[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2021 2:45 am Title: Trapping the Spider to Free the Fly
I get the feeling Brian's 'I'm not gay' is all an act. Daphne with Justin means the fun is about to start. I live for your stories. They are so much fun to read.
Date: Jan 27, 2021 2:42 am Title: Trapping the Spider to Free the Fly
M just waiting patiently for Britin get together
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2021 2:27 am Title: Trapping the Spider to Free the Fly
Sooooo Brian sneaks around? As usual love this.
Date: Jan 19, 2021 4:34 pm Title: A Glimpse of Her Darkness and His Fight
Like this a lot! Can't wait for the story to develop. Not sure about the 'Ted' one, but probably need a couple more chapters for it to develop. As it is written by you, no doubt i will enjoy it too!
Thanks
Deb L.
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2021 6:06 am Title: A Glimpse of Her Darkness and His Fight
Vic is a really, cool neat guy, and just what Brian needs - a protector in his corner. And it sounded like he had possibly worked for Ron, or knew Ron. Is that correct???
And with the arrival of Daphne, and with Vic there, I think any access Lindsay might have had to Brian, will now be blocked.
But I am curious about something...
They are staying in a ritzy hotel. Lindsay's using a limo, and bossing people like she's the queen, so how is it that she's paying for this? Now that the will has been read, how will Lindsay afford these luxuries? Where will she be staying? That house was her father's - correct? She can't afford to go back and have Manning as her butler. She has NO CLOUT - NO MONEY - to have these people at her beck and call.
And I thimk the sooner she gets that bucket of ice water called reality tossed on her the better. Like: Who do you think you are to order me around? She's a nobody. She can't afford to pay these people.
So she needs to get off her flat ass, find a job, and find someplace to live, just like Ronald had intended.
Huh - maybe Daphne will get to throw the bucket of ice water... LOL...
Hugs,
Cathy â¤ï¸
Author's Response:
Hiya...not quite with Vic and Ronald; there's more to that relationship and it will come to light a litlte later. As for the hotel and limo, they have been provided by George. She thinks because it's her due but it's so that they can keep an eye her and Brian. If you mean her house etc in New York, thats hers, she got it from the money from Nancy's estate, so she's already wealthy, but is greedy and entitled...as per usual.
Happy reading.
MissMerlot [Nicole]
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2021 4:16 am Title: A Glimpse of Her Darkness and His Fight
Vic is the driver? How cool. Getting to know Emmett and Ted will lead to Justin. Shame Brian thinks he's straight.
Date: Jan 17, 2021 3:38 am Title: A Glimpse of Her Darkness and His Fight
What a bitch Brian has to put up with. Bring on Mel to put her in her place.
Can't wait for Daphne to show up. Calvary to the rescue.
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2021 8:47 pm Title: A Glimpse of Her Darkness and His Fight
Great update. Love this story and what a miserable witch Linds is. Terrific writing
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2021 6:49 pm Title: A Glimpse of Her Darkness and His Fight
Gahhh Brian’s still straight. Not a complaint. Just so Ewwwwww since with Lindsey. Lol. Looking forward to more.
Date: Dec 27, 2020 10:14 pm Title: The Reading of the Riot Act and the Will
Maybe that smack will shake the gayness loose inside Brian.
I see no love lost between Lindsay and Ron. The dreams of her and all that money just flew out the window along with Michael's dream of all that money and Justin too.
Bring in the reenforcements. they'er going to be needed.
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2020 7:34 pm Title: The Reading of the Riot Act and the Will
This is such fun. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us.
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2020 3:46 am Title: The Reading of the Riot Act and the Will
Woah! Did not expect Brian to get the 180* slap! And damn - the hair pull! I bet Lindsay thinks Brian's reaction is on her behalf! Fat chance! Love that Brian put Justin's hair in his handkerchief much to Lindsay's disgust!
Justin can certainly read Lindsay as the spoiled little rich bitch that she is. Gotta love Emmett telling Lindsay he wasn't afraid to slap her either! LOL!
Ohhh! Can't wait to see Daphne in action regarding Lindsay... and hopefully Michael, too! Maybe Lindsay will make that comment about her hair color being natural in front of Daphne, Emmett or even Justin and get her ass handed to her. LOL!
Ted can certainly shut Lindsay up.
Bravo, Ronald! Brian gets a million dollars and Lindsay can't touch it!!! Yay!!! So glad that Lindsay only gets her stock in the company and Justin gets the controlling stock and the rest of the estate! Ronald was a very smart man!
Really enjoyed the interaction between Brian and Emmett; that was sooo Emmett.
Poor widdle, greedy, Mikey is going to lose out on marrying a multi-millionaire. Maybe he can marry Lindsay? They seem pretty compatible.
Twallock! LOL! The perfect word to describe Mikey! *dries eyes from laughing*
Loving this! Can't wait for Chapter 3!!!
*Hugs*
Deb
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review Deb! Daphne will certainly be schooling Lindsay and then some - if you think Cyn as an assistant was fierce, ooh boy! And as for the estate that Justin gets let's just say that Lindsay is going to be shrieking a lot louder when she finds out what else daddy got up to in her absence...and keep in the back of your mind, her very annoyed former attorney...
Oh speaking of Michael and Lindsay marrying...well that's another story.
Happy reading
Nicole [MissMerlot]
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2020 3:14 am Title: The Reading of the Riot Act and the Will
What a great chapter. Love this story.. Great writing.
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2020 3:07 am Title: The Reading of the Riot Act and the Will
First, thank you so much for the quick update to this story. You're spoiling us! (But I'll take it!)
Lots to consider here, and I have some questions...
Ted mentioned Vic and Deb... is Debbie still going to be Michael's mother? If that's the case, Justin must know them. So it's Brian that Ted wants them to meet?
Lindsay has shares in the company. So she's really not destitute. And even though the company is called 'Kinnetik', that was still Ronald's company?? And Brian has been possibly running it? So, will he run Kinnetik, but not own it? It's owned by the shareholders?
Now, my observations - I'm assuming Ronald knew of the pact Justin and Michael made about getting married, so the clause he put in about not marrying for five years, was to put a stop to any wedding bells between the two. This will also give Brian a chance to 'come to his senses' - and be able to get together with Justin. And aw shucks, Mikey can't marry Justn and get his greedy hand on the millions!
Brian can't spend his million on anything but 'HIMSELF' - so Lindsay can't finagle any money out of him.
Are they going to Woody's tonight? By the time Brian is hit on 50 times, he might start WISHING he was gay! LOL... And after Justin's nap, will he show up there too?
And where does Ben come in if Ted is arranging for Em to get together with Drew?
Looking forward to being spoiled SOON again!
Hugs,
Cathy â¤ï¸
Author's Response:
Hiya...since this is your PB, I feel I should answer some of the questions raised, it won't be a spoiler but should make the story interesting.
Nope to Debs and Vic being mother and uncle - they're related to him, but not saying how yet.
Brian and Ronald never went into business...Kinnetic is all Brian's - the reason f r the bequest will be explained in the next chapter.
Yes to Ronald knowing and about the pact and he does want Brian to come to his senses...but he had other chaps in miind for Brian and Justin!
And that's all you're getting my friend.
Happy reading
MissMerlot [Nicole]
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2020 12:58 am Title: The Reading of the Riot Act and the Will
Brian not gay? Did I catch that right? Pigs do fly if so. Very different and oh so good. More soon please.>> Cat
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2020 5:39 pm Title: The Princess and the Wannabe Prince...Who's Actually a Frog
Just saw the new banner! I LOVE IT! Great job! And it fits the story so well!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 25, 2020 6:47 am Title: The Princess and the Wannabe Prince...Who's Actually a Frog
Ooohhh! I love it! Can the 180 please happen soon?! Michael needs one, too! Love this amazing first chapter! Looking forward to more!
Deb
Date: Dec 24, 2020 8:55 pm Title: The Princess and the Wannabe Prince...Who's Actually a Frog
Can't wait to see where this one goes!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2020 3:04 am Title: The Princess and the Wannabe Prince...Who's Actually a Frog
Nice twist. Michael is Justin's best friend and just as nasty. It should be fun seeing Lindsay and Justin as siblings. I am going to enjoy reading this.
Date: Dec 24, 2020 12:04 am Title: The Princess and the Wannabe Prince...Who's Actually a Frog
I want to see the 180!!! It would be glorious!!
Lindsey is going to flip out, struck out with Brian and now to find out she has a half brother.......Epic!
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2020 2:26 am Title: The Princess and the Wannabe Prince...Who's Actually a Frog
Wow, I love this story already. I never was a fan or either Michael or Lindsay and you are writing them perfectly. Can't wait for chapters to come. Fantastic writing. Happy Holidays.
Date: Dec 22, 2020 11:51 pm Title: The Princess and the Wannabe Prince...Who's Actually a Frog
Ooh this is going to be fun. Lindsay, her usual bitchy self finally meets someone who won't put up with her bullshit. Pampered and spoiled indeed.
Guess Brian is going to start showing his true colors now that Justin's on scene.
Michael, the leech as always. Wonder why that role always fits him to a T.
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2020 10:55 pm Title: The Princess and the Wannabe Prince...Who's Actually a Frog
Oh this will be good and different. Clever twist on this.
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2020 10:22 pm Title: The Princess and the Wannabe Prince...Who's Actually a Frog
Absolutely LOVE what you've done and where you've taken this!!! I want MORE - NOW!!!
I laughed so hard: "not a best friend who is batty grinding like a cat in heat on his hip every two seconds!”
OMG!! I can just see Michael doing that! LMAO!!!
I really would ike to see Justin slap that 'Perfect" face until it did a 180. Maybe she'd look like she was related to The Exorcist!
Michael makes me want to throw up!!!
Thank you so much for taking on this plot bunny!
Super Hugs,
Cathy â¤ï¸