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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2020 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

Love the way you've rearranged the storyline.  Can't wait to find out how Michael's betrayal goes.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2020 4:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ted probably shouldn't have told Michael that Brian wasn't at work.  Is he going to be a friend or foe in this story.  Love the start.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2020 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is different. Be interesting to see where iys going.

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