 5:06 am Title: CHAPTER THREE: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY 2
Seriously Deb & Joan can have Michel as their son. The eternal whiny Mama Boy. Rather than coddling, mikey needs A Life long reality throttling.
Brian & Justin are Better without them.
Qaf Directors & writers truly disappointed by giving Hal moron character so much leeway. IF it were not for Gale & Randy characters, I would have stop watching it mid 2nd season.
Glad for Emmett getting new roommate. ThankYou, for the wonderful update. 🙂
Date: Oct 26, 2019 4:47 am Title: CHAPTER THREE: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY 2
Poor little baby, no one loves him like he deserves (I mean demands).
Date: Oct 23, 2019 9:21 pm Title: CHAPTER TWO: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY
So I'm hooked on where this is going....
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2019 6:07 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY
David did has Eyes finally Open. I agreed to your points.
"GO HOME MICHEAL." Is the answer. Rather than feeling pity, His Fans should realize why Michel got sent back from Portland. Big Q was ok But Michel failed to be A Responsible Man at 31, hold a relationship, Whereas Justin even at 17 is Much more mature & responsible than Michel.
Justin didn't know what he was in for but he still Step Forward And that Took Guts. Can't be said same for michel. *sigh*
David's decision about moving on is a firework to be happen though. lol. wonder how 31 year old infant will react. This is another thoughtful chapter. I miss B&J in it but Enjoyed it. ThankYou for update. 🙂
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2019 2:35 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY
So it looks like the Camerons are moving to California too. And it looks as if Hank is trying to hook his dad up with Ben. Not a bad move.
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2019 12:36 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY
Yeah David doesn't want to admit it but he and Brian are living a similar life with people who are too selfish to care about anything but their own needs and the Power they have over others.
David like everyone else (Except for Justin) fell for Michae Michael's act and it but him hard in the Ass (At Least He Has One!) always look beyond the surface there the truth lies, and besides with a mom like Deb how could you not think he was Self-Appointed Prince with no motive beyond basking in the blinding light of Brian Aiden Kinney while sitting on his flat Ass waiting to be taken of care by his loyal subjects. (Swear He is Related to Lindsay and Laurie)
Hank admiring Justin who was making a name for himself at seventeen while Michael couldn't find his Ass with giant arrows and a strobe light at nearly thirty Hank is going to be a very successful young man before he enters high school.
While the best Michael can do is the Big Q and his fantasy world of comic book super heroes.
Laurie is so Lindsay which means her fall should be public and very painful she will freak when she loses her access to David just like Lindsay to Brian.
It always surprises me that while Justin was forming his own business and working to finish high school Michael considered him The Gold Digging Twink, when if Michael and Lindsay weren't vying for position in Brian's bed they were trying to suck every dime out of his bank account.
Who Exactly Is The Gold Digger Here?
And what will they do when they find out Justin was making money before he left high school and will be making more from his commissions in Pittsburgh, his new job in California and will have more money than Lindsay could dream when Craig loses to his grandparents and Jennifer?
Plus Lindsay and Nancy trying to take on Jennifer should be popcorn and ice cream worthy to behold.
Michael running home with his tail between his legs is a revolting thought but him being denied All Access to Brian will be Hilarious for some and earsplitting for others cause that whine will reach epic proportions and so will Debs'
Wonder if Professor B is one Hot Benjamin Bruckner?
glad i.could crack.you.up hope I can do.it again later😄
Thanks For the Update 😃
Author's Response:
Hey Blue... the answer to your question is...HECK YEAH!! Even that surprised me. But yeah, I just couldn't see him with Michael in my story... well at least not in the 'forever' sense. But it should be interesting to see how all of this plays out, especially since there is one other 'history' that no one yet knows about where Ben is concerned.
Stay Tuned, Darling!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2019 10:39 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: TWO-HUNDRED and FORTY-ONE DAYS
You ARE soo Right. That what the moron was doing in Qaf, In a way he gaurding Brian di**k untill he found David, then Ben's. *shudders*
Michel was/is such an idiot for harassing Justin & his art. Justin should gladly poke a long Crayon stick up Mikey a** With hot red chilly paste.
Michel has NO GUTS. Hal first expression was really was his LAST impression. He ruined BTS moments too. Brian & Justin deservely got attention from very 1st moment, even Emm.
I am With You & your Amazing fics. Hugs! 🙂
Date: Oct 20, 2019 1:16 pm Title: CHAPTER ONE: TWO-HUNDRED and FORTY-ONE DAYS
ineresting
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2019 9:13 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: TWO-HUNDRED and FORTY-ONE DAYS
I really like Anti, but I'm ready to see where you take us inside Michael's brain. And if Lindsay and Michael learn their lessons the hard way, why not? I can not wait to read more even though I am sad there will not be many B and J. Thanks for this new story.
Date: Oct 20, 2019 2:17 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: TWO-HUNDRED and FORTY-ONE DAYS
Thinks he's so fucking entitled yet he really isn't. Can't wait for that truth to hit him square in the face.
Bravo David.
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2019 6:21 pm Title: CHAPTER ONE: TWO-HUNDRED and FORTY-ONE DAYS
Michael is such an A-Hole!
He has the nerve to get mad about Jennifer interfering with Lindsay but excuses that he and Lindsay are doing the exact same thing to Brian and Justin out of pure jealousy and spite because Justin is superior to them in everyway.
They want Justin to stop relying on Brian especially his money but that along w Brian's undivided attention is their main concern, Justin is functioning just fine without a safety net but they can't even breathe without calling Brian ten or thirty times a day to ask how to function.
They want to be able to sit on their flat Ass being catered to while treating Brian as their mule who works himself to death to satisfy the empty void that no amount of attention, applause or money will ever fill.
Case in point Deb paying the sole rent for Michael's two bedroom apartment where he hordes his toys, the moron had a job and yet Deb was the one who paid us rent and conned Brian out of money to help pay his and her bills too.
David couldn't see what Bank could that even though he is twelve he is also Michael's superior and way more mature.
I wonder if David recorded Michael and Lindsay's phone conversation?
I hope Emmett either moved or redecorated to his Fabulous style?
Talking to Michael makes talking to a brick wall more fun and the brick would actually understand the conversation.
y Your Muse is taking a big leap trying t.find redemption in Michael I look forward to the journey.
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2019 1:44 pm Title: CHAPTER ONE: TWO-HUNDRED and FORTY-ONE DAYS
Wow. I'd always wondered exactly what happened with Mikey and the Doc. I don't see that Cameron is being unreasonable. Unfortunately that's not how Mikey views it. While he's been sitting on his ass, the gang has moved on to other things.
Date: Oct 19, 2019 12:54 pm Title: CHAPTER ONE: TWO-HUNDRED and FORTY-ONE DAYS
SOOO good... you certainly do have the whineyness (yup I think I just made up a word) of both Mikey and Lindz down so well. While I, of course, miss B and J in the story, I appreciate further delving into these warped minds! lol
ps... write faster and faster LOL <3
Author's Response:
LOL! Hey Kathy. Trust me when I say I need to get these certifiable people out of my head ASAP. But the full installments concerning Michael and Lindsay are necessary evils, in that all of the issues occuring now are acting as a kind of precursor for events that happen later. Well that is if I don't go crazy before getting it all down on screen first. LOL
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2019 9:33 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: TWO-HUNDRED and FORTY-ONE DAYS
Oooh... I forgot to add how much I like your banner and how you used Season 2s intro pics to make it with. Ingenious! (Although there is an absence of Ben...)
Hey! Thanks for the compliment on the banner. I wanted it to resemble an old movie, which of course is the one on a running tape in Michael's head. This is definitely going to be one of the most challenging fics I've ever written, especially given how I feel about Michael Novotny. He'll definitely still be in character for the majority of the series... but perhaps he'll actually be able to learn and grow a bit. At least, that's the plan. One thing is for certain though: He has some HARD LIFE LESSONS coming his way. And there isn't going to be anything he nor his Ma will be able to do about it. HUGS, ~Nichelle P.S. About Ben: He may make an appearance, he may not. But either way, Michael is in no way ready for another relationship of any kind. I won't torture another character the way David somewhat suffered with Sir Stupidity Leak.
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2019 9:16 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: TWO-HUNDRED and FORTY-ONE DAYS
Right off the bat, I have to say your story notes was a lot to take in. Very good explanation, though. The part about buying a novel is so very true. You might like a character... only to find out he's the bad guy. (same goes for a movie.) And I remember when I wrote Blinded, and my daughter read it (she has no foreknowledge of QAF) and she commented on how I wrote Michael. After my explanation (and the Anti followers)... she said, "If you REALLY want a challenge, either write him redeemable - or - as a really nice person." (which I can only think of a couple of stories that I really liked him in.) All that said, I'm VERY anxious about this... and see if he can come out of this *seeing the light* and redeeming his attitude and whine. You are a much stronger person than I am. LOL... Good Luck!
As entertaining as it was into the deluded mind of Michael... it was also vomit provoking at times. I seriously had to stop reading momentarily as I bleached my mind of him *practicing* to be good enough to hold Brian's interest. AS IF!
There's a lot I could rant about Michael and Lindsay... but it was interesting how you chose to have David tell Michael to go home. But, how did David get the recordings of Michael's phone calls to Justin? And, a question... we never found out Michael's reaction when he learned that Brian didn't go to New York - did we? THAT had to have blown Michael's mind.
And just to let you know, the comparison of Michael to twelve-year-old Hank was priceless! Huckleberry Sawyer, or Tom Finn- INDEED! I'm STILL LOL!
This brings me to *present time*. First, how can Michael expect his name to still be on the lease after more than a year and a half? I also wonder if he's aware of just how chilly Pittsburgh is going to be.
Second, it sounds like Michael was still in contact with Brian up until the manipulations were discovered. Is he really so thick-headed to think that Justin wouldn't let Brian hear those recordings? AND... he is so stupidly thinking Brian needs to apologize to him after everything he has done? I will be sure to wear my virtual earplugs when reading the next chapter, as I'm sure I will hear the whine and screech all 430 miles south when he finds out Brian is gone and the loft locks have been changed!
As I said, I'm totally with this ride, and seeing how you can *help* Michael. I do wish you the best of luck. hehe
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Oct 19, 2019 5:31 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: TWO-HUNDRED and FORTY-ONE DAYS
Another great chapter, I aways enjoy anti-Michael and anti-Lindsay as I cannot stand either of them. I will continue with this mostly Mr Whinney knowing you will add some B and J and some of the other favorites here and there as you work on Mikey and Lyndz (grusome twosome). Great writing as always and can't wait for the next chapter.
Liz
Author's Response:
Hey Liz!
Thanks for joining me on this journey. I know that as hard as it will be for me to write, is as difficult it will be to read. But addressing the situation of Michael Novotny (and later Lindsay) is one of those necessary evils that must happen if Brian and Justin are going to have a chance. Of course, everyone will make an appearance in this fic, no matter how small the role. But it has to happen so that Michael can make some informed decisions about himself and the way he is treated.
It will be a bit eye-opening for Debbie too, as Michael's HARD life lessons trickle down. Plus, she will have her own situations to deal with. All I can say about this work is that I applied the 'FIX-IT' tag for a good reason. Sometimes the storyline isn't the only thing that needs correction, but a MAJOR personality flaw within the characters themselves. And Michael alone provides me with a multitude of them to craft a story around.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 19, 2019 4:49 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: TWO-HUNDRED and FORTY-ONE DAYS
Well this will be a interesting trip! I love that you are really anti Michael and Lindsay writer as this is where I sit as well. The selfishness and vindictive nature of Lindsay and the jealousy and pathetic personality of Michael make for excellent written characters.
As a major Brian and Justin fan this is a interesting departure for me to stay with the gruesome twosome. Please throw in some lovely Cynthia and Daphne just to take away the constant bile these two invoke lol.
faboulous chapter of a amazing series as per usual I await the next chapters eagerly xxChris
Author's Response:
Hey Chris Darling! This is definitely going to be an interesting experience for me, too. Never have I loathed such characters as I do Michael. With Lindsay, I'm often ambiguous when reading other people's work. But within my own, I just feel an overwhelming compulsion to smack her and deliver the series of 'Set Yo' Ass Down' she's often needed during the series (especially in reference to S5 and that blasted article). So it's always a pleasure to deliver the metaphorical punch to the throat to Michael and Lindsay.
And not to worry, Michael is going to be getting some HARD life lessons delivered from every- and I do mean EVERY- corner. So will Deb, even if hers will be tempered just a little. But she needs to have some 'Come to Jesus' moments of her own where her son and his twin sister from another mister are concerned.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle