Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2020 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 4

Justin has made the right choice.  Let's hope that Brandon doesn't mess it up.

Author's Response:

Hopefully, the quality of Justin's life is about to improve. Brandon certainly would try and interfere. Let's hope he can't. 

Thanks for commenting. 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2020 4:14 am Title: Chapter 4

Well, well... I'm guessing the malicious stare belonged to Brandon. And somehow, with Brandon witnessing Justin snugged up to Brian, I bet his life at Boy Toy just became a whole lot worse.

I see we have a predatory Brian again. (you do write him well in that capacity.) Although he does seem to be holding back a little, realizing Justin's vulnerability.

So now we have to wait and see what happens at Justin's door when they need to say goodnight. And will Brandon have followed them home, and witness it?

Hugs, Cathy

Author's Response:

You are probably right about the malicious stare. I guess we could find out soon...

I can't seem to keep predatory Brian out of my writing. I think it's my personal niche. LOL. Although, in this story, Brian is more sensitive than I typically write him...as we will discover as this continues on. 

More to come soon. Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:)