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Reviewer: artfuleye66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2022 8:44 am Title: Chapter 12

You don't need a passport to go from New York to West Virginia. I thinking your not america. You only need an ID card or Driver's license to go on a plane to go to another state . You only need a passport to go to another country.But I love your stoty

Reviewer: justinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2022 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

those rotten girls.how could this happen? we thinks that 

mel being a lawyer must contacts in certain agency's so it wouldn't be unthinkable that she might have bribed someone. 

hey sweet cheeks don't leave me hanging.

by the way I love this story 

Reviewer: justinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2022 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

those rotten girls.how could this happen? we thinks that 

mel being a lawyer must contacts in certain agency's so it wouldn't be unthinkable that she might have bribed someone. 

hey sweet cheeks don't leave me hanging.

 

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2021 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wondering if you plan to finish this…I really love this story. Merry Christmas ????

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2021 4:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

You dropped a bombshell and..... I hope your ok.

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2021 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 16

Please update! I love this story.

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2021 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 16

Please update! I love this story.

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2021 2:54 pm Title: Chapter 16

So any chance of an update in the near future. You dropped a bomb and then deserted us.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2021 7:08 pm Title: Chapter 16

What!  How did they manage that?

Reviewer: Manawah1ne Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2021 6:33 pm Title: Chapter 16

I'm not happy that brian is the father now he stuck with those bitches hope he fights for his baby away from them 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2021 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 16

And cue the <HORROR SCREAM> at that last sentence!!! 

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2021 1:27 pm Title: Chapter 16

Say what? Not a complaint, but I thought we'd get to see a smackdown. Ok. I wait patiently. >>>Cat 🥰

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2021 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 15

Just reread this. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2021 11:57 am Title: Chapter 15

Could Brian get the girls for theft, after all they didn't have permission to take the sperm they used.

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2021 10:09 am Title: Chapter 15

Love this story so much...I hate waiting for more.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2021 6:56 am Title: Chapter 15

Oooooo this is getting just better and better. Looking forward to another chapter. >>😍Cat

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2021 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 14

All that is needed is some blood from the baby and they will soon learn who is not the daddy.

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2021 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 14

Somehow I don’t think Michael’s done being an ass to Brian. Can’t wait for the Munchers to get theirs!!!

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2021 8:49 am Title: Chapter 14

Yes! Knock the munchers down a notch or two. Already ready for another chapter.😊😊

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2021 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 13

Do they actually think they'll get away with this?

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2021 6:19 pm Title: Chapter 13

thanks for update

Michael is one fucked up guy

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2021 11:07 am Title: Chapter 13

Looking forward to more of this. 🥰

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2021 3:32 am Title: Chapter 12

In fiction anything can happen.  That is a great part of it.  We don't have to follow the rules.  LOL  Wonderful update.  I love this story. Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2021 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 12

Why would Justin need a passport?  Michael is going to be mad that his mother approved of Brian marrying Justin.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2021 5:00 pm Title: Chapter 12

reading it again

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