[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2021 2:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter. Love your writing. Can't wait to see where the story goes. Fantastic writing.
Author's Response:
Hope you continue to enjoy it. Knowing I entertain people makes me happy.
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2021 6:09 am Title: Chapter 13
What an amazing account of the Holidays. Is Joan realizing that she's made a mistake. Will her sister get her life back. What will Kevin think when he finds out. Or will Craig realize that he made severe mistakes and deserves to be where he is.
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2021 4:14 am Title: Chapter 13
Maybe Joan is changing? Great writing.>>Cat
Date: Feb 12, 2021 1:19 am Title: Chapter 1
OK thank you, but is it mentioned in previous chapters? Also, really love your stuff.
Author's Response:
I think I mentioned them earlier but it was just this chapter when I said they weren't going to be there.
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2021 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 12
Loving this story.
I think I missed something; is there something in a previous chapter about Brian getting an email from the Mel & Lindz about not visting for Christmas? I have looked back several chapters and can't find it. If I missed it could you tell me which chapter, so I can catch up?
Thanks
Deb L.
Author's Response:
I didn't actually include the email. I just had Brian and Justin talk about it. I sometimes think I add too much detail while other times I feel like I should add more. The email was just infured.
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2021 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 12
Father Tom former Military Police. What a great idea. I am so enjoying this story. Great work!--Cat
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2021 2:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
Gus is melting Joan's heart. And everyone is pairing up. I love happy endings and I'm hoping that we get one here.
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2021 5:21 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh my. Is it wrong to hope they shot him? More>> Cat
Author's Response:
Last chapter is in the works.
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2021 1:40 am Title: Chapter 11
Thanksgiving looked to be really good until Tracy's ex showed up. Can't wait to find out what happened.
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2021 3:13 pm Title: Chapter 10
Thank goodness Justin is okay and going home. Thanksgiving was aptly named.
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2021 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
A short bit of angst. Hope things are smooth sailing now he's home. So love your stories. >>Cat
Author's Response:
I am so glad I can bring you some enjoyment.
Date: Feb 03, 2021 7:59 am Title: Chapter 9
OMG!
Author's Response:
I hope that is a good OMG!
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2021 3:25 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh my, what a cliff hanger. Glad they caught Len. Anxiously waiting for more.
Author's Response:
I try to do a couple chapters a week.
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2021 1:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
Well, a seizure. Crap. Least hes at hospital and they have it in custody.
Author's Response:
Trying to keep things exciting.
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2021 7:10 pm Title: Chapter 8
Joanie is one for making bad decisions isn't she? I worry about Justin, Len sounds dangerous. Father Tom looks to becoming part of the family. I like that.
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2021 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
What are you up to? I'm thinking faulty ventilation. Very good writing..
Author's Response:
Would I plan something like that in one of my stories?
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2021 3:16 am Title: Chapter 7
Now that is interesting. It's just like Joanie to take advantage of her sister's boyfriend. She obviously hasn't confessed that because it's unforgivable. So Brian's father is a father. LOL.
Date: Jan 24, 2021 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
Really good chapter. I like where this going.
Thanks
Deb L.
Author's Response:
The direction in my head has changed several times but I think now I have the main plot laid out.
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2021 8:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
Claire and Peter came to see Joan and it doesn't look as if they want her back. What if they stick her in her old house with a couple of day care workers and night sitters?
Author's Response:
I think Brian feels like he NEEDS her there now to get some answers but she won't stay much longer.
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2021 2:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
So a search for Brian's real father and Tracy needs to go.
Author's Response:
Lots to play with in this story.
Date: Jan 24, 2021 2:06 am Title: Chapter 5
Ok I'm reading and loving it.
This just struck me. Is "Joan" Anna Claire? "Anna Claire" in the nut house is the real Joan?
Author's Response:
At this point in the story I'm not sure what's going on. LOL
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2021 7:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
Now this is getting really interesting. Joanie has a twin sister. Did Jack have anything to do with Anna Claire ending up in a nut house?
Author's Response:
I'll never tell. Oh, wait, ya I'll tell by the end of the story.
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2021 1:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Curiouser and curiouser. May the past reveal.itself. 💕
Author's Response:
Gotta keep you wondering and coming back for more.
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2021 3:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
Justin is regretting letting Joanie come stay at their estate. Hopefully Joan will get a clue and change her way, especially if her daughter Claire refuses to have anything to do with her.
Author's Response:
Have to have excitement in the story. LOL