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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2021 10:02 am Title: Written All Over His Face

I'm finally catching up on some reading tonight (4 AM) ... and was delighted to see something new from you.

You've picked an unique topic here. I like stories where Brian is 'dissected'. He is a fascinating subject. Many layers.

But that was one place where Brian could never hde his emotions. Case in point - the night he sent Justin away with his 'I don't do love' speech. The night he looked at him when Hotlanta was present... and even the subsequent night of eating the Jambalaya.

So yes, an unique topic, and one I hadn't seen explored.

And, as usual with you, flawless writing.

Thanks for the story, and I really hope you will grace us again soon.

Hugs, Cathy



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Honestly, I was inspired to write this story while rewatching the first season of "You" on Netflix... that's why it's in second person POV ;) Yes, Brian was never able to hide his emotions in his face, but unfortunately it seemed like Justin was often distracted by Brian's words and actions to really look for how Brian was feeling. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2021 8:45 pm Title: Written All Over His Face

A well written piece about a perfectly wonderful subject.



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Thanks!!

Reviewer: Kinneysbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2021 5:27 pm Title: Written All Over His Face

Thanks for sharing...... great story 



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Thanks!

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2021 4:30 pm Title: Written All Over His Face

So beautiful! I love how you perfectly described the different moods! Thanks so much for sharing!



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Glad you enjoyed it, thanks!

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2021 12:13 pm Title: Written All Over His Face

Oh that was so sweet I loved it thank you 



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Thanks!

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2021 9:59 am Title: Written All Over His Face

What a great story.  Fantastic writing.  Happy New Year.



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Thanks, you too!

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2021 9:52 am Title: Written All Over His Face

Justin knows Brian so much that his eyes tell him everything he needs to know. Thank you. This was perfect !



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2021 7:14 am Title: Written All Over His Face

I'm excited to see a new story from you! TAG



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Lorie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2021 6:53 am Title: Written All Over His Face

 

Nancy,

This was sweet. It is definitely how Justin sees Brian. He could always see beneath the surface.

~Lorie

 



Author's Response:

Yes, our boys usually didn't require many words to communicate :D

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2021 5:50 am Title: Written All Over His Face

This is a but different. Brian has readable eyes.

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Thanks!

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