Date: Jul 16, 2020 3:16 am Title: Chapter 2
Please continue the story...
Author's Response:
Becky,
Okay, one last chapter to show everyone else's reaction to the couple.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2020 7:55 am Title: Chapter 2
Lorie enjoyed the ending especially Michael's "constipated fish" look and how he took care of Ethan. Keep up the good work love your stories.
Author's Response:
Lorna,
Thanks. I'm glad I finally managed to write something. It's been difficult these past several months.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 14, 2020 9:40 am Title: Chapter 2
Aw loved it and it had a smacked down Mikey as well lol
Author's Response:
Chris,
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the story. Michael needs and deserves all the smackdowns he gets.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 13, 2020 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Maybe Michael and the fiddler can commiserate their losses together. Chin Rat his violin, Michael his bank.
Bravo Brian, took you long enough to put that weasel in his place. If Justin's still working at the diner, I'd be careful what I order if I were Michael. Ha!
Author's Response:
Sherry,
Both of them got what they deserved. I can't imagine if the weasel and the chin-rat ever got together, one whining and the other sounding like he was torturing a cat. Although, locking them together in a sound-proof room, so no one would have to listen but the two of them, sounds like a great idea.
Even though Justin would probably like to add to the weasel's food he has too much class, but he probably would say something to make him wonder, just to fuck with him.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2020 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Haha! At least Mikey knows the truth. Great chapter.
Phyllis, Yes, the weasel now knows that he will never have his fantasy come true, and he will never be able to come between Liberty Avenue's royal couple. He probably shook his head and cried all the way home. ~Lorie
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2020 10:27 am Title: Chapter 2
Absolutely loved this story. Always happy to see the back of the fiddler, especially if it means Brian has his Sunshine back. Really liked that our boys were finally open and honest with each other, and that Michael was shown the door once and for all. Could happily read much more involving these new and improved Brian and Justin.
Author's Response:
Nicky,
I'm glad you enjoyed this story. It felt good to have Ethan ruin the thing he cherished most, since he tried to ruin the person that Brian loves. And the weasel got what he deserved, being shown that he is not Brian's best friend and that he will never get what he wants because Brian is with the only man he truly loves.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2020 8:44 am Title: Chapter 2
Thank you for this second chapter. It was so nice to see Ethan lose everything. Brian should have hit Michael for what he did to Justin but good to hear Brian say that he had let Justin top him was also a nice punishment for the whiny.
Author's Response:
Marie-France
I realized that it would be great to see Ethan and Michael get what they deserved. Brian saying what he said to Michael hurt him worse than punching him would have done. It showed him that he has no chance of ever having Brian for himself.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2020 1:31 am Title: Chapter 2
I really loved this story. Ethan got a shock and whiney boy an even bigger one! I wish Brian had punched him though for attacking Justin, cos he seriously deserved it.
Thanks hun, always a pleasure to read your stories.
Deb L.
PS Have you heard from Star lately, as she hasn't posted for ages? Just a bit worried about her is all.
Author's Response:
Deb,
Thank you. The only reason Brian didn't hit the chin-rat was that he had promised Justin. But him tripping and smashing his beloved violin was probably worse. Those things are expensive. Glad you enjoyed the story.
~Lorie
I heard from Star about a month ago. She has been really busy at work and hasn't had the time or motivation lately to write. I'm hoping she is able to get back to it soon.
<3
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2020 12:00 am Title: Chapter 2
So glad you continued the story. Just wonderful and most everyone who writes knows that I alternate between dislike and hate for Michael. And, I could just see Ethan with his broken violin. Fantastic writing.
Author's Response:
Marilynne,
When I read the requests for me to aadd to the story I realized that I could get both Ethan and Michael back with another chapter. They both deserved what they got. And Brian didn't have to break his promise not to touch Ethan and he broke his own violin.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 12, 2020 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
Thank you for another chapter. I love your stories. Hope this means you will continue writing more.
Author's Response:
Becky,
You're welcome, and thank you. It's not that I haven't wanted to write. It's more like I had no motivation.
My two-year-old great-grandson, who I was very close to (he was my precious little Chickie. My angel) was diagnosed with cancer last November. He spent four months in the hospital undergoing chemo and radiation. He came out right before the Covid shutdown. He and his parents were staying with me because I'm a nurse (private duty, one patient) and they were worried because he still had a feeding tube. He was doing well and still undergoing chemo every other week. All the tests indicated he was getting better and then suddenly he wasn't. They did more extensive tests and found that the cancer had spread and he was terminal. He was brought home on hospice care, and passed away last month. So, other than some writing with other people, and editing for Nichelle I haven't felt like doing anything on my own. Hopefully now I will be able to write more, it helps take my mind off missing my precious little Chickie.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2020 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
I loved this!! I'm glad Mikey knows Beian let Justin top.
Author's Response:
Cathy,
Yeah, I just couldn't not let the weasel know. I'm mean like that.
~Lorie