Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2020 9:39 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: SILENCE CAN SAY MORE THAN A MOUTHFUL

HOW THE HELL AM I BEHIND THREE CHAPTERS????

I'm catching up tonight, and with my sturdy carpenter pencil clutched in my hand, I wanted to leave a review.

I think Michael is dumber than a box of rocks. If he thinks he's going to be welcomed by David, he's sadly mistaken. 'Go home, Michael. Go home."

I'm very happy with the way you portrayed Morton Spitzer and his discrimination and homophobia. Unfortunately there are still some a-holes like him out there, but I do believe it is getting better. But, GOOD FOR JEFF! and the other's who lost homes, that he had to pay dearly. SERVED HIM RIGHT!

And what a yummy specimen you chose for Jeff!

And yay! Mel and Gus are going to California! I was wondering how you were going to get her out there. And thank god Lindsay is already old news. She would have loved getting her hands on that 289k.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2020 12:49 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: SILENCE CAN SAY MORE THAN A MOUTHFUL

Michael running back to David to lick his wounds and regroup is so him because without someone helping him he is pretty useless, but whatever he comes up with should be funny to watch fall apart.

Melanie winning a Huge settlement for her clients and getting such an impressive payment and a new job offer in California will help her go long way in rebuilding her confidence the Lindsay was stifling.

Plus Brian and Justin will love having her and Gus so close she they can raise Gus without outside influences, who when Lindsay realizes Mel and Gus are out of her reach.

Michael hitting Deb isn't really surprising I believe he had been wanting to hit back at her for years especially when she stands in his way when it comes to Brian.

But I don't see Deb changing her ways so everyone will enjoy Daph knocking her down a peg or two.

Michael has no remorse for what he said in the diner like Deb has no remorse for saying it or the other things she did to Brian and everyone else, I don't see her stopping trying to regain her control over her list boys or anyone else in The Avenue.

Jeff is going to be an interesting friend for Brian and Justin to meet I honestly look forward to that.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2020 3:28 pm Title: CHAPTER FOUR: SILENCE CAN SAY MORE THAN A MOUTHFUL

Here is hoping Michael "Delusional" Novotney doesn't win and loved watching Melanie come out so good in this chapter.

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2020 8:00 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: SILENCE CAN SAY MORE THAN A MOUTHFUL

Whatever you do please, i beg you, don't give Michael a happy ending