[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2022 2:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Aha, look at what I just got read? Even though it's 4 AM. Too many naps yesterday, now has me up at a weird time, but fairly headache free. I forget how wonderful no-headaches feel.
Anyway, regarding the story, for a time-change chapter, I was surprised, as nothng suggested that, but then I realized this is set during the day,not the night when it takes effect. DUH! I swear my head is just not right anymore.
This just shows how first impressions can always be perceived. Whether good (Justin) or bad (Bryce). A person never knows who's listening. And Jen would be very proud of him.
I almost have to wonder if Angela will be waiting outside for him in her car, to take Justin for that hot coffee and hot food.
Well, now we know how Justin's day went, I presume we'll hear Brian's, then both of them together.
Good first chapter. Congrats!
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Oops! No, it has nothing to do with day and night that you couldn't make the connection to the time change :D If you persevere, you'll find that connection in chapter 3.
Your idea about a chapter from Justin's POV, then Brian's, and then the two of them together is a good one, but I didn't even think of that. Three chapters happened because what was originally going to be a one-shot got too long and because I wanted to insert some of Justin's backstory. And it gave me a chance to connect the time change in the US with the change in Europe :)
I hope you like the direction I've taken with this story, even though it isn't what you anticipated. It might be fun to write more of Angela and Susan in future stories; a number of readers have liked both of them. I'll have to see if I can work them in again at some point.
I'm so glad you're finally experiencing some (mostly) headache-free moments :) Thanks for using one of them to leave a review <3
Hugs,
Karynn
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2022 10:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Very promising start!!! Susan and Angela might be interesting characters to build this NY chapter. Susan reminds me of Daphne.
Thanks :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the start :) I can't promise more of Susan and Angela, but funny that you should mention Daphne...
Thanks for commenting, Claire!
~ Karynn
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2022 6:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like this! You have put so.many directions this story can go in the first chapter. Keep the great work.up! >> Cat
Author's Response:
Thank you, Cat! :) It makes me happy that you like this story. You'll soon find out the direction for this entry in my Changing Time series :)
~ Karynn