[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 8:24 pm Title: Chapter 9
I really LOVE Gus, and that he's spilling the beans on Michael and Lindsay. I have to laugh at how innocently it's all coming out, especially about Lindsay's stash of trinkets. Between Mel, Justin and Brian, Gus is going to grow up to be an amazing, and outspoken young man who is sure of himself and the people who love him.
Lindsay is such a BITCH! So in order to drive a wedge between Gus and the family who loves him, she implants these little digs into her son's head? What kind of selfish, spoiled... God! I wish there was a way to charge her with emotional abuse! Hopefully, there will be a way for her to get what she deserves; Michael, too because those two deserve each other!
Looking forward to MORE!
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
Great job! I really love that Gus is smart enough to know who his people are. Mel continues to prove to Brian that a DNA link doesn't solely make a parent. I believe that's a valuable lesson he will need going forward. And if he should have any doubts about it, he can certainly look to Gus and his Jussin's relationship for reassurance. As for the showdown on Sunday, YES! i'm soooooo looking forward to that. I wonder if while telling everyone that he and Justin are married, if he will also address Lindsay's spending. Hopefully while talking to Ted, Mel has officially begun unraveling her life from Lindsay's. We have a pretty good idea of what's going to happen with Michael already, and somewhat with Lindsay, but the issues with her will undoubtedly be a bit more complicated.
Now as for the length of the chapter itself, NO WORRIES! You have to write as you feel it, and for the record, many authors both here and in RL write scene by scene. So don't feel as though you have to keep up with some type of 'format'. For me personally, if I wrote scene by scene, most of my fics would be five-hundred chapters long LOL. You're doing a wonderful job!
It's NOT an easy feat to craft any type of story, while keeping the audience engaged wholly. So thank you for coming out of your proverbial closet and gifting us with this!
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 5:00 pm Title: Chapter 7
Alright now! Thank you, Emmett, for telling Ben the unvarnished TRUTH about Michael. I can't believe that he still wants to think the best of Michael when he's obviously being shown the worse. Em and Ted are right; Ben deserves everything he's gotten since he wanted to employ some willful blindness of his own.
BTW... I actually laughed loud and long at the 'Stewart' reference. I don't know anyone who ever watched AMC that wouldn't have picked up on it. Yet, even in all of that, Stewart would have known eventually that Michael was a grade-A asshole and kicked him to the curb without blaming the victim of Michael's obsessions. Ben needs to go sit in a corner until he can make better decisions!
Really enjoyed this and looking forward to MORE!
HAPPY WRITING AND HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
So Lindsay as been spending money like crazy and ignoring that Gus is gone huh?
After she made such a production about going on the trip with Gus wonder if Lindsay is cheating?
Glad that Mel has put away her pitchfork and is seeing that Brian was never the problem it was all and always Lindsay Wannabe Princess Peterson.
Yay Brian and Justin Got Married!!!!
That is going to cause quite the uproar but not as much as Justin perhaps selling his work for months and having a nice hefty bank account?
Or Lindsay having to explain what she spent the support money on when it is for Gus and Only Gus?
And what she has been doing the four days Brian was out of town with Gus and Justin that she was too busy to inquire about her son?
Yes Sunday Dinner Is Going to Reach Epic Proportions in Screeching😂
Thanks For the Update you are so good at packing so much in such a short chapter😀
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 4:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ben is an idiot who let his ex cheating lead him to.think someone as obsessed as Michael could ever truly love him back, he saw with his own eyes how Brian treats Michael compared to how he is with Justin and still be frank the Kool-Aid of Delusion to justify why he stayed with such a worthless idiot.
Emmett and Ted see the truth which is not the BS Michael is sprouting to justify his dreams that will never happen, they are even willing to walk away from Deb to protect their sanity and to not catch a murder rap.
Ben needs a kick in the Ass to jumpstart start his brain because that was a stupid thing to say and believe about Brian.
This is going to be quite an interesting week for everyone only not the way they all think it want.
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 3:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
You know you have me clicking the most recent button quite a few time a day. LOL!
Hopeful Ben gets off the Mikey delusional train and get a clue before he crashes and burns.
Date: Mar 29, 2020 8:23 am Title: Chapter 6
Good for Mel.
Date: Mar 29, 2020 7:52 am Title: Chapter 6
I like Mel who sees through Lindsay's bullshit. I await reactions when the so-called best friends realize that they can no longer manipulate Brian and that Justin is still in the photo.
Date: Mar 29, 2020 7:45 am Title: Chapter 5
Gus is so cute. he's going to have fun with his dads and Lindsay is a bitch
Date: Mar 29, 2020 3:59 am Title: Chapter 6
More...more please!
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 2:31 am Title: Chapter 6
It seems that Deb knew about the lock change. How fun.
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 2:25 am Title: Chapter 5
Gus is a very bright boy. Lindsay on the other hand is a BITCH!
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 2:19 am Title: Chapter 4
when Mikey figures out Justin never left, his thinking he's moving in with Brian will be a thing of the past.
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 2:09 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm loving Ted in this. He's finally seen Mikey for who he is. Why am I not suprised that Michael broke of with Ben the moment he thought Justin was out the door?
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 2:02 am Title: Chapter 2
Darn, I rated this a ten but when I hit submit it sad none. Wahhhh.
Date: Mar 29, 2020 2:00 am Title: Chapter 2
Well if that wasn't a surprise. Mel backing Brian. Then Lindsay had the nerve to bring up support for their son and 'her'?
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 1:53 am Title: Chapter 6
Now THAT was PERFECT!!!!! YES, MEL!!! Explode ALL of their delusions of self-importance! I will say that I was very happy with Deb's response to Michael's continued assholery. I hope that some other alarm bells start sounding off in her head to call Ben and get the real story. Not only is Michael hiding the truth, he's lying worse than a threadbare toupee about what he and Ben supposedly decided. I'm looking forward to that being exposed in all facets.
As for that cooing Thunder Twat, Lindsay, GOOD FOR HER!! Super Trick thought she was slick with all her slutting around, only to have her wife expose her secret in front of her worse enemy. Again, W2G, MEL!!! I hope that the first people that Mel contacts are Ted/Emmett, and then an attorney to begin the process of leaving little Miss Burning STD by the wayside. Also hopefully, she will be able to get a message to Brian immediately too, since we all know that he's the first person Lindsay is going to call with her sob story.
I'm SOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooooooooo looking forward to MORE!
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 1:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my. This is starting out soooo good.
Date: Mar 28, 2020 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
Another great chapter! Gus is so smart and sweet, good thing he takes after his Daddy and Momma Mel. Lindsey is such a nasty WASP, a good spray of RAID is needed.....lol!
Thanks for the update and looking forward to more of this story!!
Hugs,
Liz
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2020 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
Really enjoyed the conversation between Brian and Gussie. Also love the fact that Gus trusts Mel because his Bio-mom is obviously a damn twit! I can't wait until Lindsay gets hers; same for Michael. Looking forward to the FUN Brian, Justin and Gus are going to have without the specter of the Idiots-R-Us Association hanging over their heads.
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2020 4:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
So Lindsay thinks Jenny is ugly and needs improving huh?
Why isn't the ones who are you on the inside want others to match that ugliness too?
Lindsay should seriously look in the mirror cause Gus doesn't have anything that shows the are related besides DNA, he is all Kinney and perhaps soon he will be all Taylor-Kinney instead of Peterson which is not a good thing to be.
Wait until Justin hears this I bet he comes up with something that will make Lindsay realize she is still an amateur compared to him.
Mel and Jenny deserve something special from Gus, Brian and Justin while Lindsay gets nothing including acknowledgement when they get back.
Ignoring Michael and Lindsay will really bring out the ugly side they try so hard to deny and when they are ugly they are cruel so that means they will lose everyone.
Gus spending a week with Brian and Justin will be so much fun he will have so many stories to tell to almost evetyone.
Brian should look into getting his rights reinstated and together with Justin by his side let Lindsay know that if they take Gus out of state then since he has no rights she is on her own support wise.
Thanks For the Update 😃
Date: Mar 28, 2020 9:03 am Title: Chapter 4
I love this story! I'm waiting for more slaps for Michael and Lindsay. They will explode when they see that Justin is not gone. Ted is very great
Date: Mar 28, 2020 6:54 am Title: Chapter 4
Lol I enjoyed Debbie in this she went true to form as a heat seeking missile. Ted manipulated it beautifully. I love how intuitive Emmett is he has already worked out there is more to the trip to California.
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2020 12:09 am Title: Chapter 4
Deb, Michael and Lindsay always felt everything Brian did it would later do.was there business to talk over until the cows came home, they were always shouting that Brian should grow up but the moment he does they start freaking out and trying to keep him a child who.needs them.
Brian is seeing who really kept him back because it wasn't his sex life he could do more work than Lindsay and Michael on four hours of sleep than they could do on ten and still outshine everyone else.
Michael must have hit his head to think Brian would ever allow him to move in he would rather see the lift burn to ground and nothing every grow there again before that would happen, besides Justin would kick Michael up Captain Astro's Ass then let Michael into his home with Brian.
Ted outing Michael to Deb is funny though I would rather get the true story from Ben than believe anything Michael says and Deb is willing to sorta believe.
Melanie's backbone is coming out more she is not taking Crap from anyone especially those who feel she should be beholden to them.
It will be good to see everyone standing up against Michael Lindsay and Deb more instead of fearing them they don't have as much power as they think.
Carl is going to love sharing space with Michael!
Thanks For the Update 😃
Date: Mar 27, 2020 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
Loving this story can't wait for more!! Always love a good anti-Michael and anti-Lyndsey story.....lol
Great writing!!
Liz