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Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2022 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1- Late Night Calls

I just finish "alcoholic" and loved it! 

And I'm enjoying the sequel too!



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know.  I appreciate hearing form my readers.

Reviewer: Scarletkiss18 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2022 9:28 am Title: Chapter 1- Late Night Calls

I am really happy you decided to continue this story! Two excellent chapters !!!



Author's Response:

There were so many unfinished issues that I felt that I wanted to explore. I'm thrilled that my readers are still interested in their tale. Thank you for letting me know you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: nickknack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2022 1:11 am Title: Chapter 1- Late Night Calls

I see trouble ahead with Lindsay and Melanie, I'm sure they will do everything they can to cause interference in Brian's relationship with Gus... They definitely won't put Gus's needs ahead of their own selfish ones. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Next chapter is now posted.  Mel and Linds have a view of Brian and when that doesn't fit their vision, they balk.  I hope you enjoy this story as much as the last one.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2022 10:01 am Title: Chapter 1- Late Night Calls

I am so happy you have started this story, I was left literally screaming into space when the last story finished. There was so much more to uncover. Not only Brian and Justin's relationship but his relationship with the girls and Gus.

We all need a Cleo in our life. While I thought it strange at first what Cleo recommended, it actually makes sense for someone like Brian. He's never dated before so needs to know what to prepare himself for. Like will he start drinking if they have a fight etc.

I really hope they at least move on to a little more than kissing soon, but I get why they're doing it and I agree :D

Author's Response:

I promise that there will be more than kissing in this story.  My family couldn't beleive that my readers read over 300K without even a kiss in the previous story.  I explained that the story was not about them as a couple, but really about the evolution of Brian.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2022 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 1- Late Night Calls

Thank you for starting the next part of this story :)

I love how Brian is opening up to his "new" friends (aka Ted and Emmett) and acknowledging his past behaviour towards them. Ted is subtle enough to not take offence.

I also love how Brian is dealing with his new sponsor and going with this new flow.

And the end!!! Take that Lindsay! I bet she will be fuming for a few hours.



Author's Response:

I really like using the characters of Cleo, Ted and Emmett for this story.  So few stories include them and they seem to fit my universe.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2022 2:50 pm Title: Chapter 1- Late Night Calls

Take that Lindsey! Mel can shush up too.she has a real problem.with men

 Great start! >>Cat



Author's Response:

Lindsey and Mel are very negative when it comes to Brian changing.  It is hard for them to accept that he might not really be the person they thought they knew.

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